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Original SubmissionMarch 21, 2022
Decision Letter - Juha Tuukkanen, Editor

PONE-D-22-08357Zoledronic acid generates a spatiotemporal effect to attenuate osteoarthritis by inhibiting Wnt5a-mediated abnormal bone resorption in subchondral bonePLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Ding et al show that zoledronic acid can halt OA progression. They further provide interesting data on bone remodelling and especially on osteoclast activity during early OA. This data is very interesting and very important. In addition, authors claim that effects are mediated by inhibiting wnt5a signaling. Associated analyses are performed well but I find it slightly difficult that this is only focused on wnt5a, thus I see that part of the wording should be reconsidered so that made claims are aligned with results. In general, manuscript is well written and the study design is mostly appropriate. There are some major methodological issues that also have to be improved.

Major comments:

1. Wnt signaling is very important to bone physiology. Is seems to play role in bone development and mechanosensation. Furthermore, lorecivivint seems to be most potential to be accepted as first disease modifying osteoarthris drug. Lorecivivint also targets wnt signaling by inhibiting DYRK1A and CLK2. So how can you be sure that the halting effect for OA progression is mediated trough wnt5a signaling? Furthermore, I think last graph makes little sense. Thus, I would propose to make wnt5a as potential mechanism. For example, conclusion is ok but title indicates that it is wnt5a only. Furthermore, please see Wang, L., Fang, D., Xu, J. et al. Various pathways of zoledronic acid against osteoclasts and bone cancer metastasis: a brief review. BMC Cancer 20, 1059 (2020). https://doi.org/10.1186/s12885-020-07568-9

2. One big limitation of the current study is the young age of animals (juvenile OA) and this should be added in discussion.

3. Reference 19 cannot be correct. That is the editorial for the issue that introduced the grading system for human cartilage. Rats have specific grading system introduced few years later. Please correct. Gerwin N, Bendele AM, Glasson S, Carlson CS. The OARSI histopathology initiative - recommendations for histological assessments of osteoarthritis in the rat. Osteoarthritis Cartilage. 2010 Oct;18 Suppl 3:S24-34. doi: 10.1016/j.joca.2010.05.030. PMID: 20864021.

4. It is challenging to understand where bone morphometric analysis (microCT) has been conducted and it would be good to add explanatory visualization.

5. This data is important for the as typically OA animal models show bone loss and you have bone sclerosis at 12 weeks. However, it seems that the there is significant bone destruction in DMM group at 12 weeks and thus the BV/TV value alone is misleading. Please provide some cross-anatomy evaluation in addition to morphometric parameters.

6. In general N=3 is not sufficient for any statistical evaluation. Thus, the molecular biology part is also statistically weak. How come there is no deviation in controls in fig 6 F-I?

7. Please provide better quality (4 of the current ones are now yellow) and more (larger area) representative histological images in Fig 4 A.

8. Figure 8 aims to summarize the study but I find it weird. Please remove.

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9. Alltough manuscript is mainly well written there are some poorly written parts like OA induction and should be rewritten with appropriate English.

10. Please do not call bone morphometric parameters indexes and give the full name for all acronyms (CD – connective density?).

11. 250 µA is not intensity but tube current (10W). Please follow “Bouxsein, M.L., Boyd, S.K., Christiansen, B.A., Guldberg, R.E., Jepsen, K.J. and Müller, R. (2010), Guidelines for assessment of bone microstructure in rodents using micro–computed tomography. J Bone Miner Res, 25: 1468-1486. https://doi.org/10.1002/jbmr.141” when reporting microCT methods and results.

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Revision 1

Dear editor,

Thanks for the comments from you and peer reviewers about the manuscript (PONE-D-22-08357). I have consulted a large number of materials according to the references you provided, and carefully studied and analyzed your review comments. I think these comments are of great help to modify and improve the quality of my article. I have revised the manuscript according to these valuable opinions, and the following is my reply to the revised opinions.

I ensure that my manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. I provided the original uncropped and unadjusted images underlying all blot or gel results reported both in a submission’s figures and Supporting Information file described as “Details about some experiments”. I re-analyzed the data of qPCR and WB, and uploaded the updated data. All the original data can be queried in the following public database: https://doi.org/10.7910/DVN/ECQM07, Harvard Dataverse, V2. I used the PACE before submitting to check my figures and convert to the accepted formats.

