Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 11, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-01014Pseudomonas aeruginosa clinical blood isolates display significant phenotypic variabilityPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gitai, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 23 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript titled “Pseudomonas aeruginosa clinical blood isolates display significant phenotypic variability” has been reviewed. While the study is important, there are substantial concern in the present form of the manuscript. Thus, the present manuscript should be revised. The manuscript background should be amended, the rationale of the present study, what gap evident in the literature, how the present study mitigates those gaps, what are the specific objectives are to be clearly mentioned. The authors mentioned that “We obtained 22 clinical blood isolates of P. aeruginosa from different patients from the Robert Wood Johnson Hospital to investigate variability amongst isolates from the same infection site” However, there are no specific details of the samples, The sample description should have proper details. Also, in the methodology, it is mentioned that “All strains were grown at 37 °C in liquid LB Miller (Difco) on a roller drum at 90 rpm.” Are you mentioning the isolates from the samples? No clear details. What are the controls for each assay? These are not clear. Also, the statistical analysis should mention in the results and discussion. No clear idea about this. The discussion should emphasize the novelty and uniqueness of the study. What gap mitigated in the literature also need mention, in comparison with latest papers. The authors mentioned that "There was no significant correlation between the strength of the three phenotypes across isolates, suggesting that they can be independently modulated"". But in the results and discussion it is not easily comprehendible. The author should look into it and revise the manuscript accordingly. Also, authors mentioned that “Our findings thus demonstrate that no one lab assayed phenotype of pyocyanin production, biofilm production, and twitching motility is necessary for a P. aeruginosa strain to cause blood stream infection and that additional factors may be needed to fully predict what strains will lead to specific human diseases” This is a major point according to this study. According to you, what are the probable reasons and causes, how the same enhances virulence of the organism? There should be separate discussion in these aspects in eth discussion section. Reviewer #2: This is an interesting paper that describes an important phenomenon that has been a focus of study within the Pseudomonas aeruginosa research community for a number of years now. Genotypic and phenotypic heterogeneity has been described for several clinically relevant niches, none more so than the lungs of patients with Cystic Fibrosis. The current study reports on the phenotypic and genotypic heterogeneity of isolates from blood samples taken from patients and it focuses on three key virulence phenotypes, namely biofilm, twitching and pyocyanin production. The paper is focused and well written. However, I have some questions relating to the experimental design and interpretation that should be dealt with by the authors. These relate to methodological queries, data availability and the scope of the introduction. Comments: The introduction should discuss more about the current state of the art with respect to phenotypic and genotypic heterogeneity with respect to microbial infections, and P. aeruginosa in particular. There are many important papers not cited and they would frame the current paper in a greater context were they to be so. Page 4, Line 74: Why would the authors expect a ‘stereotypical’ phenotypic response when all the evidence relating to infection in the lungs would suggest that phenotypic and genotypic heterogeneity is common? The interesting finding from this study is that the same applies to bloodstream isolates. Page 5, Line 95: Interesting that the bloodstream isolates were mucoid biofilms. Can the authors comment on the relevance of this? Page 6, Lines 113-117: Can the authors be sure that PYO levels in the single isolates reflect the community in the bloodstream? If as they suggest there is significant heterogeneity, then multiple isolates from the same patients and same patient samples would be needed to determine whether or not PYO production was relevant to successful infection. I am not sure the data presented here is sufficient to make this assumption based on a single isolate, albeit from multiple patients. I also have questions relating to the measurement of PYO which I outline below. I am not familiar with this measurement methodology. Page 7, Lines 154-157: Why would the authors expect the three phenotypes to co-vary? Are they regulated through common systems, is there previous data in the literature to suggest co-variation is likely? Page 9, Lines193-204: The clustering described in the text is not reflective of what I see in the corresponding figure. Several strains described as clustering with PA14 do not (e.g. RWJ12 and RWJ14), it appears the text describes a different phylogenetic tree? Page 12, Lines251-253: Can the authors clarify the issues with quality of the genomic assembly scaffolds? If there are issues, how do these impact on the robustness of the data presented? Page 13, Line 284: Analysis of………… Figure 1: Have the authors performed statistical analysis on these data and can they show which changes are statistically relevant? Genome sequencing: Have the authors submitted their genomic data to the e.g. SRA database or other accessible system? Genome comparison data: Gray boxes indicate that the gene was not found in the scaffolds of the strain and could indicate a loss of the gene or be the result of incomplete assembly of contigs. On this basis can the authors really infer any constructive insight from the analysis, given that the majority of genes were either present or at the end of a contig? Where differences exist, this could be a limitation to the data available? Also, given the comments relating to how regulation could be a factor rather than gene presence/absence, have the authors looked at the promoter regions upstream of the genes studied? Figure S1: Perhaps I misinterpret the data here but why would PAO1 and PA14 have gray boxes for the phzA-G genes? Pyocyanin assay: Can the authors provide a reference for the methods used for PYO quantification? The standard assay for pyocyanin analysis would be organic extraction in chloroform followed by 0.2 N HCl. Here the authors have used direct spectrophotometric analysis of the supernatant, which would contain more than one phenazine compound? Is there a reason the organic extraction was not performed, and can the authors clarify that their methodology detects PYO specifically? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Pseudomonas aeruginosa clinical blood isolates display significant phenotypic variability PONE-D-22-01014R1 Dear Dr. Gitai, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have carefully considered all points made in the initial peer review, have provided a rational and coherent response to all points made, and have revised the manuscript accordingly. I just have two points to complete the review: Firstly, the comment on mucoidy of blood isolates refers to the fact that mucoid Pa strains are often an indication of a chronic persistent infection. One would imagine that the blood stream isolates would typically be more associated with an acute infection and therefore would not typically possess the mucoid phenotype. An interesting observation that does not need to be addressed, just a point of note. Secondly, the authors provide some good evidence for the PYO measurements, and the increased PYO levels in PA14 compared to PAO1 appear to support their methodology. It would be good for the authors to consider a methods paper that validates their detection method using (i) PYO (commercially available) and/or (ii) extracts from Pa isolates. Their methodology would enable a higher throughput analysis of PYO production in Pa, but further validation would be needed to justify its adoption as a core method. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-01014R1 Pseudomonas aeruginosa clinical blood isolates display significant phenotypic variability Dear Dr. Gitai: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Chih-Horng Kuo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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