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| Original SubmissionMarch 4, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-07160Implementation of the Community Assets Supporting Transitions (CAST) transitional care intervention for older adults with multimorbidity and depressive symptoms: A qualitative descriptive studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. McAiney, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have accepted the invitation to act as New Academic Editor as the original editor was no longer available. Considering the time the manuscript has spent in review, and the fact that the available review is very thorough, I have decided to invite you to revise the manuscript based on this review. I agree with the reviewer comments and recommend you address these comments in the revision. I added a few comments which need to be addressed with the revision. If you don't agree with a comment, please provide a justification in the response to reviewer comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 04 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Anja K Leist, Professor Dr. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): While I understand that the focus of this study is the implementation of the intervention among professionals, stakeholders and the community at large, the missing perspective of the care recipients needs to be presented and justified already in the introduction. I would suggest to restructure the introduction to more focus on implementation issues instead of focusing on the care recipients. I agree with the review to also present some descriptive statistics (age, nature and/or number of chronic conditions) on the target or actual population. Were there any inclusion or exclusion criteria to be enrolled in the intervention? The methods section mentions that the intervention was tested in a randomized controlled trial, but I didn't see any details on how the care recipients were assigned to intervention or control arm, and any comparison between intervention and control group. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: INTRODUCTION: Ensure that there is detail provided about the context for where the study occurred, defining key terms and the importance of this topic for older adults. Clarify and describe the type of intervention, such as is it an enhanced home care program and how it is similar to or different from home care in the province. line 113: “initiated a coordinated care with these individuals” should read “initiated a coordinated care plan” line 123: Be specific to describe what type of education (i.e., health, health services, self-management) METHODS: line 210 Participants: include the inclusion and exclusion criteria and move the description of the participants to the first part of the results. line 213: This paragraph is confusing. Please provide a table with details of CAB and CTC. line 325: Include a brief description about the target older adult population. 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Implementation of the Community Assets Supporting Transitions (CAST) transitional care intervention for older adults with multimorbidity and depressive symptoms: A qualitative descriptive study PONE-D-21-07160R1 Dear Dr. McAiney, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Anja K Leist, Professor Dr. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The reviewer and editor comments have been appropriately addressed. Additional revisions consolidating the results of the qualitative analyses and the more contextualised discussion have considerably improved the manuscript. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-07160R1 Implementation of the Community Assets Supporting Transitions (CAST) transitional care intervention for older adults with multimorbidity and depressive symptoms: A qualitative descriptive study Dear Dr. McAiney: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Dr. Anja K Leist Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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