Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 13, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-29668Imaging-based Indices of the Velocity of Disease Progression to Predict COVID-19 Mortality: A Cohort StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Besutti, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 21 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PONE-D-21-29669 Reviewer comment I would like to commend the authors for the time and dedication towards this manuscript. Technically, this is a good work however, I have some issues with the study design which need to be addressed. 1. Aim of the study versus what was done Aim / Purpose of the study was stated as: “The study aim was to evaluate indices of the velocity of disease progression to predict mortality of COVID-19 patients admitted to the emergency department (ED).” Your title and various sections in your manuscript referred to “velocity of disease progression”. The term “velocity of disease progression” conferred the notion that, there were at least teo measurements of same severity measure within a time interval and then the velocity of progression computed from the change in severity measure over the time. However, in your described methods, the time interval was measured from time of onset of symptoms to time of presentation at the emergency department, when the various tests were carried out. This measured interval directly measures, time from onset of symptoms to time of presentation at the emergency department which is influenced by various determinants including several factors contributing to delays in decision to seek care, delays in arriving at the facility and delays in the hospital before the measured tests were carried out. Please check this and revise you’re the aim and title of the study appropriately. 2. Velocity indexes Also linked with the above comment, is a concern about the computation of the velocity index as described in lines 141- 147. “In order to obtain indices that could indicate the velocity of disease progression before the first ED admission, we combined the CT visual score, the CXR RALE score, CRP levels, and sO2 levels separately with the time elapsed from symptom onset and the measurement of these parameters. The easiest way to obtain a velocity was to divide the severity measure by the time needed to reach that level of severity. This strategy was used for CRP levels and for CT- and CXR-based extension of parenchymal involvement, while sO2 velocity index was calculated as the difference in sO2 value to 100 (100-sO2) divided by the time from symptom onset to sO2 measurement.” This approach assumes that the baseline estimate for each severity measure was normal range and same value for all study participants, so that “dividing the severity measure by the time needed to reach that level of severity” would give a composite measure that is comparable among all study participants. However, based on past medical history of each study participants, the severity measure ie. sO2, CXR RALE, CT visual score, CRP at baseline which was not measured and practically difficult to determine based on the current study methodology, may be abnormal. This approach at estimating velocity index did not account for these variations in estimate at baseline. Please critically consider this. 3. Interventions carried out There was no mention of the interventions at the emergency department which might have prevented outcome of death or delayed it beyond the 30days mark. I feel this is an important omission. 4. Retrospective study or prospective study? Study design and selection of participants section, line 86 stated; “This prospective cohort study included all consecutive patients aged > 18 years who presented to…..” And in same section, line 90 -91 stated that “Given 91 the retrospective nature of the study, the Ethics Committee authorized the use of a patient’s data….” Please revise and be consistent 5. Conclusion of the study Conclusion in abstract “Indices describing the velocity of COVID-19 progression, especially those based on imaging, better predicted mortality than the same severity measures not incorporating the time needed to reach a certain level of severity. Conclusion as stated in the last paragraph of the discussion stated “In conclusion, our study confirms that one of the most powerful prognostic factors for COVID-19 is the time from symptom onset to seeking medical assistance. This information is readily available and gives added value to the interpretation of other imaging and laboratory findings at ED presentation.” The conclusion in the abstract need to be revised to conform with what was stated in the last paragraph of the discussion 6. Minor concerns a) Introduction, lines 48-49, “…more than 140 million cases and 3 million deaths have been reported globally up to May 2021 [1]” I will suggest a more current statistic. b) Discussion section, lines 263-267 stated that “The role of chest imaging has been widely evaluated, and even if the majority of available studies focus on CT scan [10-16], CXR-based scores have also been shown to be reliable in predicting COVID-19 outcomes [17-23]. This is particularly important since CT is not routinely recommended by the main international guidelines unless warranted by features of respiratory worsening, especially in resource-constrained environments, where CXR is more readily available [31]” This is true and the implication on your method of selection such that only patients with CT scan and Chest X-ray were included suggested that this study primarily admitted patients with features of worsening respiratory features. This limitation needs to be acknowledged. Thank you Reviewer #2: Appreciating your work, please find hereunder some comments and suggestions: 1. Can the authors explicitly define their inclusion and exclusion criteria? Or provide an explanation as to why they forwent on an exclusion criteria? 2. Can the authors provide their ethical statement in a separate segment? 3. "Given the retrospective nature of the study, the Ethics Committee authorized the use of a patient’s data without his/ her informed consent if all reasonable efforts had been made to contact that patient." Can the authors provide a number or a citation that states/further explains this clause? 4. Can the authors write their conclusion in a separate segment and add some statements that highlight the implication of their findings to clinical and global/public health practice? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Imaging-based Indices Combining Disease Severity and Time from Disease Onset to Predict COVID-19 Mortality: A Cohort Study PONE-D-21-29668R1 Dear Dr. Besutti, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. The authors have taken the necessary steps to fully address all my concerns Reviewer #2: All questions and comments have been addressed. No further feedback or suggestions. I thank the authors for making the time to integrate these comments into their manuscript to better the scientific content. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-21-29668R1 Imaging-based Indices Combining Disease Severity and Time from Disease Onset to Predict COVID-19 Mortality: A Cohort Study Dear Dr. Besutti: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Antonino Salvatore Rubino Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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