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PONE-D-21-22806Music listening and stress recovery in healthy individuals: A systematic review with meta-analysis of experimental studiesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Adiasto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This systematic review and meta-analysis examined the effects of music listening after experimentally induced stress on stress recovery in healthy participants. The authors found no evidence for a cumulative effect of music listening on stress recovery. They did find that the effectiveness of music was moderated by several factors, including musical genre, type of music selection, musical tempo, and type of stress recovery outcome, although definite conclusions on the nature of these effects could not be drawn. The study addresses a very timely question within the growing body of research on music and stress, and is well-executed. As such, it provides a valuable and much-needed contribution to the research field. The selection of study parameters and moderators of interest is convincing, the results are presented in a clear and comprehensible way, and the authors provide a thoughtful interpretation of their findings, which they appropriately put into perspective by acknowledging the limitations of their study. Furthermore, they provide several helpful and well-considered recommendations for future research. The manuscript is well-written. I only have several minor comments. 1. In discussing the potential moderating effect “Self- vs. experimenter selected” (page 9), the authors mention two presumed explanations for this effect, namely increasing perceived control and serving self-regularity goals. For a somewhat more comprehensive picture, it may be worth adding the potential roles of liking and familiarity as further mechanisms behind the suggested higher effectiveness of self-compared to experimenter-selected music in promoting stress recovery. 2. In the abstract (and throughout the theoretical sections of the paper), it is stated that participants of the studies included in the meta-analysis/review “were either exposed to music or silence.” I find this misleading, since in the Method section, it is stated on page 10 that to be included, “studies should compare music listening to silence or a comparable auditory stimulus (e.g., white noise, audiobooks)”. Apart from the fact that it is not evident in what sense and to what extent silence can be considered comparable to auditory control stimuli, the use of the label “silence” to capture all non-music control conditions, is confusing. Please adapt the instances where you currently refer to silence by using more accurate wording (e.g. “silence or an auditory control condition”). 3. Page 11: “When authors did not or could not provide the required information (e.g., due to data no longer being accessible), the outcome was dropped from the meta-analysis. Based on these criteria, the final sample for the systematic review consisted of 17 studies. Following attempts to obtain missing information, the final sample for the meta-analysis consisted of 14 studies.” This is phrased in a confusing way – it is not clear what the conceptual difference between these selection steps is. Please rephrase this in a way that makes it less confusing. 4. On page 11, the authors point out that “Stress induction procedures in included studies were not always successful. Given that successful stress induction procedures are crucial to ensure that participants experience some physiological or psychological change they may recover from, in our moderator analysis we examined whether the effect of music listening on stress recovery differed based on the outcome of a study’s stress induction check (manipulation check)”. I fully agree with the authors that, for music to exert an effect on stress, a physiological and/or psychological stress response needs to be present, from which participants may then recover. I find it therefore difficult to understand why studies which failed to induce stress (i.e. did not report a successful stress induction) were included in the meta-analysis in the first place. The fact that the successfulness of the stress induction, surprisingly, did not affect the extent of stress recovery does not really resolve my concern. Could the authors briefly comment on this issue, and motivate their decision to still include these studies in their meta-analysis (either under “stress induction checks” on page 11, or in the discussion section)? 5. Page 11: “In our moderator analysis, we examined whether the effects of music listening on stress recovery were reliable across general (neuroendocrine, physiological, psychological) and specific outcome types.” I am not sure whether the moderator analysis allows any claims about the reliability of the effects across outcome types. In theory, an effect could be highly reliable across many outcome types, while at the same time still being clearly stronger for some outcome types than for others (hence being moderated by them), right? Wouldn’t it be more correct to state that it was assessed to what extent the size of the effect on stress recovery depended on outcome type (or some equivalent formulation)? I am no expert on this issue, but I invite the authors to reconsider their wording. 