Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 21, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-39960Assessment of coronary spasms with transluminal attenuation gradient in coronary computed tomography angiographyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. It was reviewed by three reviewer's and all agreed that the manuscript does not meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. While the reviewers felt that the focus of the manuscript was interesting, they differed widely on the study's methodologic soundness. If you believe that you can adequately address all of the reviewer's concerns we do invite you to submit a revised manuscript. The Editor is in agreement with the sentiment that the impact of the manuscript would be significantly improved by a more thorough analysis of spasm detected non-invasively by transluminal attenuation gradient to that detected by invasive provocative testing. Given the extensive changes that are recommended, please note that a revised manuscript may be sent to additional reviewers and there is no guarantee of final acceptance. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 26 2022 11:59PM. We realize that extensive revisions may require more time to complete. If this is the case, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript is a well conceived and executed extension of prior work on the topic of using TAG in CCTA. It provides a potential novel tool for measuring/evaluating coronary vasospasm on CCTA. Below are specific comments and recommendations for revision: 1. Relatively high “false positive VA” (8/57 excluded for fixed stenoses) and “false negative VA” (6/57 excluded for negative CCTA but positive conventional angiogram) in the initial study population. The patients with fixed stenoses are addressed as the second limitation of the study. Please address and account for the false negative patients. These findings suggest that there is significant clinical overlap within the variant chest pain population. 2. For institutions that perform only CCTA with vasodilator, vasospasm will likely go undiagnosed. Would you recommend adding baseline CT to all variant chest pain CCT protocols in order to help diagnose VA? 3. Because hypertension and smoking are so significantly correlated with positive vasospasm patients, is TAG more useful in that population? Please comment on this in the discussion. 4. Nondiagnostic coronary segments were manually removed from the analysis (i.e, due to motion or blooming artifact) Can you include details about how many times was this necessary? Were there any entirely nondiagnostic CCTA exams? 5. Who performed the CCTA analysis. Was it one or more than one radiologist? If more than one, were there are any discrepant results and how were those adjudicated. 6. In the discussion, do you mean: We observed that IV nitrate CT shows (?higher?) TAG and higher ProxHU values than baseline CT in all three major coronary arteries. Can you clarify? Reviewer #2: This is a very interesting paper with very good angiographic and CT correlation in patients with coronary vasospasm. I have only a few comments. Please see below. 1. Lines 71-75. I don't understand these sentences. I think the introduction warrants minor expansion to clarify the method of TAG measurement. Also, to explain the influence of vessel diameter on TAG measurement. 2. Line 140. Were beta blocker or calcium channel blockers used to lower heart rate for CT scans? Was there a difference in the use of these medications in the spasm and non spasm patients? Was the mean heart rate at the time of CT scan the same in both groups (with and without NTG?). 3. Line 121 and 122. I believe that the character "u" was omitted from the text. The text reads "10-20 g of ergonovine" and "nitroglycerin 100g". Perhaps simply use the abbreviation "ucg" or consult with the editorial staff regarding the use of greek characters. 4. Line 162. I assume that the analysis of TAG was terminated at the distal RCA prior to the bifurcation of the PDA and PLV branch. IF so, this should be clarified in the methods. 5. Line 185. I believe "distal levels" should be "distal vessels". 6. Line 188. I believe "ostium length" should be changed to "vessel length". 7. Line 266. Is there a minus sign missing from the baseline LAD TAG value? 8. Was there a difference in coronary dominance between spasm positive and spasm negative patients? 9. Figure 5. I believe these results are also reported in table 4. I would consider omitting table 4, and only use the figure. If you do this, you need to label the results of statistical analysis in the figure. 10. Figure 5. Panel B is incorrectly labeled as IV nitrate CT. 11. Figure 5. Panel C is incorrectly labeled as baseline CT. 12. Line 364, discussion. Please change "epithelial" to "endothelial". Reviewer #3: The non-invasive diagnosis of patients with vasospastic angina is a worthy goal. This manuscript describes the imaging features, mainly transluminal attenuation gradient (TAG) and contrast enhancement of the proximal ostium (ProxHU), using dual (before and after iv nitroglycerin) coronary CT angiography (CCTA) of 43 enrolled in the NAVIGATOR study who had a high likelihood of vasospastic angina. 