Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-34889Educational considerations for health professionals to effectively work with clients with complex regional pain syndromePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Johnston-Devin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Two Reviewers evaluated the manuscript giving generally positive opinions. However I agree with them that more details should be added about the usage of hermeneutic phenomenological approach and deeper interpretation of data. I also agree that the presentation of the entire poem is redundant, while Discussion should be more focused on actual findings of the study and relevant literature. Also are Authors sure there would be no issue with copyright by including an unattributed poem? What if the original author would claim it? Finally, Authors should add the COREQ checklist which is requested for qualitative studies on PLOS ONE. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 10 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. 3. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Please see the attached document comments and respond accordingly. Did you include unpublished studies? - Some descriptors were not used in the search and may have compromised and search strategy. Exclusion criteria. The exclusion criteria are not clear. I didn't understand the first sentence I suggest revision of English. Reviewer #2: Manuscript title: “Educational considerations for health professionals to effectively work with clients with complex regional pain syndrome” Overall comment This manuscript presents a study which aimed to “To determine what people living with complex regional pain syndrome (CRPS) think health professionals should know about their condition to provide appropriate care”. It employed a heuristic, hermeneutic phenomenological study, and used semi-structured interviews with 17 participants living with CRPS. The manuscript is well written, interesting, and relevant. I applaud the authors for using a qualitative approach to investigate the experiences of living with a syndrome that is very challenging for patients and health professionals. There are some issues to consider that would, in my opinion, improve the manuscript. Here are some specific comments: Background The authors mention that “there is no global mandated content level of pain education for undergraduate health professionals` students…”. In my opinion, this sentence needs clarification since the International Association for the Study of Pian (IASP) has developed work in this area. I suggest a revision, as this may also ensure coherence between the information presented in the introduction and discussion sections. Methods Sample/ Participants Information about participants (e.g. mean time lived with CRPS or mean time from symptom onset to formal diagnosis) is briefly presented and table 1 is indicated for more detailed data. I suggest the inclusion of a brief sentence about health professionals since it is also included in the table but not mention in the main text. Data analysis The link from reference (20) is not working. Findings Information presented in this section is quite interesting. Since the authors have used a hermeneutic phenomenological approach, I would expect a deeper interpretation of the data. On several occasions the manuscript is focused on merely describing what the participants had said and a quotation is presented. For example: “Alice found people touched her legs more often once she began using a wheelchair but stated, “I’ve seen them do it to other people in wheelchairs”. Sharon’s concern was the length of time it took her pain to settle after uninvited touch. If you walk past me the wrong way and you touch that arm, that’s a big deal for weeks, months, hours if you’re lucky. But people just can’t grasp the concept of how much pain. I reckon that’s the biggest hurdle. Sharon” Additionally, considering the hermeneutic phenomenological approach I would not expect an idiographic focus on this analysis. The main text presented in the findings section calls attention to the individual`s participations, which would be expected in an interpretative phenomenological analysis (that integrates phenomenology, hermeneutic and idiography). In my opinion, these two aspects may compromise the quality of the manuscript. I strongly recommend a revision of this section. Discussion The authors discussed the main findings of this study and introduced some references from relevant research. I recommend the revision of two aspects (the introduction of a poem and the anecdotal evidence on veterinary science) explored in the next paragraphs. I believe that the poem has provided a good inspiration and promoted reflection, which is very important for researchers working with qualitative data. However, in the discussion section the readers would expect a discussion focused on the relation between this study`s findings and previous research. I think the presentation of this poem does not add value for the discussion itself. The authors mentioned that “anecdotal evidence exists supporting the notion that veterinary science undergraduate programs contain more pain content than that of a medical degree”. Since this is based on anecdotal evidence, I don`t think this information adds value to this discussion. The following sentence (“Research suggest that limited pain content is taught in undergraduate health sciences courses (5,31))” is clear, based on previous research and may be used without the anecdotal evidence. Table 2. The authors could cite the reference. Is this table really needed? Thanks ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Helen Ali Ewune Reviewer #2: Yes: Carmen Caeiro [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-21-34889R1Educational considerations for health professionals to effectively work with clients with complex regional pain syndromePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Johnston-Devin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The manuscript has improved. However I agree with Reviewer 2 that little effort has been done to modify findings section according to recommendations. Indeed the idiographic focus is missing. If Authors have used not IPA but a phenomenological approach that is supposed to have a nomotetic focus, this should be properly explained and justified. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 16 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Stefano Triberti, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Dear Authors Thanks for the submission of a new version with ammendments. In my opinion, the changes on introduction and methods have improved the quality of the paper. However, the same has not happened in the findings and discussion sections. Although there has been an attempt to improve the depth of the interpretation, the problem related to the emphasis on the individuals` participation remains the same. As I mentioned before, I would expect an idiographic element in an interpretative phenomenological analysis. The authors have replied that they agree with this idea but have not made changes to address this aspect and have not present a justification to do so. In my opinion, this still compromises the quality of the paper. Additionally, the new version presents the findings together with discussion in the same section. This approach does not help the reader to follow the study and limits the depth of information presented in the findings and discussion sections. I would recomend the presentation of findings and discussion in different sections, as well as, the revision of findings in line with my previous comment (idiographic element). ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Helen Ali Ewune Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
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