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PONE-D-21-33443Association of parental characteristics and emotion regulation in children and adolescents with and without psychopathology: A case control studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fassot, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Based on the advice received, I am willing to consider a revised submission provided it includes major revisions directly addressing the concerns expressed by the reviewers (see below). However, there is no guarantee that a revised manuscript will be accepted for publication. When revising your manuscript, please consider all issues mentioned in the reviewers' comments carefully: please outline every change made in response to their comments and provide suitable rebuttals for any comments not addressed. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 20 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This in an interesting study reporting an investigation of correlates of reappraisal and suppression in healthy vs fragile children (i.e., with mental health issues). The authors looked for such correlates in parental mental health, parenting behaviors and emotion regulation strategies. I read this paper with interest and I think that it has potential. Below, I indicate a few suggestions that can help the authors to make a stronger contribution to the literature. Indeed, additional analyses could guide a more focused and robust discussion of the results. The Introduction is well written and does not need important revision, in my opinion. First of all, I noticed that recruited children ranged in age from 6 to 18 years old, so from school beginners to almost young adults. Such a wide age range constitutes an advantage if the authors are willing to control for age in the analyses or to make separate models according to age. Otherwise, it might constitute a limitation in itself, as interpretation of results can be biased. A similar consideration might apply to the composition of the clinical sample. The various diagnoses of children could be grouped in at least two major subgroups (one characterized by more marked difficulties in the internalizing area and the other by more marked difficulties in the externalizing area? just an idea). Otherwise it is difficult to be persuaded that parental variables have a similar effect in regulation strategies of such a heterogeneous sample. The authors may want to explore a bit more the pattern of relations among parent/child mental health, parenting behaviors and parent/child emotion regulation and try to understand how these variables are associated one to another. For example, Li and colleagues argued that fathers’ regulation might impact on child regulation through supportive behavior (complete ref: Li, D., Li, D., Wu, N., & Wang, Z. (2019). Intergenerational transmission of emotion regulation through parents' reactions to children's negative emotions: Tests of unique, actor, partner, and mediating effects. Children and Youth Services Review, 101, 113-122.) The authors provided an explanation for results that do not confirm their second hypothesis. However, I think that the authors should also make an effort in explaining why the data did not fully confirm their third hypothesis. Indeed, no significant predictors emerged for suppression. What kind of explanation can be provided? Again, maybe new analyses controlling for age will shed light on this, as the authors reported that Gunzenhauser et al. found that unsupportive parenting behavior led to suppression in young children. If the authors are going to repeat some of the analyses, another interesting possibility, in my opinion, is to use only mothers’ data. Indeed, many past studies found significant differences between mothers’ and fathers’ variables in affecting children’s outcomes. Therefore, since fathers constitute less than 15% of the sample, the authors could use only mothers’ data (or compare maternal and paternal data). Anyway, lower interest shown by fathers in researches concerning their children is consistently found in the literature and should be acknowledged once again. Two final points: 1) the authors did not mention gender differences: were there any? 2) the authors reported parental education and income level? was this just to describe the sample or can this info be used in the analyses (for example controlled for?). Minor points In my opinion, the use of the acronym “CS” to indicate “community sample” is not effective, as “clinical sample” shares the same initials.. Can the author think of an alternative acronym? Or, even better, two acronyms, one for clinical sample and one for community sample. This would help the reader. When describing the regression to predict reappraisal, towards the end, the authors write: “The third step including of parents’ mental health remained 334 significant, F(5, 133) = 3.29, p = .008.” However, I find this a bit misleading, as what needs to be highlighted here is that the factor entered in the third step, i.e. parental mental health, was not significant. Reviewer #2: The current study aimed at assessing any differences in emotion regulation in children with and without psychopathology and whether these difference were affected by their parents' emotion regulation strategies and reaction to their children's negative emotions. The study is well conducted and technically sound. However, I have some minor concerns that I would like to see addressed by the authors. Line 61: there is a missing A for “antecendent” Line 181: please put the percentage 29% between brackets Table 2/3: the tables are well done! It seems that there was only a statistical difference for age between the children, but what about the other sociodemographic variables? If there were no differences, then I kindly ask the authors to make it clear in the text, if there were any differences then I kindly ask the authors to add the results in the table and discuss the results in light of the results. Reaction of parents to the emotions of their children: The authors state that the questionnaire used to assess parents’ reaction to their children’s emotion has six subscales Emotion Focused, Problem Focused, Minimization, Punitive, Expressive Encouragement, and Distress Responses. However, only four seems to have been used: 2 for the supportive reaction (emotion focused and problem focused) and 2 for unsupportive reaction (minimization and punitive). So, I would like to ask the authors about the 2 remaining subscales Expressive encouragement and distress responses. Were they used? If not, why? Because it seems that these two could have been included in the supportive reaction factor and unsupportive reaction factor, respectively. Results, mental disorders and ER: the authors state that “Children in the CS used the ER reappraisal strategy more often than children in the clinical sample” and “Children in the clinical sample used suppression more often than children in the CS”. However, it was not clear from the materials section that the children completed the ERQ. Could they authors clarify this ambiguity? Line 330: I believe there is a typo. The table the authors are referring to is Table 5, however, I understood that table was a reference for the MANOVA analysis used to test Hypothesis 2. Maybe the table that the authors wanted to refer to was Table 6. Could the authors please clarify? Prediction of Children’s ER: since hierarchical regression analyses were used, I kindly ask the authors to add to both Table 6 and Table 7 the R2 and the change in R2 ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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