Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 13, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-12225 Video Meeting Signals: A randomised controlled trial of a technique to improve the experience of video conferencing PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Richardson, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. It is requested to (see the enclosed comments): -provide further details about VMS i.e. about the selection of gestures presented in figure1; -describe the theoretical reference model adopted for the controlled trial to test efficacy of VMS; -clarify how the themes included in the survey (group affiliation, the learning outcomes of that seminar and the mechanics of the seminar interaction) were selected; -clarify all variables of the trial: the manipulated/independent variable (e.g. VMS training or not), controlled variables, dependent variables (e.g. themes included in the survey); -describe how were constructed the scales used for measurements of the themes; - justify the apparent lack of a proper control condition; - clarify if either group used the "emoticons" and/or the VMS gestures; - specify if the authors also looked at the text-chat during the session and if this is included in the lexical analysis. Moreover, a careful revision of the manuscript format is requested to improve the readability: the order of the sections of the manuscript ( e.g. Introduction, Method , Results, Discussion, Conclusions), the reference format as required by the journal. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 27 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Filomena Papa Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The manuscript needs some clarifications. More details about how the VMS gestures were selected should be provided to the readers.The theoretical reference model adopted in the design the controlled trial and the criteria adopted for selection of the themes included in the survey (group affiliation, the learning outcomes of that seminar and the mechanics of the seminar interaction) need to be described including the appropriate references. The controlled trial design needs to be clarified identifying all trial variables: the manipulated/independent variable (e.g. VMS training or not), controlled variables, dependent variables (e.g. themes included in the survey). The procedure used for construction of scales used for measurement of the themes has to be described mentioning the relevant references. 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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the manuscript, "Video Meeting Signals: A Randomized Control Trial of a Technique to Improve the Experience of Video Conferencing," the authors trained a group of participants on the VMS(tm) system or provided no training. Participants assigned to the VMS group learned a set of (9) gestures to implement during their online Zoom classes. Participants interactions were annotated and transcribed in Zoom, and participants were asked to complete a post-seminar survey at the end of each class session. Survey questions were grouped into four themes (i.e., group affiliation, learning outcomes, personal experience, seminar mechanics). Two analyses were conducted (1) survey response data and (2) linguistic content from transcripts. Findings suggested that participants assigned to the VMS training had an overall better experience in the Zoom meeting that participants not assigned to the training group - both in the survey and more positively valanced language used in the transcript. Overall, the manuscript was easy to read, clear, and to the point. It seems, based on the results from the data, the VMS system has a positive impact on participant performance. As the authors suggest, they are not able to extrapolate why the VMS system works, but they argue that implementing this type of gestural system in video meetings might be very helpful. I am inclined to agree, but I have a few questions and suggestions for the authors to add to the manuscript to clarify the importance and impact of such a gestural system. Though the authors show clear differences in the two groups, it is not clear if either group used the "emoticons" and/or the VMS gestures. Is it possible for the authors to descriptively provide this data? Adding the frequency at which emoticons are used in the Zoom session and the rate at which gestures naturally (and post-training) occurred in either setting is also needed to fully understand the impact of the training. Also, did the authors also look at the text-chat during the session and is this included in the lexical analysis? The finding is simple and preliminary, but I appreciate the authors mention of this, as to not oversell the product. Other than the request for extra detail on the use of the emoticons and gestures, I have no major concerns for the manuscript. Reviewer #2: The manuscript reports a study in which over 100 students were trained with gestural signals for use in online seminar sessions taking place over two consecutive weeks. The students then completed several questionnaires evaluating the rapport with their seminar group, their personal experience, learning outcomes, the mechanics if their interactions, as well as the valence of utterances they made during the interactions. The group was compared on these measures to a group that did not receive the gestural signaling training. The measures showed that the group who received the training scored higher on the questionnaire measures and that the valence of their utterances were more positive. The reported study addresses a research question of great significance in current times, namely how online/video-communication platforms like Zoom can be improved to allow for more effective and pleasant interactions. There are several things I like about this study, but also some points that give me concern. Positive points are the number of participants, which is a decent sample size for meaningful analyses of psychometric/social questionnaire measures. Also positive is the use of advanced statistics, including Bayesian techniques. The manuscript is clearly written and easy to read. My main point of concern is the apparent lack of a proper control condition. Unless I missed it or misunderstood, it sounds like the control group just received no treatment at all. If this is indeed the case, then any effects measured may be attributable to a pure placebo effect. Such an effect could emerge from the control group’s knowledge that they did receive some form of training that was meant to influence interactions, or even simply because they had experienced an additional, in-depth social interaction session for the training. The question is if the control group had received some other treatment that also involved 60 minutes of in-depth social interaction but with a focus on practicing something entirely different, would the same effects have been observed? Or, even if something different had been taught that was introduced as meaning to benefit interaction (e.g. how to best set the camera angle and sound levels, adjust background etc. to allegedly make interaction most effective), would this have had a comparable effect? Without a proper control treatment, it isn’t possible to attribute the effects found to the effectiveness of gesture training per se. Unfortunately, this makes it very difficult to draw meaningful conclusions from this study that are specific to the benefit of the VSM training (over and above any other in-depth group interaction). If the authors disagree I’d be interested to hear their arguments. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-21-12225R1 Video Meeting Signals: Experimental evidence for a technique to improve the experience of video conferencing PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Richardson, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. It is requested to revise the manuscript according to Reviewer 2's comments (see after). Please submit your revised manuscript by May 09 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Filomena Papa Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The manuscript improved a lot after revision due to the inclusion of Experiment 2. Carefully revise the manuscript to correct typos (for instance on page 5 substitute "Statistical analyses:" with "Statistical analyses"). [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I feel that the authors have more than satisfactorily responded to my comments, and the comments of the other reviewer. Reviewer #2: I have read the revised manuscript and think the authors have done a great job at addressing the different concerns raised. I am particularly pleased with them including Experiment 2, which indeed does address my main concern. I have two final requests though: 1) For experiment 2, rather than referring to the SMs, please include the full model specifications into the statistical analysis section, as was done for Experiment 1. The statistical model applied is a core part of the study and therefore should not be ‘hidden’ in the SMs/more effortful to consult than any of the other details. 2) One thing I am really missing regarding both experiments is an overview of how much people actually made use of the signals (i.e. gestures and emojis). This is important, because it gives insight into whether the effects are purely down to having the opportunity to draw on the respective signals, or whether actually using them plays a role (I am sure they made good use of them, but the reader should be able to validate this). I don’t expect the authors to add much here in terms of analysis, but summary statistics (e.g., means, sd, min max values) for the different conditions and a comparison between them, minimally, should be included to allow the reader to fully evaluate the findings (especially the difference between the emoji and gesture effects….which in theory could be due to a difference in how much people used the emojis versus the gestures). Editorial details: Except for in the headings/titles, the font is too small in figures 2 and 4. Typos: p. 13: Post discussion survey responses were reversed-scored where necessary and normalised within each item. --> reverse-scored p. 15 The only difference was that the signal was as emoji rather than a hand gesture. --> an emoji p. 15: There were also more positive utterances in the control groups than either of the trainman groups. --> training? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. 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Video Meeting Signals: Experimental evidence for a technique to improve the experience of video conferencing PONE-D-21-12225R2 Dear Dr. Richardson, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Emily Chenette Editor in Chief PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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