Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 12, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-07436Characterization of a mutant lacking a phage-derived gene region from Treponema denticola ATCC 35405PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nagano, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. It will be fine to keep your data and discussions of dentilisin and bacterial length. Please ensure that your decision is justified on PLOS ONE’s publication criteria and not, for example, on novelty or perceived impact. For Lab, Study and Registered Report Protocols: These article types are not expected to include results but may include pilot data. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 04 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript reports on characterization of a spontaneous mutant of Treponema denticola ATCC35405 that appears to have resulted from multiple passages in culture. Genomic sequencing of the mutant strain is showed that it lost a 40-kb region that includes a prophage that was previously described by others, as well as portions of at least two other distally located genes. The mutant 35405 strain differed significantly from a lower-passage 35405 strain in total growth, motility and time-dependent adherence to epithelial cells. This manuscript is of interest specifically because it highlights the potential reliability risks of working with high-passage laboratory strains. However, due to the significant documented genomic differences between the two strains, it will likely be difficult to specifically determine the importance of each missing gene. There are several areas that should be improved, particularly in documentation and description of methodology. The absence of citation and discussion of previous work characterizing the T. denticola prophage is a serious omission that must be corrected. Specific comments: 1. Abstract, first line: The statement that T. denticola "is responsible for periodontal disease" is much too strong. 2. Line 43: "In contrast, T. denticola..." In contrast to what, specifically? 3. Motility assay, lines 98-100: Please provide an appropriate citation for video determination of rotation rate. 4. Line 147: There appears to be a typo here? "...visual field of 130^2 μm^2" 5. Genome analysis and Table 1: The authors must cite and discuss the report by Mitchell et al. (2010) (DOI 10.1099/mic.0.033654-0774 033654) that characterized the prophage region of the genome of T. denticola ATCC 35405 (TDE1133-TDE1173) and showed that T. denticola produced bacteriophage particles and a circularized bacteriophage genome. This is a major oversight that seriously detracts from the rigor of this manuscript. 6. Line 249: Please define "association number." 7. Fig. 3: To more accurately portray the differences in cell adherence of the two strains, it would be appropriate to include images taken after 3h incubation. The image shown (1h) is not "representative" of the differences discussed. 8. Lines 299-300: Please see comment #5 above regarding the T. denticola phage. 9. Lines 332-333: The two studies cited on the relationship between growth rate and flagellar gene expression in E. coli seem to come to conflicting conclusions. 10. Line 338: "strongly involved" is quite an overstatement here. Differences were observed, but the mechanisms involved were not determined in the cited study. Reviewer #2: The manuscript by Yokogawa et al. characterized a laboratory-evolved strain of the spirochete Treponema denticola (ATCC . The authors note that compared to the ancestral strain (called OG for original), the evolved strain (called MT for mutant) grew better in vitro (both liquid and solid media), had decreased motility, and displayed reduced adhesion to epithelial cells. The authors provide genomes for both the OG and MT strains, which represent a nice resource for the research community. I have some comments and clarifications for the authors to consider. 1. The authors previous work (Comparative analysis of motility and other properties of Treponema denticola strains, PMID: 27914958) suggests that T. denticola ATCC 35405 has low motility due to culture methods and the authors point this out here in lines 52-53: “In a previous study, we attributed the decrease in motility of ATCC 35405 to our culture method, which we developed using a novel commercially based medium.” In this study, the authors “report that the low motility strain derived from ATCC 35405 is a mutant lacking a possible phage-derived gene region from the original strain.” (lines 56-57). Does this warrant a correction be issued for the authors previous work? 2. How does incubating epithelial cells under anaerobic conditions for 3 hours affect their viability and how might this affect the bacterial adhesion results? Additional experiments are not necessary, but this caveat should be pointed out to readers. 3. Was the RNAseq data uploaded to GenBank? If not, it should be. Also, the authors should include the RNAseq analysis as a supplementary table that shows stats, names, fold change etc. for all genes. 4. The authors suggest that the prophage may have been excised from the chromosome. In the OG strain, are there direct repeats flanking the deleted prophage and is one of these repeats present in the MT strain? If so, this would indicate natural excision of the prophage. If the repeat is missing in the MT strain (i.e., the att site is gone), then the prophage would not be able to re-integrate back into the chromosome and may help explain the loss of this region. 5. The methods indicate electron microscopy was performed. I would love to see some representative images included in a resubmission. Did these images show periplasmic flagella in both strains? The presence/absence of flagella would be useful to know in light of the motility and epithelial cell adhesion data the authors present. 6. Line 147: Please remove the first superscript: 130^2 cm^2. 7. Line 267: “MT showed statistically significantly higher and lower transcriptional activity…(Table 5)” I do not see any statistics in Table 5. Can the authors please add these values? I prefer to visualize such data as a volcano plot, but this is only my personal preference. 8. Line 290: remove the “4” before the word discussion. 9. Line 294: “No other regions where phage-related genes accumulated were found…” I assume the authors used Illumina short-read sequencing (this should be clarified in the Methods). Mapping short-reads back to the ancestral reference genome would likely not pick up additional sequences not present in the reference genome. Thus, the authors cannot make this claim unless they performed long-read sequencing or did some other type of analysis using the reads that did not map back to the reference genome. Can the authors please clarify or remove this statement and other relevant discussion related to it? 10. Line 330: “Unfortunately, we did not clarify the genetic background leading to a decrease in motility of MT.” Did the authors look at SNPs, indels, and other types of mutations? These could potentially explain the loss of motility/other phenotypes. Reviewer #3: The finding that 35405 has lost segments of its genome is interesting and worth noting. However, the paper is compromised by its delivery and by the inclusion of weak or irrelevant data. The most significant finding appears to be the loss of phage but that is not discussed in the “discussion section”. The authors should talk about what is known regarding phage in T. denticola. The paper should be streamlined considerably. Did the genome sequencing identify any point mutations etc or were the only differences the deletions. Regarding the dentilisin assays and cell length analyses, there is no need to list the methods or show the data since there were no significant differences in these properties. In fact, it is not clear why dentilisin activity was looked at in the first place. In addition, there are no controls such as a dentilisin deficient strain (33521). The rationale for why each experiment was done should be discussed. The methods, associated tables and figures for cell length and dentilisin activity should be dropped. The information could be briefly mentioned in the text. The discussion about motility requires clarification – the authors need to consider both rotational and translational motility. They refer only to rotational motility but I think they mean translational. Also, is appears that motility was assessed with cells that had already reached the stationary phase. Hence some of the cells may be dead in the MT strain. If this is the case, then the assays are not valid. The term “pathogenic characters” needs to be rephrased The term “transcriptional activity” is incorrectly used. The authors seem to suggest that they are assessing the overall transcriptional activity of the cell but they only talk about select genes. It seems as though the transcriptional analyses are not be correctly assessed. There is presumably a lot of information in the RNA seq analyses that could be focused on. In addition, the differential expression of individual genes was not validated using an independent approach. It would also have been useful if they mentioned what kind of numbers they saw for the genes that were apparently deleted. Did the RNA seq yield the expected results for these genes. Are the colonies’ images presented in figure 2 from the sample plate or is that a merged image? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Characterization of a Treponema denticola ATCC 35405 mutant strain with mutation accumulation, including a lack of phage-derived genes PONE-D-22-07436R1 Dear Dr. Nagano, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Brian Stevenson, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-07436R1 Characterization of a Treponema denticola ATCC 35405 mutant strain with mutation accumulation, including a lack of phage-derived genes Dear Dr. Nagano: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Brian Stevenson Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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