Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 19, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-11480A Sense of Commitment to Activity on Facebook PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Michael, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Based on the review comments received from both reviewers, the Academic Editor feels that your manuscript could be reconsidered for publication provided you are willing to incorporate major revisions. While preparing your revised manuscript, you are advised to carefully consider the reviewers comments which are attached and submit a list of responses to the comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 30 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for considering me to review this manuscript (“A Sense of Commitment to Activity on Facebook”). The authors have drawn evidence to show that ‘’face-to-face dyadic interactions create a sense of commitment even in the absence of explicit agreements”, then posed an empirical question on whether such a social phenomenon is likely to occur when the interaction is impersonal as is in the case of online interactions. The authors have reported that those participants who often react by regularly commenting on others’ Facebook posts are more likely to develop a sense of commitment, that is, to feel obliged to insert “likes” in the social media posts. The authors interpreted that such positive comments on social media could lead to some of the traps of overindulgence in social media. The effect of social media in particular among the young population is increasingly coming to prominence due to the spike in poor mental health outcomes and to lack of vicissitudes in life among children and adolescents. Although the topic is "hot", the conceptualization of the study and its methodology appears to lack scientific vigour. In my reading, PLOS is known as having a policy stating that “papers are not to be excluded based on lack of perceived importance or adherence to a scientific field”. For these reasons, I proceeded to examine this manuscript, and some of the points on which the authors reflect are detailed below. TITLE #1). The title ("A Sense of Commitment to Activity on Facebook") must be extended to alert the reader to the approaches that were used to solicit the reported result. Is this a quasi-experimental design? Web-based observational paradigm? Vignette study? Something to color the title will boost the reader's interest. INTRODUCTION #2). As the authors have written the introduction as something akin to ‘blog’, I would encourage them to re-write the introduction. Lately, there has been criticism that many social science and psychological articles are not based on a certain theoretical framework (Front Psychol. 2021 Jan 28;12:609802. doi: 10.3389/fpsyg.2021.609802.). First of all, recognizing the work of Anthony L would also be critical. Burrow from Cornell University, Ithaca, NY, United States. Related to this is the theory known as sociometer theory [(Leary & Baumeister. The nature and function of self-esteem: Sociometer theory. In M.P. Zanna (Ed.), Advances in experimental social psychology, Academic Press, San Diego, CA, US (2000), pp. 1-62)]. Secondly, some theoretical background could be drawn from the authors' work on the phenomenology of mental effort/cost-benefit analysis (e.g. Review of Philosophy and Psychology (2021) 12:889–904. https://doi.org/10.1007/s13164-020-00512-7). Thirdly, I could see the entry into social psychology (for example group behavior and social learning theory) as another potential theoretical background for this manuscript. Relevant operant and classical conditioning as well as the role of neural mechanisms could also be brought forth to increase scholarship of the narrative in the introduction [e.g. Sherman, L. E., Payton, A. A., Hernandez, L. M., Greenfield, P. M., & Dapretto, M. (2016). The power of the ‘like’ in adolescence: Effects of peer influence on neural and behavioral responses to social media. Psychological Science, 27(7), 1027–1035. doi.org/10.1177/0956797616645673]. #3). At the end of the Introduction, the authors could alert the reader to the aims of the present study. The aims should reflect the contents of what was later described as ‘Experiment 1’, ‘Experiment 2’, ‘Experiment 3’, and ‘Experiment 4’. Also, there are conceptual issues for the authors to consider: Perhaps ‘COMMENTS’ would have a different intention than ‘likes’ as the former is more ‘active’ and can include opinion, question, praise, etc. May require further clarity in the introduction. METHOD #4). With the popularity of social media, it is not clear why the authors only accrue a relatively small sample size in a quantitative study. This has led to reliance on non-parametric and descriptive statistics which, in turn, has reduced the methodological robustness. #5). The rationale for sticking to this particular age group (ages of 18 and 59) should be described. The majority of