Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 18, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-01716Effectiveness and safety of acupuncture for postoperative ileus following gastrointestinal surgery: A systematic review and meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Based on PLOS ONE’s publication criteria this manuscript can be improved according to suggestions of reviewers reported below. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 02 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript – I have found the topic interesting and important to the field of gastrointestinal surgery. A systematic review and meta-analysis of the impact of acupuncture for post-operative ileus (POI). The authors tackle a major challenge in gastrointestinal surgery. The systematic review and meta-analysis are rigorous and adhere to recognised checklists for this research type. The authors correctly state the current literature, involving several meta-analysis with conflicting evidence. The paper presented is an update to existing literature from recent years, limiting the significance of its findings. Please consider the following comments. 1. The authors describe their methodology in detail and outline the inclusion criteria. Please could the authors state why only RCTs were included and non-randomised trials were not considered for inclusion. 2. The methods also describe the search strategy, please could the authors state if expert support was sought to define the search strategy, such as from an information specialist. 3. The authors correctly investigate risk of bias across all studies. Several RCTs included are reported to have high risk of bias components or unclear risk of bias. Please could the authors further define how this was accounted for in the meta-analysis. Reviewer #2: The article describes an important and actual gastrointenstinal complication, dealing with the surgical manipulation of the bowel and tries to highlight the role of the acupuncture as an integrative therapy to treat and reduce this condition. Title and abstract are appropriate for the content of the article: the abstract summarize accurately the key-points. It’s well known that gastrointenstinal surgery can induce a transient paralysis of intestinal motility, called POI (post-operative ileus), which is accompanied by abdominal symptoms, general discomfort of the patient, long hospitalization and increased costs. Etiology of POI is multifactorial and its related to surgery but also to the use of opioid analgesia, perioperative stress with the necessity of anxiolitic drugs, prolonged supine position with delayed ambulation. The approach to this complication is multidisciplinary and this is the aim of the article, suggesting the use of the acupuncture as a complementary approach. Acupunture is a very ancient technique of the Traditional Chinese Medicine; its role is to balance the flow of energy of the body, involving the insertion of thin needles through the patient’s skin in specific acupoints. Acupuncture is being used to relieve discomfort associated with a variety of diseases and conditions (chemotherapy-induced and postoperative nausea and vomiting; pain; stress and mood disorders; gynecologic, neurological, respiratory and gastrointestinal disorders; for the overall wellness). The benefits of acupuncture are sometimes difficult to measure, so in this article its efficacy is related to time to first flatus (TFF) and time to first defecation (TFD) as primary outcomes, and to time to bowel sounds recovery (TBSR) and length of hospital stay (LOS) as secondary outcomes compared to usual care. In my opinion this article lacks of explanation of what really means usual care in this particular clinical condition. There is only an hint in the “Introduction” (lines 76-78) of potential treatments to reduce the occurrence of POI. However, data extraction process is well performed; figures, tables, data presentation and statistical analysis are clear to consult, complete and adeguate. In the paragraph “Acupoints combination” are mentioned two of the acupuncture’s basic method to treat, the combination of distal and proximal acupoints, but it’s not well explained what does it mean (does proximal mean closer to the gastro-intestinal district?) I think it’s important and more complete to point out the difference. The authors mention the prevalence of the use of ST36, but this is not explained why. ST 36 is one of the master point in Traditional Chinese Medicine, due to its efficacy and tropism for all gastro-intestinal disorders, that’s the reason why is so largely used. The authors can support the conclusions with the presented results, even if it’s clearly pointed out the limitation of the reviewed studies and the necessity of more studies. In conclusion, in my opinion this review is a valid consultation tool for the acupuncturist who wants to deepen the topic and orient the therapeutic technique. Reviewer #3: This systematic review and meta-analysis wanted to assess the effectiveness and safety of acupuncture for postoperative ileus in patients after gastrointestinal surgery. The report of this review followed the PRISMA statement and remained to be reported more clearly. 1.It proposed that the Table 1 should report more details, including course of treatment and a brief information of usual care in the control group. 2.For outcomes time to first flatus, time to first defecation and time to bowel sounds recovery, SMD was used as an effect size to synthesize data, which does not contribute to the understanding of the clinical importance of the difference. What is the rationale? 3.It suggests adding the description for any methods used to assess certainty in the body of evidence for some outcomes and their results. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-22-01716R1Effectiveness and safety of acupuncture for postoperative ileus following gastrointestinal surgery: A systematic review and meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. A revision of English writing is needed before acceptance. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 30 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Authors did reply thoroughly to reviewers' comments. Before the manuscript can be accepted a revision of English writing is required, for instance contracted forms should be avoided. Please resubmit a proof-read version of this article. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: The authors have responded appropriately to my comments. The revised manuscript sounds that followed the PRISMA statement well. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Effectiveness and safety of acupuncture for postoperative ileus following gastrointestinal surgery: A systematic review and meta-analysis PONE-D-22-01716R2 Dear Dr. Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sandro Pasquali, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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