Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 12, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-01070Reviving the sound of a 150-year-old insect: the bioacoustics of Prophalangopsis obscura (Ensifera: Hagloidea)PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Montealegre-Z, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers appreciate the application of the techniques to museum specimens but had some minor points they would like you to address. It isn't necessary to address the issue of novelty for this journal, but it would be good to use controls or a discussion to address the issue of changing wing properties due to desiccation. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 07 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General: The authors model singing properties of a relict ensiferan Prophalangopsis obscura based on the preserved holotype specimen. They describe the properties of the stridulatory file and, using LDV, the resonant properties of the forewing, then reconstruct the species’ calling song using these data. P. obscura is an interesting study object, as it is one of the few extant hagloid species and represents a presumably early form even within this taxon, thus providing an evolutionarily basal snapshot of Ensifera in general. Using relatively recent methods such as LDV on a specimen that has been conserved over a century could facilitate further investigation of museum specimens of rare or extinct species. However, any control for the effect of drying on wing resonant properties are missing and likely can easily be added – though not of Prophalangopsis obscura. Yet, the results are not very surprising. Quite similar experiments with closely related species have been previously published, partly by some of the authors themselves, which they also refer to (e.g. [21] Chivers et al. 2017, compare fig. 4 with fig. 4 of the current study). Therefore, the main novelty of the current manuscript lies in being the first to use LDV in a single conserved specimen instead of a living/fresh one. For making the data more valuable one needs some kind of control for the effects of wing desiccation. Reconstructing the song from the morphological and model data is a nice add-on. It would gain much value if a live male specimen were found (it seems that there might be living individuals in China). Line 29: “…the bioacoustics of the orthopteran Prophalangopsis obscura are investigated.” Acoustics is treated as singular only when referring to the field of research in general. Lines 35-36: The frequency range of extinct species is only reconstructed using similar models. Therefore, any comparison is confounded by the method itself. Lines 72-74: The authors should mention the relatively recent discovery of possibly new specimens – even if only females; the relevant study is cited in the next sentence, but for a different reason altogether ([14] Liu et al. 2009). Line 82: Bethoux (2012; ref. 13) in his Pl. 1CD in the appendix shows the results of exactly the same analysis – and the figure is basically identical to Fig. 2 in this manuscript. Therefore, it is not clear why you made this same effort a second time. Line 83: The part after the semicolon is not a full sentence. Line 96: The description of two females from China (caught 2005) by Liu et al. (2009) as Prophalangopsis obscura should be mentioned here. Even though one may claim that without a described male species identity is not demonstrated, these females in any case would belong to a very close relative. Lines 120-121: see comment to line 82: Bethoux did not just define conventions but shows an identical reconstruction. Lines 158-159: One could shortly mention the relevant arguments for that for the reader’s ease. Paragraph 188 – 198: Measuring resonances of a completely dry wing is not what usually is done. The potential effects are not really discussed. While it obviously is not possible to make controls with P. obscura, one could rather easily make a kind of control with a long-winged bush cricket like Mecopoda elongata, which is reared in many labs. Also this species has low frequency components in its song and seeing whether and how the wing changes its resonances after drying would support (or contradict) arguments that the effect is rather minor. If you prefer a species with pure tone, then use a cricket like Gryllus or Teleogryllus. See your own discussion in lines 267-270. Lines 221-222: already detailed in Methods. Lines 261-262: That the LW is damaged is quite unfortunate, since usually the LW gave a better prediction than the RW ([7] Montealegre-Z et al. 2017). One should at least mention this here, since peak frequencies of LW and RW differ clearly. That RW resonance fits better to the expectations alone is a risky argument. Line 280: If your sentence is true, it means that you question whether the species described by Liu et al. (2009) is even a prophalangopsid. Is that what you want to say? What are your arguments? Lines 291-294: Solely relying on the “objective similarities between the external foretibial ear” without data is too speculative to suggest any functional similarities. Especially as it is not even clear which similarities the authors are referring to. Many bush cricket ears with open tympana look similar. The whole paragraph from line 284 on is rather general and speculative and should be shortened and merged with the following paragraph which mentions what is most desirable to get a better picture: find males of the females described from China. Fig. 1: Consider using higher resolution photos. Fig. 2: see above; identical to Bethoux (2012) Pl. 1CD; therefore, delimiting mirror, harp (and pre-mirror, if wished) in the wing in Fig. 4D (which could be shown larger in the foto) would be sufficient. Fig. 2 could go to supplementary materials. Reviewer #2: This interesting MS reconstruct the sound of a rare and possibly extinct ensiferan by anatomical and biophysical measurements and models of the sound producing structures, finding that the call frequency fundamental is around 4.5 kHz. I think this is a well-conducted experiment and only have a few minor suggestions. I suggest that you state the size of the animal somewhere in the text, although the reader can measure if from figure 1. l. 146-148: I was a bit confused by this description: are you stating that the species here does not have a clearly defined mirror (although it is shown as a fairly well-defined area on fig 2) - btw you have not really defined what the mirror is at this stage in the MS. l. 296-297: I think this sentence is unclear, suggest to rephrase as: 'allowing it to retain the Jurassic form even after the emergence of bats' l. 302-304: The call frequency seems to be similar to the frequency of crickets, and it is also roughly the same size - are there similarities in lifestyles? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Reviving the sound of a 150-year-old insect: the bioacoustics of Prophalangopsis obscura (Ensifera: Hagloidea) PONE-D-22-01070R1 Dear Dr. Montealegre-Z, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for addressing all our comments and concerns adequately and explaining all the subjects in detail! Reviewer #2: I think the authors have responded adequately to the suggestions by me and the other referee. Just one minor clarification: Methods, l 103 states that: 'The right foretibia, which contains the tympanic ear, remains intact' suggest to change to: 'The right foretibia, which contains the right tympanic ear, remains intact' ********** 7. 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PONE-D-22-01070R1 Reviving the sound of a 150-year-old insect: the bioacoustics of Prophalangopsis obscura (Ensifera: Hagloidea) Dear Dr. Montealegre-Z: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Vivek Nityananda Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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