6. There is a type on page 15: Wisagreements --> Disagreements 7. As the authors rightly point out on page 6, stress recovery involves a process in which “changes that have occurred in response to a stressor revert to pre-stress baselines”. To quantify stress recovery, it therefore seems crucial to take individual pre-stress baseline levels into account. To the reader, it does not readily become clear whether the effects derived from the studies included in the meta-analysis indeed reflect the extent to which stress levels “return to baseline”. From Table 4, the included studies seem to be a mix of 1) studies reporting differences in change scores with respect to pre-stress baseline levels and 2) studies reporting raw group differences in post-music stress levels. This may require some sort of disclaimer. Could you please reflect on these analytical differences and their (possible) implications for the interpretation of your meta-analysis, in relation to the term “recovery”? 8. On page 37-38 you write: “Khalfa et al. [55] reported that post-stressor cortisol decreased more rapidly for participants who listened to experimenter-selected classical music, compared with participants who sat in silence” In Table 2 you write, when referring to this study: “Increase in post-stressor cortisol for music group significantly lower compared to control group (+)”. These descriptions differ – could you please adapt the main text to match the (correct) description in the table? 9. On page 40-41, you write: “While previous reviews suggest that music-based interventions may be moderately beneficial for stress-related outcomes, particularly in medical and therapeutic settings, our results suggest that the magnitude of this effect for healthy individuals may be more modest.” While I largely agree with the contents of this paragraph (and with the further comments on this issue on page 46), I think the term “healthy individuals” (to label the category for which music is less effective for stress recovery) does not capture the essence of the differences between the different types of studies, and hence using this term may be a bit misleading. As is stated further down the paragraph, the stress in studies conducted in medical and therapeutic settings likely has a more protracted time course, which does not directly have to do with the participants being (not) healthy. Furthermore, stress may differ in intensity between laboratory and medical real-life/settings, and the effectiveness of music may depend on the research setting as well. It would be great if you could somewhat adapt the wording of this paragraph, to avoid the impression that the (non-) effectiveness of music depends on the participants being healthy. Rather, it seems more likely that several (interrelated) factors associated with the different research settings (e.g. type, intensity and duration of stress) are driving these differences. You might e.g. use the term “healthy individuals under brief, experimentally induced stress” instead. Reviewer #2: Review: The authors address an important research question as they aim at systemizing the empirical evidence on beneficial effects of music listening on stress recovery. Overall, the manuscript is well written and the authors demonstrate methodological rigour and diligence on many instances. However, I have some major concerns that question the adequacy of the hypothesis and statistical approach as well as the search strategy. Major Concerns: 1) The authors identified 14 studies that are quite heterogenous in nature. I ask myself whether the approach of a meta-analysis is adequate for this rather small number of studies given this vast heterogenity. Furthermore, not all studies were successfull in stress induction. Wouldn't it be reasonable to exclude these studies from the analysis? 2) Concerning the search strategy, I wondered that PubMed was not included. Searching this data base might be useful as the number of studies identified is quite small. 3) Inclusion and exclusion criteria are not specifically justified. For example, in Figure 1 exclusion criteria are presented, e.g. 'no music presented after stressor'. This might be the reason why the study of Thoma et al. (2013) (https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/23940541/) is not party of the review, although I consider it highly relevant in the context of music listening and stress reduction. Overall, I would describe and justify more in detail criteria for inclusion and exclusion of studies. 4) Introduction: first paragraph: I really like the introduction to the topic, as the aspect of stress in daily life is emphasized. I wondered why the authors did not include ambulatory assessment/ecological momentary assessment studies in their review, as these studies have high ecological validity. I recommend to expand the review and to assess independently the evidence concerning controlled studies with high internal validity on the one hand and daily life studies with high ecological validity on the other hand. 5) It may be my personal opinion, but I was irritated by the many instances the authors use the term 'beliefs', e.g. abstract 'given the popular and widespread belief'. My recommendation is to re-word this and acknowledge the empirical evidence underlying this statement. Minor Concerns: Abstract: 'beneficial for stress' should be specified (beneficial for stress reduction) Abstract: Please report how many participants in total were included in the 14 studies Abstract: please specify that (randomized)-controlled studies were included Introduction: 'It is a popular and widespread opinion that music may be beneficial for stress recovery [10]': I am not convinced that the citation is that adequate in this context. Levitin demonstrates in this book many instances for beneficial effects of music. I am not satisfied with labeling his statement as 'popular and widespread opinion'. Furthermore, I do not consider this book an optimal citation for this peer-reviewed journal article as there is a vast body of empirical evidence