Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 6, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-25104 Phototrophy and carbon fixation in Chlorobi postdate the rise of oxygen PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ward, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Dear Dr Ward, Thank you for your submission to Plos One. Two experts in the field have now reviewed your manuscript and they agree that it presents interesting new data and conclusions. Only minor revisions are required. Once those are completed, the manuscript should be ready for publication. Best wishes, Eva Stueeken ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by May 15 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Dear Dr Ward, Your manuscript has now been reviewed by two experts in the field. They find it compelling but identified a few minor points to address (see below). Please address these points in a revised version of the manuscript. Best wishes, Eva Stueeken [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present data suggesting the emergence of Chlorobi occurred more recently in Earth’s history, perhaps in disagreement with others that green sulfur bacteria could have been early evolving phototrophs. The paper and results are generally straightforward. I have a few comments The authors suggest they will discuss characteristic phenotypes but most of the conclusions are based on photoferrotrophy which (in genomes and isolates) is already a rare feature. Because a number of Chlorobi oxidize reduced sulfur (consistent with arguments that they could have been prevalent in the Archean), it seems relevant to also discuss this physiology (or to more explicitly justify the focus on photoferrotrophy). A careful definition of “crown group” Chlorobi would be beneficial for the reader. Provide refs: The evolution of photoferrotrophy in the Chlorobi appears to be a particularly evolutionarily derived trait that evolved much more recently in Earth history than has been previously been suggested. Figure 1 - the scale and bootstraps are impossible to read. Please increase the font size and resolution of the figure. Figure 3 - same comment. This must have something to do with the PDF conversion in the PLoS system but I cannot read the labels on B. But the bootstrap font size needs to be larger. Reviewer #2: Ward and Shih investigate the evolutionary history of phototrophy, carbon fixation, and iron oxidation in the chlorobi, a group of organisms commonly thought to have driven the anaerobic oxidation of iron in oceans on early Earth. The results of phylogenetic analyses, comparative genomic analyses, and molecular clock analyses lead the authors to conclude that the Chlorobi are not an ancient group of anoxygenic phototrophs and were unlikely to be responsible for the deposition of BIFs. Based on the data presented, I agree with the authors, and am happy to see the work come out in deference to several heated discussions I have had with colleagues that have argued the same thing, albeit with less strong evidence. I only have several edits/comments to suggest to the authors to further improve this paper. Line numbers would be nice. The abstract makes several vague claims about the role of anoxygenic photosynthesis in driving most global carbon fixation on “early earth”. This is true, but only during the latter parts of the archaeon. Prior to this, there would not have been phototrophy and it would have been chemotrophy as the primary driver. The authors need to add clarity to the time frames they are referencing. This is also true in the next sentence – do not discount the role of chemotropy – it does not hurt your arguments about the role of chlorobi in phototrophic production. First paragraph of introduction. Most people regard the Wood Ljungdahl pathway as the most primitive CO2 fixation pathway (see papers by Martin, Russell, Boyd, and Shock). Those organisms that use the rTCA are primarily aerobes (at least those that are somewhat deeply rooted). This information was not known at the time Wachterhauser made his thoughts known. Methods. Why not use the far more robust (albeit computationally more intensive) Clustal program to align sequences. Last line of this paragraph – remove non-essential self-citations. Page 3 methods. The uniform prior of 2300-3800 for the split between Cynaobacteria and Melainabacteria is unnecessarily large. See the recent papers by Fournier for perhaps more reasonable calibration dates. Page three, first paragraph results. The Chlorobi are a basal group among a clade that is sister to the other large clade. It is not necessarily sister to the other members within this clade. That it is basal is what is important to your argument. Page 4. Are type I RC also absent in other Bacterioidota? That seems to be critical to your argument. Also, what are the type I RC in the Chlorobi most closely related to? Finally, the idea that the RC phylogeny and the Bch synthesis protein phylogenies are incongruent means that RCs may have evolved and then were augmented by chlorophylls? Is this common in other organisms as a means of energy generation? It would be good to speculate on how this could occur based on data that we have from other organisms where this is the case (aerobic anoxygenic phototrophs, for example). The implication is RCs can function without BChl? Page 4 first paragraph. You don’t acquire phototrophy via HGT but you do acquire the genes that enable phototrophy via HGT. Page 4 second paragraph. Your own data indicate that the rTCA cycle is not ubiquitous. Page 4 second paragraph, second line to the end. This is a supporting argument at best. I would consider removing this as this phenomenon could equally be explained by expansion of niche space or variable rates of divergence/substitution. Page 5, second paragraph. Have Cyc2 genes been shown to be involved in Fe oxidation in Chlorobi. Need to provide a citation or qualify as such. Also, the use of significant in the last sentence implies that you have performed a statistical test. Use a different word here. Page 6, last line of first paragraph needs a reference to authors who have suggested chlorobi are old. Conclusions. Have you ruled out photoferrotrophy in other extant lineages? Is it possible that photoferrotrophs abandoned iron when sulfide became more prevalent in oceans, etc. and thus we have no record of them. Please do a better job of trying to explain the presence of BIFs prior to the GOE here in a more ecologically appropriate manner (i.e., link changing Earth landscapes with changing selective pressures, etc.). Fe oxidation may only exist today in niche (rare) environments. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Phototrophy and carbon fixation in Chlorobi postdate the rise of oxygen PONE-D-21-25104R1 Dear Dr. Ward, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Eva Elisabeth Stüeken, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Dr Ward, Thanks for your submission to PlosOne! All comments have been addressed thoroughly. The manuscript is now ready for publication. Best wishes, Eva Stueeken Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: My concerns and comments have been addressed in the revised submission. The authors have responded to my comments and suggestions. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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