the literature suggests, though there is an exception, that social media is dominated by teens and young adults. #6). It would be better if the Method and Results are separated. This would require a detailed and succinct method section. The different studies could be narrated with different aims and the accompanying vignettes (see comments #9 and #11). #7). This sentence (“The experiment was conducted in accordance with the Declaration of Helsinki and was approved by the (EPKEB) United Ethical Review Board for Research in Psychology”) should have a subheading. Suggestion: “Ethical approval”. #8). Please spell out ‘EPKEB’ #9). The outcome measures (“The test questions”) have cropped up in the write-up without the reader being given rationales for their inclusion. Did we do the internal validity of the test questions? #10). Various studies have examined the moderator, predictors, or factors associated with positive social media feedback. Why are no other outcome measures included in the present study (e.g.. Self-esteem, mood, cognition, temperaments). RESULTS #11). As suggested above (comment #3), the result should have subheadings, say, for Experiment 1, Experiment 2, Experiment 3, and Experiment 2. Alternatively, these experiments should have been stated in terms of the aims. In the result section, there should be subheadings for each aim. #12). As mentioned above, the method and the result could be separated. DISCUSSION #13). I believe that the authors have neglected many studies in the literature. The Discussion could be recapitulated within the existing research on “likes” on social media (See comments #2 and #14). #14). The bulk of the cited papers has examined the relationship between social media usage and sleep, mental health problems, “addiction”, personality characteristics, cognitive status, self-esteem, subjective happiness self-perception, and academic motivation. While this literature points out the implication of the overuse of social media, the present study examines whether “likes” breed more “likes”. The literature should focus on the latter rather than the former. #15). It is worthwhile to note that some social media outlets in Canada, Ireland, Italy, Japan, Brazil, Australia, and New Zealand have started to hide “likes”. This should be mentioned in the literature as a potential confounder that warrants a discussion as well as one of the potential limitations of the present study. This, in turn, would suggest that the participants were skewed toward the particular geographic area where “likes” are allowed. #16). Studies are showing a significant difference when one has an option to comment ‘anonymously’ than otherwise. This could reduce ‘anticipation’. This may require comment in the manuscript. REFERENCES #17). The authors have employed 35 references. As detailed above, some of these could change and more relevant studies could be cited. Some of them are shown below. Burrow, A. L., & Rainone, N. (2016). How many likes did I get?: Purpose moderates links between positive social media feedback and self-esteem. Journal of Experimental Social Psychology, 69, 232-236, doi.org/10.1016/j.jesp.2016.09.005. Sherman, L. E., Payton, A. A., Hernandez, L. M., Greenfield, P. M., & Dapretto, M. (2016). The power of the like in adolescence: Effects of peer influence on neural and behavioral responses to social media. Psychological Science, 27(7), 1027–1035. doi.org/10.1177/0956797616645673. Tiggemann M, Hayden S, Brown Z, Veldhuis J. The effect of Instagram “likes” on women’s social comparison and body dissatisfaction. Body image. 2018 Sep 1;26:90-7. Sherman LE, Hernandez LM, Greenfield PM, Dapretto M. What the brain ‘Likes’: neural correlates of providing feedback on social media. Social cognitive and affective neuroscience. 2018 Sep; 13(7): 699-707. Reviewer #2: Dear Author, The topic of the research is actual and interesting. The development of four different experiments allows to investigate thoroughly the topic. Methods and results are rigorous and well-described. 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A Sense of Commitment to Activity on Facebook:Evidence from a web-based paradigm PONE-D-22-11480R1 Dear Dr. Michael, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The esteemed authors have ‘labored’ extensively to accommodate and sometimes rebut my comments. The authors' vigilance paid off. The manuscript has significantly improved both in terms of the conceptual issue as well as the scientific merit. In this regard, I have no other comments. I feel the manuscript could be accepted for publication. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Samir Al-Adawi Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-11480R1 A Sense of Commitment to Activity on Facebook: Evidence from a web-based paradigm Dear Dr. Michael: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Rano Mal Piryani Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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