Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 31, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-40997COVID-19 Time of Intubation Mortality Evaluation (C-TIME): A System for Predicting Mortality of Patients with COVID-19 Pneumonia at the Time They Require Mechanical Ventilation.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Raschke, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. You have developed and validated a promising mortality prediction system C-TIME in patients requiring intubation for COVID-19, which showed better discriminant accuracy compared with existed methods. The paper is well-written and you applied appropriate statistical methods. However, appropriate revisions and replies to reviewers’ comments are recommended before acceptance. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 25 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The introduction part needs to be expanded by adding more backgrounds and making the paragraph more logical. 2. Missing problem for predictors needs more clarification and details. 3. Some revisions are suggested to make reported results more rigorous. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Congratulations on the outstanding work. This paper suggests a simple and feasible method for predicting patient prognosis at time of intubation in Covid-19 related cases. Acessible variables have been used and a modest accuracy rate has been achieved, which makes the method reproducible and obtainable worldwide. It is intriguing that anticoagulation was associated with worst prognosis and that anti Xa inhibitors were associated with increased mortality, specially beacause other studies have demonstrated the importance of anticoagulation in critical patients admitted due to Covid-19. Reviewer #2: The authors developed and validated a mortality prediction system called CTIME (COVID-19 Time of Intubation Mortality Evaluation) for patients requiring intubation for COVID-19, which can be very useful in clinical application. I’m impressed by the well-written paper, especially the discussion part. Appropriate statistical methods are applied in this study, but there are substantial issues that need to be addressed for acceptance. Major: 1. Introduction section lists many drawbacks of current methods, but it lacks logit and is little bit short. Suggest to expand the introduction content, for example, consider to give more background about APACHE Iva and SOFA 2. Does the missingness problem only exist in PaO2/FiO2? If not, what’s the missing proportion of other candidate predictors? How do you handle their missingness? 3. I’m confused about the final numbers of participants in both model development and validation? Could the author clarify the final validation sample size used for C-TIME, APACHE Iva and SOFA, respectively, and if the numbers are different, could you explain why? Minor: 1. Abstract: when abbreviating the terms (APACHE Iva/ SOFA/ AUROC), suggest to use the full term the first time you use it, followed by abbreviations in parentheses. 2. Method, Study design: "We randomly split our cohort in half". Why splitting 2440 into 1221 and 1219 (Table 1), not 1220 and 1220? 3. Method, Data sources: suggest to briefly explain how APACHE Iva and SOFA calculates predicted hospital mortality. 4. Method, Study size: “We calculated that a sample size of 2500 patients would allow analysis of 25 candidate predictor variables in our logistic regression”. More details are needed. What are the parameters you used for this sample size estimation? 5. Method, Statistical Analysis: “AUROC compared using the Chi-squared statistic; Chi2 P<0.0001”, is this p-value for comparison among three methods or between two methods? 6. Table 1: suggest to add “Overall” column for all 2440 subjects description and “p-value” column for comparison between development and validation cohorts; “Admitted during surge/ Outcomes” missing “No. (%)”, and “Physical examination/ Pre-intubation hospital course” missing “median (IQR)”; “**” in “Creatinine/ Bilirubin/ratio/ Platelets”, forget any footnote? any missingness for variables described in Table 1? 7. Table 3: it seems predicted mortality probabilities from APACHE Iva and SOFA were much lower than predicted probabilities from C-TIME. It would be helpful if the author could give the distributions of the predicted probabilities of these three methods. (Not necessarily add in the results, but just to check the distribution and explain numbers in Table 3) 8. What’s the final sample size in sensitivity analysis? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Beatriz Martinelli Menezes Goncalves Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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COVID-19 Time of Intubation Mortality Evaluation (C-TIME): A System for Predicting Mortality of Patients with COVID-19 Pneumonia at the Time They Require Mechanical Ventilation. PONE-D-21-40997R1 Dear Dr. Raschke, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yuyan Wang, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for addressing all comments and submitting your revised paper. Nice work! Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-40997R1 COVID-19 Time of Intubation Mortality Evaluation (C-TIME): A System for Predicting Mortality of Patients with COVID-19 Pneumonia at the Time They Require Mechanical Ventilation. Dear Dr. Raschke: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Yuyan Wang Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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