available. Introduction l.60: My first thought was to question the necessity of this review given the fact that an extensive review was just published. Although, the authors justify their review in the ensuing paragraph, I would recommend to state immediately more clearly that the scope of the other review was different. Introduction l.78: Why not include studies demonstrating effects on cortisol? l.133: I would not recommend to write 'smaller amounts of salivary alpha-amylase'. Rather, less activity of alpha-amylase. l.153: Study 54 refers to an ambulatory assessment study – therefore, there was no control to silence or noise in a comparable manner to experimental studies. Please re-word. l.164: I do not agree with the statement that the candidate mechanism underlying beneficial effects of music has already been identified. I would rather prefer to see here a more comprehensive statement acknowledging that the exact underlying mechanisms remain to be elucidated and that different notions exist, e.g., literature by Koelsch… l.274: IgA is named as outcome measure but has not been introduced. As it is an immune marker, the introduction should contain some information on interactions among stress and immune system. l.310: some typos need revision l.425: Can you please indicate the range of music duration? As there is literature available on the effects of different music durations on beneficial effects, I assume that the range was very limited among these studies. Therefore, I would not state that duration is not important. Rather, that the range in experimental studies is not vast enough to allow for meaningful comparisons. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-21-22806R1Music listening and stress recovery in healthy individuals: A systematic review with meta-analysis of experimental studiesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Adiasto, Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript to PLOS ONE. Both reviewers agree that your manuscript has greatly improved. One reviewer, however, has a few additional issues for you to consider. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 20 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have satisfactorily addressed all my comments. I am satisfied with the manuscript in its current format, and recommend it for publication. Reviewer #2: The authors clearly put a lot of work and time into the revisions, I highly appreciate that, and I think that the manuscript is now much stronger; I only have a few concerns left to be addressed: 1) When reading your response letter I considered it an excellent idea to combine both systematic review and meta-analytic approach. However, when I read the manuscript, I felt it overloaded the paper. Furthermore, I did not really understand, why the number of included studies varies among these two approaches (14 vs. 17 studies). My suggestion would be to either start with describing the review approach and then calculate the overall meta-analytic effect or to move the systematic review to the Appendix (after having adjusted the analysis to the same number of studies included). 2) Thank you for describing in more detail how you operationalized unsuccesful stress induction. I am not entirely convinced by your approach. For example, you provide mean statistics for two studies and conclude that the mean difference represents a successful stress induction. At least, I would expect a citation backing this up or a statistical test considering mean and standard deviation. I wondered if it was more approproate to distinguish successful from unsuccessful and (third category) not reported. As for now, I would still argue to include only those studies with successful stress reduction (expecially given the unequal ratio that limits comparisons anyways). 3) Thank you for describign in more detail your inclusion criteria. As they do not cover 'music should have been played after the stressor', I still argue that the Thoma Paper should be included. Therefore, please change the inclusion criteria accordingly or include the paper. If you adjust the inclusion criteria, I would recommend to refer to the Thoma Paper in the discussion as time of intervention (before, during or after stressor) might be an important modulator. 4) I am sorry to read that you decided against EMA studies as I consider it a huge strength to combine both experimental and EMA evidence. I am not convinced that these two approaches should be studied separately, as they complement each other in a meaningful way. Also, I believe that including EMA studies would shed light on the heterogeneity as you have multiple time points and multiple contextual factors being repetatedly assessed over time. Nevertheless I accept your choice here, but recommend to acknowlegde EMA studies in the discussion (or outlook). Particularly as you describe in the introduction that music is so easily available, studying the mechanisms in daily life seems to be timely. 5) Please omit the following sentence from the manuscript as I am afraid that it does not reflect the findings on alpha-amylase appropriately. Similarly, participants who listened to music following stress demonstrated less activity of salivary alpha-amylase and lower cortisol compared to when music was listened to for other purposes [56].” ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-21-22806R2 Music listening and stress recovery in healthy individuals: a systematic review with meta-analysis of experimental studies Dear Dr. Adiasto: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Urs M Nater Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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