Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 21, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-20342Assessment of the burden and factors influencing acute post-caesarean section pain in a tertiary facility in Ghana.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Osarfo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers have raised a number of concerns that we feel should be addressed. They feel that the portions of the methodology should be more clearly described. They also feel that the reliability of the results is questionable and this should be addressed. The reviewers also noted a number of English grammar and language issues and typos that must be resolved. The reviewers' comments can be viewed in full, below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 22 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PlosONE Review – CS pain control in KATH, Ghana Typos: ‘pan’ instead of ‘pain, p3 Explanations: Clear and transparent explanations for everything that was carried out including precise definitions of adequate or inadequate pain control, ‘at rest’ and ‘with movement’, and a validated pain score scale used within the questionnaire. Statistics: Data analysis described clearly and conducted with precision. Results - interpretations: As there were significant differences in experiences of pain for married or cohabiting women, this indicates that women need emotional support for pain management and/or someone to call out for their pain control needs. Content relevance: Well-constructed, original research that fills a gap in the literature around pain control after CS in Ghana. Future research: Could establish what can be done about the discrepancy between prescribed and administered analgesia by the nurses – e.g., as the authors suggested, further training in the importance of pain management for patient wellbeing and potentially the early mother-infant relationship. As the authors point out, future research could also measure differences in experienced pain between women who received a single analgesic and those who received combined analgesics. In addition, breastfeeding outcomes could be monitored and recorded to test the presumed associations between level of pain and ability to initiate successful breastfeeding. Issues: 1. P19 – movement was considered ‘presumably to breastfeed’ although women could move for other reasons post CS, such as visiting the bathroom, reaching for something such as a tissue or glass of water, or simply sitting up to eat a meal. 2. The authors speak about the possible interference of participant pain with mother-baby bonding, yet they do not mention using a bonding scale. Therefore, this gap could be filled in follow up work or in some future research study. 3. Although they state that women breastfed their babies despite inadequate pain control, they do not specify exactly how many women managed to do this or if it was all the participants. Although, as traditionally 100% of women initiate breastfeeding in some African countries such as Tanzania, this may have been the case in Ghana too. This could be clarified for western readers in the discussion on p20. Summary The main focus on the conclusion was on the findings about the difference in prescribed and administered pain control medication. Another important point seemed to be the difference in pain for women who received more social support from a partner and those who did not. It could also be that their pain control needs were better supported through having their partner present to speak up for them. It might be a good idea to state that a follow up study could benefit from the inclusion of validated mother-infant interactions and/or bonding scales, and also breastfeeding data, especially given that the authors’ main concern appeared to be the impacts of experienced pain and lack of effective pain control on mother-infant bonding and breastfeeding. Reviewer #2: In general the area of focus of the article is very interesting. But the papers requires major revision in the following areas � Title The title and the objectives of the study are not inline. For instance, the title included the burden of pain management but the main body of the document showed nothing regarding the burden of poor post cesarean delivery pain management. � Abstract The introduction and method sessions of the abstract didn’t provide clear information about the problem and the methodology the researchers went through � Introduction Well written, but in the objective part terms like adequacy are not measurable and vague � Methodology In general the methodology session should address at least the following points • The study design is not clearly described. It simply says prospective study. There are different prospective study types • It would be good if the post operative pain management protocol of the hospital was described. • The inclusion and exclusion criterias are not clearly stated. For instance, giving consent to participate in the study should not be considered as inclusion criteria. What about the American Society of Anesthesiologists (ASA) physical status of the patients for inclusion and exclusion criteria? Other possible inclusion and exclusion should be addressed. • The study didn’t consider other important factors which influence the severity of post cesarean delivery pain. For example, gestational age, type of local anesthetic used for spinal anesthesia, type of the post operative pain management modality used ( regional analgesia vs systemic analgesics), length of surgical incision, level of sensory block of the spinal anesthesia, quality of intraoperative analgesia and etc. were not addressed in the study. These factors are very critical for post cesarean delivery pain and analgesic quality assessment • Other important parameters to assess the effectiveness of post operative analgesia like total post operative analgesic consumption and time to first request of analgesia are better if included. • In the methodology session it says “VAS were categorized to define pain control as ‘adequate pain control’ (0-5) and ‘inadequate pain control’ (6-10).” do you have a reference for this statement � Result Fair! But unless the points and factor suggested in the comment of the method session are incorporated, the quality of the result is questionable. � Discussion Good! � Conclusion The conclusion session didn’t provide a clear summary of the finding of the research. Furthermore, the conclusion session clearly seems a recommendation. It would be better if it is rewritten to show what exactly the finding of the research is. ********** 6. 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Assessment and determinants of acute post-caesarean section pain in a tertiary facility in Ghana. PONE-D-21-20342R1 Dear Dr. Osarfo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Carla Pegoraro Division Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Carmen Power (PhD) |
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PONE-D-21-20342R1 Assessment and determinants of acute post-caesarean section pain in a tertiary facility in Ghana. Dear Dr. Osarfo: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr Carla Pegoraro Staff Editor PLOS ONE |
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