1. “In the addition, for the ethics section, please describe the use of adequate analgesics after the surgery.”

Answer: Thanks for your opinion, I described the pain management of experimental animals as required in the ethics and OA induction sections.

Major comments:

1. “So how can you be sure that the halting effect for OA progression is mediated trough wnt5a signaling? Furthermore, I think last graph makes little sense. Thus, I would propose to make wnt5a as potential mechanism. For example, conclusion is ok but title indicates that it is wnt5a only. Furthermore, please see Wang, L., Fang, D., Xu, J. et al. a brief review. BMC Cancer 20, 1059 (2020). https://doi.org/10.1186/s12885-020-07568-9.”

Answer: Thanks for reviewer’s comments, which are consistent with my initial idea. I gained a great deal of useful information from the review provided by the reviewer. In the present study, a possible correlation between abnormal subchondral bone resorption and Wnt5a was found in the early stage of OA in rats, and this possible relationship was preliminarily proved by the in vitro experiment of the primary BMMs. Therefore, I agree with the reviewer that the results of this study can only preliminarily show that Wnt5a is a possible mechanism related to early abnormal subchondral bone absorption of OA, but cannot completely clarify the specific mechanism related to Wnt5a. According to the suggestions of reviewers, I seriously reconsidered and modified some words in the title, results and conclusion so that made claims are aligned with results. In fact, another study we conduct is in progress, which is about the possible mechanism of Wnt5a mediating intercellular crosstalk and regulating bone remodeling in the subchondral bone microenvironment at the early stage of OA, and I hope it can be accepted by the journal in the later submission.

2. “One big limitation of the current study is the young age of animals (juvenile OA) and this should be added in discussion.”

Answer: Thanks for reviewer’s comments. I agree with the reviewer's comments and add the discussion about this part in the manuscript. OA is a disease of adults, and growing animals, like children, seem to have a better capacity at managing joint damage. Moreover, in controlled experiments, the complexities of changing skeletal size and metabolism during growth can obscure how joints respond to injury and therapy. Thus, to obtain the most meaningful insights into human OA, it is essential to use skeletally mature animals whenever possible. There are many animal models that reproduce key aspects of human OA in terms of natural history, mechanisms, signs and symptoms. Yet, as not one animal model completely reproduces the signs and symptoms of human OA, we must remain mindful to use the most appropriate model to answer our scientific questions.

As for the age of the OA model, I referred to and agreed with the literature recommended by reviewer, suggesting that rats older than 12 weeks should be used to establish OA model to simulate the development of human OA as much as possible. The 8-week-old male rats were uniformly used in this study. Although the study period was 12 weeks after modeling, the 20-week-old rats also had the longest possible course of OA. The weight of the 8-20-week-old rats was relatively stable, consistent with the statistical significance of normal distribution, and the hormone and metabolism levels were stable. In this way, the influence of stress, hormone, metabolism and other factors on the results was avoided. Rats in this age range may have a more reasonable metabolism of positive control drugs (ZOL). As the age of old SD rats increases, the incidence of cartilage spontaneous cysts increases, which is not conducive to the study of OA. Young rats can shorten the decalcification time, but too young age may be a deficiency of this study, and the possible influence of age factor and rat tissue maturity on the results is not fully considered. We will improve this in the later study. Thanks to reviewers for their important suggestions and opinions.

3. “Reference 19 cannot be correct.”

Answer: Thanks for the reviewer's reminding, I corrected this mistake and modified the experimental method accordingly.

4. “It is challenging to understand where bone morphometric analysis (microCT) has been conducted and it would be good to add explanatory visualization.”

Answer: Thank you for your advice. As requested, I added and improved the explanatory visualization in the method about “Micro-computer tomography (CT) analysis” as following: A portion (0.5 mm below the growth plate and 1 mm in Height, 3.5 mm ventrodorsal length) of the load-bearing region at the medial tibial plateau was identified as the region of interest (ROI).

5. “However, it seems that the there is significant bone destruction in DMM group at 12 weeks and thus the BV/TV value alone is misleading. Please provide some cross-anatomy evaluation in addition to morphometric parameters.”

