Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 14, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-04502Pneumatic equiaxial compression device for mechanical manipulation of epithelial cell packing and physiologyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ihalainen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please, address all the comments made by reviewers, especially those related to the utility and novelty of this experimental setup. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 15 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this paper, the authors designed an equiaxial cell compression device which is suitable for microscopy. The device can produce a maximum 8.5% radial pre-strain which leads to a 15% equiaxial areal compression as the pre-strain is released. Then this device is used to impose compression to epithelial cells, and they observed a decrease in cell cross-sectional area and an increase in cell layer height. In my opinion, the authors’ effort is extensive. However I still have some comments as listed below. 1. Why the equiaxial stress is important to cells? Compared with the 2D planar stress, the cells fate would be different with the equiaxial stress? It would be much easier to impose 2D planar stress to cells. Is it really necessary to impose the equiaxial stress? 2. In figures 3E and 3F, the Z-displacement decreases first and then increases. What is the reason? 3. Sometimes, periodic stress is needed for cells. I am wondering if this device enables the periodic stress. If so, how many cycles can the membrane bear. 4. After culturing cells and adding the medium, will the mechanical properties (e.g., stress-strain curve) of the membrane change? 5. Figure 4D and Figure 5A are blurred, can the authors replace them with the colorful images. Reviewer #2: Report on "Pneumatic equiaxial compression device ..." by Peussa et al. The authors report on a pneumatic cell stretcher that can be operated also for lateral cell compression. To this end, they introduced a pressure reservoir that would hold the suction pressure during the short period of time needed to transport the device from the cell culture incubator to the microscope. Moreover, they optimized the design of the silicone rubber device to minimize vertical motion during radial compression. After reading this manuscript and earlier work by the group, I find this manuscript describes incremental progress limited to technical aspects. The cell experiments performed with the improved instrument are of preliminary nature and reproduce well-established aspects of mechanobiology. The advantages of the set-up can be easily reproduced by mechanical devices based on translation stages. In those, you simply need to add a clamp or a locking screw to maintain a stable prestretch of the sample during cell culture and transport to the microscope. Moreover, a focus drift of about 40 to 50 microns as reported in the manuscript is good but not a major breakthrough. Overall, the material described here is fitting for the Supporting Information or the Materials and Methods part of a scientific paper but on its own it is not strong enough to justify a publication. Besides this general and strong concern, I find the manuscript prepared in a less than careful way. 1) It is not clear at all if the silicone rubber membrane was bought (if so, where?) or manufactured in house (if so, how?). 2) The claim of high resolution in light microscopy is exaggerated. A reduction of the optical resolution by a factor of 2 (see Table Fig. 3G) is severe. 3) The authors should state which type of Silpuran they used. At this moment in time, Wacker is offering at least eleven different RTV silicones of the Silpuran series. 4) Using the acronym PDMS instead of giving the proper type (Sylgard 184) is lab jargon. 5) In the prototype experiment, Fig 4, an area compression of 15% was applied via the substrate contraction. However, the average cell area decreased by 30% and the thickness did more than double with time. This should be explained. 6) The distribution of individual measurement points (dots) in Fig 5B clearly shows a non-Gaussian distribution. Even though the t-test requires data that are normally (i.e. Gaussian) distributed, the authors used this statistical test. Therefore, the conclusions about significance are void. Please note, this list is by no means exhaustive. Reviewer #3: Review of PONE-D-22-04502 This paper is impressive in the details provided for the testing and evaluation of a 2-D compression device for manipulating cells grown as a monolayer or thin layers of cells on a substrate. It provides preliminary data on experiments carried out on cells and characterizes a variety of different substrate materials in terms of autofluorescence for use with the stretcher. Additional studies are included to analyze the variability due to manufacturing multiple wells. This is a valuable addition to an area that has received quite a bit of interest. Experimentalists have been developing uniaxial and biaxial ways of stretching membranes to provide uniform tensile strain fields many of which mentioned in the paper. While the idea proposed to pre-stretch a membrane to provide compression by releasing the pre-stretch, it may not be new it may be the first publication of such a device and a demonstration of its use. The paper is well written, and the work is placed in context with prior studies. There are a few areas where I would suggest some minor changes to add further details, but other than that I see little to complain about and find this to be a nicely done and carefully caried out study. 1. Line 137 and 158 and in other places: I believe the word ‘stabilator’ should be replaced with ‘stabilizer’ if I understand its function correctly as a rigid barrier to prevent the outer wall from deforming. 2. I found it difficult to understand from Fig. 1 what the stabilizer is and does until I saw figure S1 in the Supplementary material. I suggest referencing this when first introducing the stabilizer. 3. The information on autofluorescence of the membranes is quite valuable for applications of these devices. Were you able to determine if here was any strain-dependence in the autofluorescence? 4. Line 213: The equation would be more useful to the general reader if the terms within the equation were defined, even if the calculation is a simple one. 5. Line 352: I am not sure I would characterize the strain response as being relatively linear with pressure based on the plots in Fig. 3. You state that hysteresis does not occur. How was that determined (over what length of time) and was that the case for each of the membrane materials? If pre-stretch was applied for 6 days in an incubator, as mentioned elsewhere, were you able to confirm that there were no strain changes due to stress relaxation at the temperature and humidity levels over that length of time? 6. You mention that the device applies equibiaxial strain. I assume from the description that the strain field is also uniform even close to the edges, although deformation of the inner wall may introduce disturbances in that. It might be worth mentioning the device also provides a uniform strain field. 7. One of the issues with devices like this is the fluid motion which can stimulate cells as well especially under cyclic loading. Have you been able to determine what the fluid effects are under cyclic loading when the side walls deform, since this would be likely to introduce some vertical motion of the fluid and fluid shear near the wall? 8. 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Pneumatic equiaxial compression device for mechanical manipulation of epithelial cell packing and physiology PONE-D-22-04502R1 Dear Dr. Ihalainen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Antonio Riveiro Rodríguez, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: My questions and concerns have all been addressed. I assume that the database posted in zenodo.org will be made publicly available after the paper is accepted. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes: John L. Williams |
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