24 of 43 subjects of enrolled subjects had vasospasm on provocative invasive angiography. Of the 72 major coronary vessels in these 24 subjects, 76% demonstrated diffuse spasm on CCTA while 26% had discrete spasm. As expected, TAG was numerically less negative (i.e. less steep) and ProxHU greater in major vessels after administration of iv NTG (Table 3). The difference in TAG between vessels with and without spasm was only significant on the baseline was in the left circumflex artery (which was affected least often by spam as indicated in Table 1) and the only difference in ProxHU was observed in LAD. Not unexpectedly, there were no difference in vessels with and without spam after iv NTG administration. Also not unexpectedly, diffuse spasm was associated with a more negative TAG and lower ProxHU than discrete spasm. The authors conclude that a relatively large percentage of coronary spasms present as diffuse and TAG significantly differed according to the morphological type of the coronary spasm. The concept of measuring TAG by CCTA before and after iv NRG administration to identify patients with vasospastic angina is intriguing and a potentially useful proposition. Unfortunately, the singularly descriptive and unsophisticated nature of the data presented in this manuscript does little to advance this aim. The authors have an opportunity to go well beyond that with their data set and determine if the change in TAG with iv NTG, both on a per patient and per vessel basis, correlates with vasospasm detected on the gold standard invasive provocative test. The impact of the manuscript would be far greater if they did. In addition, there are several other major criticisms of the manuscript. These include: 1. Subjects for this analysis were enrolled in the NAVIGATOR study but according to the references for that study, only 41 subjects with vasospastic angina were enrolled. The authors need to clarify the discrepancy with the reported 57 enrolled subjects. During what dates were subjects enrolled in the NAVIGATOR study? 2. The authors excluded 6 subjects with invasive evidence of vasospasm in whom the CCTA did not reveal spasm (false negative). This is a major source of bias, and these subjects should be included in the analysis. 3. Table 2 is incredibly confusing. I am assuming column 3 represents all vessels without and column 4 all vessels with spasm on CCTA. What one cannot tell from that table is how many vessels without spasm on invasive imaging had spasm on CCTA. If the goal of the table was to depict the proportion of spasm type (focal vs diffuse) in the specific arteries of patients with spasm detected by CCTA, a figure would likely be better. On a related note, what was the correlation spasm detected in the same arteries on invasive provocative testing and were the proportions of spasm type similar? 4. Table 3 shows mean TAG and ProxHU results and per vessel differences before and after iv NTG. Subjects with and without spasm on invasive testing are lumped together but would it not be more useful to determine if the change in each parameter with NTG is different between subjects with and without invasive evidence of spasm? 5. The information presented in Table 4 and Figure 4 are identical and therefore redundant. Furthermore, some of the same data is also presented in the text. 6. The manuscript would be greatly improved if the authors correlated TAG (or more specifically the change in TAG with iv NRG) to the gold standard invasive provocative testing. Calculation of sensitivity/specificity and positive/negative predictive value would help determine if measuring TAG (or ProxHU) by CCTA is a useful non-invasive method to diagnose vasospastic angina. Minor comments: 1. The authors need to better clarify what type vasospasm to which they are referring. The reader finds it hard to know if they are talking about spasm detected by invasive provocative testing of by CCTA. 2. There are several grammatical errors that should be remedied. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-21-39960R1Assessment of coronary spasms with transluminal attenuation gradient in coronary computed tomography angiographyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 23 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Ivana Isgum Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The manuscript has been reviewed by three experts. While all Reviewers recognize the potential value of the work, Reviewer 3 pointed out to important limitations that were not sufficiently addressed in the revision and that need to be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication. I would ask the authors to carefully respond all issues raised by R3 and R4. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: I Don't Know Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: As mentioned in my previous review, the non-invasive diagnosis of patients with vasospastic angina is a worthy goal. As the authors point out in the Introduction “there have been no studies on TAG in coronary spasm” and therefore a study that adequately explores it utility would be useful. The hypothesis underlying this study is that “TAG for CCTA may allow a higher diagnostic performance for coronary spasm than CCTA alone.” Unfortunately, persistent major flaws in this study preclude confirming or refuting that hypothesis. These include: 1. The authors excluded 6 subjects with invasive evidence of vasospasm in whom the CCTA did not reveal spasm (false negative). This is a major source of bias, and these subjects continue to be excluded by the authors in this revised manuscript. One cannot accurately assess the diagnostic performance of using CCTA with TAG compared to invasive coronary angiography by excluding these subjects. 2. In the places in text and their rebuttal, the Authors appear to shift the purpose of the manuscript and narrow it to a description of the imaging features of coronary spam on CCTA. Given that the performance of CCTA with TAG in diagnosing coronary vasospasm has not been validated against invasive coronary angiography, an analysis of the type of spasm (focal versus diffuse) in this highly selected population is of limited value in an of itself. Furthermore, if that really is the main purpose of this work, the authors need to compare the spasm on CCTA to that observed on coronary angiography, the goal standard. 3. The revised Table 3 snow shows the difference in group mean TAG and ProxHU results. A far more useful metric is the per subject differences that could potentially be able to identify subjects with vasospasm. Reviewer #4: The authors present an interesting study and have addressed the previously raised criticisms in a satisfactory manner. Two points remain: 1) I don't see an explicit statement that the data is made available. Please add this. 2) Please have the manuscript reviewed by a native speaker. There are still language issues. ********** 7. 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