Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 15, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-04617Amplifying the effects of playing with additional teammates (or opponents) during association football game-based scenariosPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Coutinho, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 05 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Please ensure that the manuscript is thoroughly proofread before resubmission [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Manuscript Number: PONE-D-22-04617 Manuscript Title: Amplifying the effects of playing with additional teammates (or opponents) during association football game-based scenarios This is an interesting study with meaningful information to practical field of soccer training. The experimental design and methods adopted are technical sounds. I believe the outcomes of this study enriching our current understanding of game-based training/large size game of soccer training. However, some area needed to clarify and justify the practical implantation in term of technical and tactical coherence of soccer training. 1. My first comment would like to address the ecological models of 11 vs 11,12,13,14 as a game-based training. The team formation during offensive and defensive phases could be critical factors to create superiority and inferiority scenarios. As the study added a central defender, a central midfielder, and a striker. Ultimately, we can understand technical and tactical behaviors of the players. Such information needed to be clarified in the manuscript. 2. This study excluded the goalkeeper performance for data analysis. The coordination of defensive lines and team balance with GK is fundamental principle during inferior number of play or high pressure defending. This consideration should be highlighted in your study. 3. In the present study, the authors discussed the performance of small-sided games in comparison to game sciences. I think small-sided game training does not approach to the team performance as entire picture of soccer game. For example, the high speed running/sprints and technical performance are absolutely different to real game. The authors are encouraged to use large-size game training to develop the background information/discussion of the study. 4. Please concise the interpretations of results and discussion. Some sentences are redundant and are required grammatical check. Reviewer #2: Manuscript Number: PONE-D-22-04617 Manuscript Title: Amplifying the effects of playing with additional teammates (or opponents) during association football game-based scenarios I would like to congratulate the authors for the work done. If on a first instance I was septic about the work, after I carefully analysed it, I believe it is a good piece of information for coaches to use in the future. The paper is generally really well written and easy to follow, the methods well presented as also as the use of pictures and tables, and I would recommend publication after a minor revision. Firstly, the authors should be consistent in the terminology used: - Field or pitch - Football or association football (or even perhaps soccer) I would then start by the title. Isn’t the title too long? Can the author think of a shorter title, perhaps? Suggestion: “Amplifying the effects of extra players during association football game-bases scenarios”. Abstract Line 48: replace “youth players” by “under-18 players”. Line 50: replace “both more and fewer” by “different” Introduction Line 81: remove “on the field”. Line 86: I would remove “such as small-sided games (SSG)”, as it is not relevant to the main topic. Line 95: it then makes sense to refer to SSGs. Make sure you use small-sided games terminology before SSG if you decided to remove the previous term. Line 125 to 136: I would carefully consider what the authors mentioned. I am not sure if coaches use more than 11 players on their tasks, as it tends to lose task representativeness. Particular, in a youth level, where coaches struggle to have 22 players fit for sessions. I believe authors should rephrase this idea. This approach it is interesting in scenarios where coaches actually have more than 22 players so they can keep players engaged and active in training, leading then to the exploration of different behaviours according with the numerical unbalance. And this idea should also lead to the authors hypothesis (which they did not include). Having this previous idea, it would be interesting to include a couple of hypothesis after the objective. Study design Line 161: include large-sided games before LSGs. Line 166: replace “with none” for “without”. Procedures Line 194: The author well controlled several variables. Considering all previous procedures, did the authors also were able to control weather conditions? Were the weather conditions similar for every day of data collection? And if not, did this have any effect on the results? Discussion Lines 428 – 434: Wasn’t the authors’ idea a result of the different playing density instead? More players on the pitch (more than in the real game scenario), led to different adaptations (pressing may be one of them). Line 490: One of the biggest limitations to this study is this is not an ecology task, and therefore, must be carefully planned according with the coach/team environment. Why haven’t authors refer to this? Line 504: As well, future research should be conducted to understand the tactical development of using game-based scenarios in between sectors, e.g., defenders vs attackers, midfielders vs midfielders. And the implication of using different numerical relations to the development of different playing styles, e.g., progressive progression, direct game, pressing, etc. Conclusions Generally, I believe the authors repeated themselves in this section. The results of this study are really novice and I would replace the whole section by recommendations for coaches. The authors should consider recommend certain numerical relationship to develop certain aspects of the game in the training session. For instance, by using 11vs14, I will expect my players to behave as … Also, when coaches look to develop pressing principles, they can make use of … The idea would be to provide coaching guidelines that could be related to figure 6 and summarise the main the practical main findings of this work. Well done for the work completed! Best wishes. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-22-04617R1Amplifying the effects of adding extra players during association football game-based scenariosPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Coutinho, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 02 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I am pleased to see the authors improved the quality of the manuscript with practical aspects in relation to technical/tactical behavior of LSG soccer training. I only have several minor comments this time. Abstract. Please add information of studying participants. Furthermore, add statistical report in the result section. Please also clarify “small to moderate effects”. Add references to support the statement, line 109-112. Line 122. what do you mean about “higher numerical unbalances”. Line 175, you have 10 players for each team (please add information related to their training status). Should the authors include 3 additional players as studying participants? Line 216, .what is the resting interval between the testing days? Line 228, “officially sized” is redundant. Line 237, add humidity of the testing days. Lin2, 249, the location of filming? I suppose to be the central of the ground if only one camera. Table 1, p value of Dis Covered while sprint should be 0.039. Clarify small/moderate, small to moderate …effect. X2 should be superscript. Revised in the result section. Line 478, what do you mean “as the pitch was kept constant”? Line 523, remove “available”. Line 500, revise “balls” to “ball”. Concise the sentences, line 513-516 and conclusion. Reviewer #2: I would like to congratulate the authors with the final manuscript. I believe they addressed all my comments/suggestions and I think the final version is really good. Well done! [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Amplifying the effects of adding extra players during association football game-based scenarios PONE-D-22-04617R2 Dear Dr. Coutinho, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rabiu Muazu Musa, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** |
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PONE-D-22-04617R2 Amplifying the effects of adding extra players during association football game-based scenarios Dear Dr. Coutinho: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Rabiu Muazu Musa Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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