Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 29, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-28026Antiphospholipid antibodies and vitamin D deficiency in COVID-19 infection with and without venous or arterial thrombosis: A pilot case-control studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Krishnamoorthy, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please resubmit the manuscript addressing the concerns raised by the reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 12 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript of Shah et al. is well written and attempted to extrapolate some interesting findings. I have the following minor comments. (i). Authors could revise the 1st paragraph of the introduction to include background details. (ii). Organization of Table-2, and Table-3 data based on sex, could give a clear indication of sex-dependent variation as many biochemical parameters vary in males and females. Additionally, to compare the data variation with control, authors could use the start (*) sign, and mention the p-value in the table legend. Finally, in all the tables the abbreviated form should be listed in the table (1-4) legend. (iii). Modification of the results, discussion and conclusion section based on the updated version of Table 2, and Table-3. Reviewer #2: The study aimed to determine whether vitamin D deficiency is associated with thromboembolic events (TEs) both in the presence and absence of antiphospholipid antibodies (APLas). The paper identified that patients with both APLa positivity and vitamin D deficiency are significantly more prone to TEs than APLa positive patients with no vitamin D deficiency. The findings are significant because they can help set new parameters to characterize and treat COVID-19 patients with TEs. However, the paper is not suitable for publication in the present form and can only be accepted if the authors carefully make the following corrections and resubmit a revised version. Major: 1. Page 8, line 6-12, Sample Size Calculation: The sample size calculation is irrational. To begin with, use the exact percentage from the previous literature where applicable - 52% and 91% as per your references. Reference 4 says that COVID-19 patients with prolonged aPTT had a 91% prevalence of “lupus anticoagulant” (LA) only. No information about other APLas is given in that article. Therefore, though LA is an APL antibody, the prevalence of LA cannot be interchangeably used with the prevalence of all APLas. Moreover, Reference 3 says that 52% of “COVID-19 patients” have at least one APLa. There might be a considerable number of thrombotic patients among those patients, as a meta-analysis by Tan et al. (2021) found that 14.7% and 3.9% of COVID-19 patients had a venous thromboembolic event and an arterial thromboembolic event, respectively. Therefore, the patients of reference 3 are not comparable with the non-thrombotic patient group of your study. Devreese et al. (2020) can be a suitable reference for you, who found a 73% prevalence of APLas in non-thrombotic COVID-19 patients. Furthermore, an elevated aPTT cannot be used synonymously with thrombosis. You may refer to Joncour et al. (2021) for a relevant comparison which found a 64% prevalence of APLas in thrombotic COVID-19 patients. You can see that the prevalence values of my referred studies are no way near to your calculated difference of 40%. In fact, a meta-analysis by Taha et al. (2021) clearly states, “There was no association between aPL positivity and disease outcomes including thrombosis.” Apart from these, no specific statistical formula was used to calculate the sample size. I recommend correcting the sample size calculation part with the help of an expert in statistics or completely removing the sample size calculation part from the manuscript if possible. Minor: 1. Page 2, line 2, Conflict of interest: Correct the journal name. 2. Page 5, line 10-12: Zhang et al. is a clear outlier, as found in the meta-analysis by Taha et al. (2021). Also, a case series of three patients does not provide strong support behind any statement. I recommend removing the reference or replacing it with another one. 3. Page 5, line 17: reference 9 does not strongly support your statement. Consider changing or removing the reference. 4. Table 3: use ng/ml as vitamin D unit. 5. In table 4, add n=20 in both columns. Include a stacked column chart based on table 4 for a better visual representation. 6. In Discussion: Discuss why Alkaline phosphatase was found significantly higher in the case group than in control. 7. In Discussion: Discuss previous literature that oppose your claims too where applicable. For instance, mention article(s) that found no relationship between vitamin D deficiency and COVID-19 risk. 8. Refer preferentially to meta-analyses in cases of mentioning prevalence throughout your manuscript. E.g., thrombosis in COVID-19, vitamin D deficiency and COVID-19, etc. 9. Recheck the language of the manuscript and use English-checking software. Also, there are two places where a reference is placed after a full stop. Fix those. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Antiphospholipid antibodies and vitamin D deficiency in COVID-19 infection with and without venous or arterial thrombosis: A pilot case-control study PONE-D-21-28026R1 Dear Dr. Krishnamoorthy, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I am happy with the current version of this manuscript. One minor comment, in the introduction part author should combine paragraph 1 and 2, and paragraph 3 and 4 together. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all my comments properly in their revised version of the manuscript. Therefore, I recommend accepting the current version of the manuscript for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-28026R1 Antiphospholipid antibodies and vitamin D deficiency in COVID-19 infection with and without venous or arterial thrombosis: A pilot case-control study Dear Dr. Krishnamoorthy: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Md Asiful Islam Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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