Peer Review History
Original SubmissionFebruary 23, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-03958Evaluation of renal injury and function biomarkers, including symmetric dimethylarginine (SDMA), in the rat passive Heymann nephritis (PHN) modelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Michael J Coyne, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Reviewer #1: The investigations of SDMA in the peer-reviewed literature predominantly focus on its use as a diagnostic biomarker rather than on its evaluation as a renal safety marker which is relevant for preclinical/toxicologic studies. However there are some major limitations to this study. Major comments: The main aim of this study was to assess the utility of SDMA within a preclinical glomerular toxicity model (Lines 91-93 and Line 424). To do so, the authors should have included direct GFR measurement. Indeed, sCr, BUN and creatinine clearance are very insensitive markers of excretory renal function and therefore negative results were to be anticipated. The authors can not conclude if there was any difference in GFR between control and anti-Fx1A-treated rats which implies no thorough conclusions can be drawn regarding the utility of SDMA (and of Cys C) in this experimental context. The manuscript contains expectable findings (and already published) for the urinary biomarkers. These biomarkers have already long been qualified by the FDA to evaluate renal toxicity and function. The newer investigation is the SDMA measurement in this context. Therefore it was important to include direct GFR measurements to provide the possibility for a thorough interpretation of SDMA and of Cys C findings (including relative performance to other biomarkers). Other comments: Lines 21-23. The authors state that SDMA correlates highly with GFR across multiple species including rats, dogs and humans. Line 69-71 this is repeated including cats. Based on current literature, this statement should be nuanced. Indeed, in dogs, Pelander et al. (2019) showed that overall diagnostic performance of SDMA as a marker of impaired GFR was the same as that of creatinine (both R2 = 0.62, P < .001) and this result was in line with McKenna et al. (2019) who concluded serum creatinine and SDMA were both only moderately correlated with the renal clearance (R2 = 0.52 and 0.27 respectively, p < .001). In cats, Brans et al. (2020) showed that the correlation between SDMA and GFR (τ B = −0.57; P < .001) was moderate and the correlation between sCr and GFR was of the same magnitude (τ B = −0.56; P < .001). Braff et al. (2014) equally observed that the relationship between SDMA and GFR (R2 = 0.82, P < .001) was very similar to the relationship between serum creatinine and GFR (R2 = 0.81, P <.001). Also in humans, a large meta-analysis of Kielstein et al. (2006) could not demonstrate outstanding correlation of 1/SDMA with GFR (r = 0.77 - 0.85, P < .001). Lines 139-150. Did the laboratory animal veterinarian use a scoring system for assessment of pain and well-being of the rats ? If yes, please state so. Lines 193-197. Please provide for all assays used: either appropriate references that include validation data or include validation data. Lines 200-208. Especially if animals are sacrificed, the maximum information should be gathered from the samples/study. It is not unexpected that glomerular changes on light microscopy were minimal in the antiFx1A treated rats. It is unclear why ME or IF techniques were not used. This would have allowed to bring the interpretation of the renal lesions to another level. In the results section, the authors make too much subjective interpretation of their data (the terms minimal, slightly … are used numerous numerous times). I don’t see a good argument why statistics were not performed for proteinuria ? Discussion: the first paragraph is too long (Lines 348-390). Line 438-440: please provide references for this statement on cystatin C. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by May 12 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The investigations of SDMA in the peer-reviewed literature predominantly focus on its use as a diagnostic biomarker rather than on its evaluation as a renal safety marker which is relevant for preclinical/toxicologic studies. However there are some major limitations to this study. Major comments: The main aim of this study was to assess the utility of SDMA within a preclinical glomerular toxicity model (Lines 91-93 and Line 424). To do so, the authors should have included direct GFR measurement. Indeed, sCr, BUN and creatinine clearance are very insensitive markers of excretory renal function and therefore negative results were to be anticipated. The authors can not conclude if there was any difference in GFR between control and anti-Fx1A-treated rats which implies no thorough conclusions can be drawn regarding the utility of SDMA (and of Cys C) in this experimental context. The manuscript contains expectable findings (and already published) for the urinary biomarkers. These biomarkers have already long been qualified by the FDA to evaluate renal toxicity and function. The newer investigation is the SDMA measurement in this context. Therefore it was important to include direct GFR measurements to provide the possibility for a thorough interpretation of SDMA and of Cys C findings (including relative performance to other biomarkers). Other comments: Lines 21-23. The authors state that SDMA correlates highly with GFR across multiple species including rats, dogs and humans. Line 69-71 this is repeated including cats. Based on current literature, this statement should be nuanced. Indeed, in dogs, Pelander et al. (2019) showed that overall diagnostic performance of SDMA as a marker of impaired GFR was the same as that of creatinine (both R2 = 0.62, P < .001) and this result was in line with McKenna et al. (2019) who concluded serum creatinine and SDMA were both only moderately correlated with the renal clearance (R2 = 0.52 and 0.27 respectively, p < .001). In cats, Brans et al. (2020) showed that the correlation between SDMA and GFR (τ B = −0.57; P < .001) was moderate and the correlation between sCr and GFR was of the same magnitude (τ B = −0.56; P < .001). Braff et al. (2014) equally observed that the relationship between SDMA and GFR (R2 = 0.82, P < .001) was very similar to the relationship between serum creatinine and GFR (R2 = 0.81, P <.001). Also in humans, a large meta-analysis of Kielstein et al. (2006) could not demonstrate outstanding correlation of 1/SDMA with GFR (r = 0.77 - 0.85, P < .001). Lines 139-150. Did the laboratory animal veterinarian use a scoring system for assessment of pain and well-being of the rats ? If yes, please state so. Lines 193-197. Please provide for all assays used: either appropriate references that include validation data or include validation data. Lines 200-208. Especially if animals are sacrificed, the maximum information should be gathered from the samples/study. It is not unexpected that glomerular changes on light microscopy were minimal in the antiFx1A treated rats. It is unclear why ME or IF techniques were not used. This would have allowed to bring the interpretation of the renal lesions to another level. In the results section, the authors make too much subjective interpretation of their data (the terms minimal, slightly … are used numerous numerous times). I don’t see a good argument why statistics were not performed for proteinuria ? Discussion: the first paragraph is too long (Lines 348-390). Line 438-440: please provide references for this statement on cystatin C. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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