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PONE-D-22-11663Metabolic size scaling reflects growth performance effects on age-size relationships in mussels (Mytilus galloprovincialis).PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Navarro, Thank you for submitting your fine manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not yet fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both referees of the manuscript have made good suggestions for edits that will improve the manuscript. Both referees have also made suggestions regarding the statistical analyses and/or presentation of the statistical results. Please make these minor edits and changes before resubmitting your manuscript. Along these lines, I have two further suggested minor edits. 1) In figure 3, you use all capital letters. Please change these to normal case as in the rest of the figures.2) In Table 2, you use r2, but in the rest of the manuscript you use R2. Please correct the table to match the rest of the paper. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 04 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments: This thoughtful, multi-faceted study tested whether the mass-scaling of metabolic rate is related to growth rate in juvenile mussels. It is unique in making both intra- and inter-individual comparisons during different growth periods. As a result, the authors provide largely positive support for the idea that increased growth rates cause metabolic scaling exponents to increase significantly. They also show that under low growth conditions, the metabolic scaling exponent approximates 2/3, thus conforming to surface area to volume limits (as empirically demonstrated for gill surface area and food clearance rates). In general, the results are interpreted reasonably in terms of the metabolic-level boundaries hypothesis. I have only two general comments/questions: 1) Did the authors compare the metabolic scaling of the slow vs. fast growers (as collective groups distinguished in their Figure 3)? This would seem to be a useful test of the idea that growth affects not only metabolic rate, but also its scaling with body mass. 2) In general, the authors appropriately cite much of the relevant literature, but I would suggest that they consider also citing the following studies, which specifically deal with relationships between growth rate and metabolic scaling in mollusks (albeit snails and not mussels): Czarnołęski, M., Kozłowski, J., Dumiot, G., Bonnet, J. C., Mallard, J., & Dupont-Nivet, M. (2008). Scaling of metabolism in Helix aspersa snails: changes through ontogeny and response to selection for increased size. Journal of Experimental Biology, 211(3), 391-400. Gaitán-Espitia, J. D., Bruning, A., Mondaca, F., & Nespolo, R. F. (2013). Intraspecific variation in the metabolic scaling exponent in ectotherms: testing the effect of latitudinal cline, ontogeny and transgenerational change in the land snail Cornu aspersum. Comparative Biochemistry and Physiology Part A: Molecular & Integrative Physiology, 165(2), 169-177. Specific comments: L 37: Change “metabolic level boundary” to “metabolic-level boundaries”. L 105: To avoid confusion with genetically based evolution, I suggest changing “size evolution” to “ontogenetic growth”. L 142: Please indicate that live weight (LW) includes shell mass, and not only living tissue. L 228: To avoid confusion with genetically based evolution, I suggest changing “size evolution” to “growth”. L 254: Change “other 11” to “11 other”. L 405-407: How can a constant scope for growth (independent of body size) account for a decline in mass-specific growth rate with age? L 517-518: The reference by McNab (2002) does not consider how ecological factors affect intraspecific metabolic scaling. McNab focuses on interspecific metabolic scaling, which he claims is fixed by “engineering” constraints. L 552-555: Awkward wording. Please clarify. L 558-560: Please clarify. The MLB hypothesis predicts that increasing activity should increase the metabolic scaling exponent. L 560: Change “precedent” to “present”. L 745: Change “2002” to “2020”. Table 1: What are the size ranges for these intra-individual scaling relationships? L 801, 806: Change “along” to “during”? L 819: Change “were found no-significant” to “were not significant”. Reviewer #2: The manuscript “Metabolic size scaling reflects growth performance effects on age-size relationships in mussels (Mytilus galloprovincialis)” investigates growth rates and mass-scaling patterns of metabolic rates in mussels. The study uses an interesting experimental design including both within- and among-individual analyses of growth rates and metabolic scaling. The authors find a gradient from slow to fast growth phenotypes across their experimental mussels. Although no significant differences are found in the mass-scaling of metabolism among individuals with slow or fast growth, the authors find that the overall mass-scaling exponent declines from ~3/4 to ~2/3 when growth rate is included in their mass-scaling models, matching the expected value under gill-surface dependent constraints. Overall, I think study addresses a very interesting topic using an exciting experimental setting including both longitudinal and cross-sectional analyses of growth rates and mass-scaling of metabolic rates. The introduction adequately summarises the overall framework and main questions, and the discussion provides reasonable interpretations for the main results based upon previous research and theoretical frameworks such as the metabolic level boundary hypothesis. Hence, I only have minor suggestions that I think might facilitate the reading of the manuscript. My main comment is that, although the metabolic level and scaling exponent appear unrelated to specific growth rates (SGR), the variance of both parameters declines towards higher SGR, with the scaling exponents becoming apparently more constrained around 2/3 as growth rate increases. I wonder if this reduction in variance indicates that higher energetic demands for growth ultimately constrains metabolic levels and scaling exponents to the values characteristic of surface dependent processes. Lines 87-89: Awkward phrasing, probably a comma is required after “populations”. Lines 92-96: I can’t follow the logical argument here: I understand that intra-specific analyses facilitate interpreting mass-scaling patterns of metabolic rates because body plan is conserved across individuals of the same species (point a), but why is “precise knowledge of allometric scaling exponents” required to study scaling exponents within populations (point b)? Lines 155-157: Please include definitions of standard metabolic rate, resting metabolic rate and clearance rates. Line 211: the variability in interindividual measurements (2-8) seems quite high considering that they are repeated measurements, was it due to mussel mortality? Also, the number of inter-individual samples in Group 1 was previously stated to be 100 individuals. Lines 231-232: This sentence seems unclear, why did the authors envisage differential phases in growth rates? I think this result rather emerged a posteriori. In addition, determination of three phases in the continuous variation shown in Fig. 1c seems quite arbitrary. I would recommend including results of a post-hoc test illustrating among-group differences in growth rate. Line 232: “were”. Lines 233-235: So growth was primarily structural rather than due to reserve accumulation? Do the authors think that this pattern would differ later in life, e.g., before reproduction? Lines 243-245: I agree that the observed deviations from the smooth exponential decay in growth rate can be used to interpret different phases of fast and slow growth; yet I would recommend performing a clustering post-hoc test to confirm that growth rate differed across three (or more?) different phases. Line 268: Please provide regression coefficient as well. Lines 346: Please provide P values for consistency with the rest of the Results section. Line 422-423: both metabolic levels and slopes are unrelated to growth rate, but there is a striking reduction in variance towards higher SGR values. This suggests that metabolic levels and slopes become more constrained (slopes values around ~2/3) when growth rates are higher. Can the authors provide an interpretation of this pattern? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Douglas S. Glazier Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Metabolic size scaling reflects growth performance effects on age-size relationships in mussels (Mytilus galloprovincialis). PONE-D-22-11663R1 Dear Dr. Navarro, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Erik V. Thuesen, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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