Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 12, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-29526Assessing the Use of Prescription Drugs in Obese Respondents in the National Health and Nutrition Examination SurveyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. He, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 17 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors first conducted the secondary-data analyses based on selected variables from the NHANES (2003 ~ 2014) dataset, such as: demographic, physical examination, RXD, and insurance status to figure out the association between obesity status and usage of prescription drugs. Then, machine learning models have been utilized to predict the usage of prescription drugs for people with different backgrounds. It is a good idea to develop a machine learning model based on the findings from a national-wide survey dataset. And here are my comments: 1. Please give reference for cut-off value on BMI and age (line: 84) and type of drugs on RXDs (line: 85). 2. Please give a clear description of the variables that have been used from NHANES. For example: does RXD represent the question (RXDUSE): “ have you taken or used any prescription medicines in the past month?” And what is DS corresponding to the variables in NHANES? 3. Since the average standard for annual income across states is different, please use the Poverty Income Ratio instead of Household Income, then run the regression and machine learning model to see if the conclusion (line: 167-168) still stands. 4. Line 51: “must”. Please give a reference if the author considers obese people must take RXDs to manage these conditions. Otherwise, without any disease symptoms, lifestyle changes, such as increasing the physics activities, dietary changes are more likely to be given by the clinic Doctors. 5. Line 85: 1937/32 is the unweighted sample size for respondents, however, in Table 1, the weighted sample sizes are given. So please be consistent. I would suggest using the unweighted sample size in Table 1 to describe the basic characteristics of the study population. 6. The quality of Figure 2 needs to be improved. 7. Line 79: please consider citing more recent work, since the plural “studies” is used. Reviewer #2: This study of using National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey (NHANES) data to assess the use of prescription drugs in obese respondents is very interesting, but there are still some concerns for this study, which are shown below. 1. What’s the purpose and importance (or impact) to predict an individual’s likelihood of using any RXD or DS, instead of specific RXD or DS? In other words, how would clinicians and patients benefit from the high or low likelihoods of using any RXD or DS, as the possibility of needing any RXD or DS instead of specific RXD or DS does not deliver clear information for both clinicians and patients. In addition, since NHANES data also provide detailed specific types for DS, why did the authors only report the specific types of RXD, but not specific types for DS? 2. The NHANES data may not be an appropriate data for prediction purpose. As the NHANES is a cross-section survey data, we do not know whether the outcome of using any RXD or DS was before or after the obesity status. In this case, if most individuals already had RXD or DS before the obesity, the prediction model constructed based on the predictors that obtained after the outcome (using RXD or DS) will not provide valid prediction performance to apply for in the real-world settings. 3. As mentioned by authors, the most recent release of NHANES survey cycle is from 2017-2018, then why did this study only use the data from 2003-2014, excluding 2015-2018? In addition, one published study by Randhawa etc. also used NHANES data from 1988-2012 to examine the medication use by body mass index and age. Compared with Randhawa’s study, what new information and scientific findings could be added and need to be discussed? 4. The methods section lacks many details. For example, how did this study identify the use of specific RXD types, DS use, BMI results, demographic and insurance information from NHANES data? 5. The authors mentioned that they performed two separate logistic regression analyses, but in the paper, only the results from the second logistic regression were shown in table 3. The results from the first logistic regression may need to be added in the supplementary materials. 6. Result section, in table one, the authors only provided the weighted data, what about the unweighted raw sample size? 7. Result section, lines 145-148, “the decrease in usage by obese individuals in the 75+ group may, in part, reflect the potential mixed effects of obesity in old age, where those with a high BMI have a lower mortality…” It is hard to understand this statement for the relationship between the lower mortality and decreased CVD drugs as well as metabolic agents. If the authors meant older patients with high BMI were less likely to develop CVD or other diseases to have better survival, then how to explain increased trend of RXD and DS use was observed in Figure 2c where high BMI (≥30) had clearly higher counts of RXD or DS? 8. Result section, lines 201-202, the largest maximum number of DS used seems among people with BMI from 23-27 kg/m2, not 18 to 22 kg/m2 based on Figure 2c. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-21-29526R1Assessing the Use of Prescription Drugs in Obese Respondents in the National Health and Nutrition Examination SurveyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. He, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 30 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Dear authors, we appreciate your effort in addressing reviewers' comments. However, please directly respond to reviewer #2's comment regarding not adding newer NHANES 2015-2018 data in your manuscript. The current analysis using the 2003-2014 NHANES data is dated and might compromise implications of your findings. In addition, I suggest you to further revise the title and/or abstract to reflect the objective of the paper. Your objective was to examine the use of prescription drugs and dietary supplements by the individuals with obesity, but the current title and abstract (results section) only focus on use of prescription drugs. The aspect of dietary supplements is missing in title and abstract (results section). Please also double check the results in the abstract to reflect the most up to date data based on the revision. Thanks. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors addressed almost all comments, except for comment 3 which was not fully addressed. The authors may need to update the analysis including the most recent data cycles (2015-2018) which are available now. In addition, the Figure 2C is hard to tell the statement "the largest maximum number of DS used is among people with BMI from 18-22 kg/m2", so this figure may need some modification and improvement. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Assessing the Use of Prescription Drugs and Dietary Supplements in Obese Respondents in the National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey PONE-D-21-29526R2 Dear Dr. He, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jingjing Qian Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for further revising your manuscript by incorporating new years of data. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors may need to double check the submitted Table S2 in their supporting information. The numbers are not consistent with the text in the manuscript 'RXD ( = 0.53, 95% CI 0.498-0.564, = 0.569, 95% CI 0.52-0.623).' It seems the authors still used the old table S2, as the numbers are same as the numbers deleted in the track-changing version. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-29526R2 Assessing the Use of Prescription Drugs and Dietary Supplements in Obese Respondents in the National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey Dear Dr. He: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jingjing Qian Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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