Answer: Thank you for your advice. In the revised manuscript, I provided the figures of Saffron O-fast green staining as required, which may be used as cross-anatomy evaluation. In addition, in our unpublished articles, general observation figures (SF.1) of rats’ knee joints at 4 and 8 weeks postoperative can be used as supporting documents as evidence of cross-anatomy evaluation.

Supplement figure 1. General observation of rats’ knee joints at 4 and 8 weeks postoperative.

Ideally, it will be possible to consider MRI and micro-CT as less invasive technologies for the gold standard of macroscopic and microscopic evaluation. However, due to limited conditions, our laboratory did not have micro-CT, and due to the impact of COVID-19, we could not transport live experimental animals to the laboratory in Shanghai for dynamic observation with micro-CT. Therefore, we had to take samples and fix the knee joints of rats at various time points. It is then sent to a micro-CT lab in Shanghai for testing. I described this in the discussion as one of the limitations of this study, and we will try our best to overcome this in the later study by using micro-CT to achieve non-invasive dynamic observation of the course of OA in rats. Thank you for your advice and understanding.

6.“In general N=3 is not sufficient for any statistical evaluation. Thus, the molecular biology part is also statistically weak. How come there is no deviation in controls in fig 7 F-I?”

Answer: Thank you for your advice and reminder. In fact, 18 male rats were randomly divided into 3 groups, and 3 of the 6 rats in each group were randomly selected for morphological and molecular biological detection respectively. It may be that we wrongly believed that 3 rats randomly selected from each group could represent the situation of each group, which also met the principle of "Reduction" in animal experiments and reduced the sample size of animal experiments to the minimum. This may not completely meet the statistical requirements, I will pay attention to and improve this point in the future, thank you for reminding.

No deviation in Figure 7 may be related to my mishandling of the data. I aimed to compare the difference between the DMM group and the ZOL group by the “fold of increase” in protein and mRNA compared with the sham group, and I wrongly quantified the level of the sham group as “1” in the three repeated experiments. I realized this error and represented the level of sham group in the three repeated experiments as the means ± standard deviation.

7. Please provide better quality (4 of the current ones are now yellow) and more (larger area) representative histological images in Fig 4 A.

Answer: Thank you for your advice and reminder. According to the requirements of reviewer, I improved and replaced all the figures by the “PACE”.

8. Figure 8 aims to summarize the study but I find it weird. Please remove.

Answer: Thank you for your advice and reminder. According to the requirements of reviewers, I removed the figure 8.

9. Although manuscript is mainly well written there are some poorly written parts like OA induction and should be rewritten with appropriate English.

Answer: Thank you for your advice and reminder. According to the requirements of reviewers, I rewritten and improved the “OA induction” with appropriate English according to the steps shown in the following Supplement figure 2.

Supplement figure 2: DMM induced OA in rats.

10. Please do not call bone morphometric parameters indexes and give the full name for all acronyms (CD – connective density?).

Answer: Thank you for your advice and reminder. I have referred to the literature you provided and modified the description of trabecular bone morphometry according to the guidelines involved in the literature (The following table 2).

11. “250 µA is not intensity but tube current (10W). Please follow”

Answer: Thank you for your advice and reminder. I have referred to the literature you provided and modified the description of key parameters for μCT scan acquisition following the guidelines involved in the literature (The following table 1).

Thanks again to the editors and reviewers for their comments, which are of great help to modify and improve the quality of my article.

Yours sincerely,

Corresponding author: Dong Ding

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Zoledronic acid generates a spatiotemporal effect to attenuate osteoarthritis by inhibiting potential Wnt5a-associated abnormal subchondral bone resorption

PONE-D-22-08357R1

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Reviewer #1: No

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Reviewer #1: The authors have revised the submitted manuscript. It seems that they have made the necessary changes.

In general, I hope that you provide author reply and author action with all of your future revisions. There is an author reply in this revision but the reviewer must search for possible changes in the manuscript. This is highly time-consuming and frustrating.

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PONE-D-22-08357R1

Zoledronic acid generates a spatiotemporal effect to attenuate osteoarthritis by inhibiting potential Wnt5a-associated abnormal subchondral bone resorption

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