Peer Review History
Original SubmissionOctober 8, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-32369Comparison of triple-DMEK to pseudophakic-DMEK: a cohort study of 95 eyesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Perone, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 11 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The topic of this retrospective cohort study is of current interest. Abstract 36-41 Separate preoperative and postoperative findings 38 (0.05 "vs." 0.05 logMAR) Same facts should not be mentioned repeatedly in the abstract. The following aspects should be rephrased: - Similar complication rates <-- Rebubbling rates differ considerably (40% vs. 24%). - “Better” spherical refraction in triple-DMEK <-- This results from different preconditions (Pre-DMEK Sph. Eq.: -0.13 vs. +0.23) Preoperative examination 105 Why didn’t you use standard logMAR visual acuity charts (EDTRS), also for comparison with other studies Surgical technique 154 Refractive target in triple-DMEK: "-"0.5? to -1.00 Statistical analyses “All data were complete for each patient.” ?? “Fig. 1: 2 lost to follow up” Mean+/-SD and Student’s t-test were used. How did you test for (and confirm) normal distribution? Patient Selection “Patients were excluded if the indication was not FECD and/or the patient had eye damage that could influence visual acuity…” - 203 -212 Why did you include eyes with non-FECD and other pathologies (Fig.1: retinal detachment, AMD, vitreomacular traction,…) in the first place and excluded them afterwards? Primary and secondary study outcomes 239 “triple-DMEK group tended to have a smaller residual hyperopia” - But refractional target in triple-DMEK was -0.5 to -1.0 D and in the pseudophakic group preop. Sph. Eq. was already hyperopic (+0.23 D) 265 ”40% required one re-bubbling versus 24% for the pseudophakic-DMEK group (p=0.09)” - Please check significance. Discussion 277-279 Rephrase statements regarding “the only” differences between both methods, hyperopia and rebubbling 318-319 “the greater ECL in triple DMEK may not have clinical consequences in the long term” – This sentence should be removed. See your findings: Triple-DMEK was associated with consistently lower ECD at 3, 6, 12 month and at 12 months, the mean ECL was 54% vs. 48% (236-238). The consequences of progredient cell loss (in total >1000 in the first 12 months) should not be underestimated. 330-331 Rebubbling rates (see above) 358-361 “Hyperopic differences” (see above) 374 Separate conclusion for study methods and discussion of a third approach 377 Complication rates (see above) 379-381 Repeated statement Reviewer #2: Dear editor, Dear authors, thank you for inviting me to review this manuscript that analyzes outcomes in triple-DMEK and pseudophakic-DMEK based on 95 eyes. Comments: 1 Line 56: “DMEK is the treatment of choice for FECD“. This does not apply in general: The latest 2019 Eye Banking Statistical Report of the United States of America indicates that DMEK has not yet surpassed DSEK (see: https://restoresight.org/wp-content/uploads/2020/04/2019-EBAA-Stat-Report-FINAL.pdf, page 7). 2 Line 63: “In 2016, 93% of all corneal transplants in the USA were conducted for FECD“. This is not true – then, there would be only 7% other corneal diseases requiring corneal transplantation in the United States for that year ... The 2016 Eye Banking Statistical Report of the United States of America reports that “Fuchs‘ dystrophy was the most common indication for keratoplasty again in 2016 (17,016, 23.3% (!)). (…) 93.1% of patients with Fuchs‘ dystrophy were treated with EK“. (see: http://restoresight.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/04/2016_Statistical_Report-Final-040717.pdf , page 10). The authors may would like to quote the original data from the Eye Banking Report which is freely available. 3 Lines 71: The reader would be interested in more details about these studies. How many patients were these studies based on ? How old were the patients ? Was the stage of FECD comparable in the different studies ? 4 Line 87: Typo clincaltrials.gov. 5 Line 106: I would suggest using “near visual acuity“ instead of “close visual acuity“. 6 Line 108: Which device was used for anterior segment imaging ? 7 Line 197: Were the groups examined for normal distribution before selecting the statistical test ? 8 Table 1: I do not understand the number of patients indicated under “female sex“ in the “Triple-DMEK“ group. The “Triple-DMEK“ group consisted of 34 patients. How can there be 37 patients with female sex in this group ? What do the percentages relate to ? 9 Line 329 and following: Rebubbling rates also depend on whether air or SF6-gas is used in DMEK procedure. Are the results based on air or gas tamponade ? I hope my comments will help you to improve your manuscript. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Revision 1 |
PONE-D-21-32369R1Comparison of triple-DMEK to pseudophakic-DMEK: a cohort study of 95 eyesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Perone, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please check for the remaining errors identified by the reviewer. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 21 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have revised their manuscript according to the reviewers' suggestions. However, a minor issue needs to be resolved: The data shown in Table 1 does not correspond to the data about their own study (!) as shown in Supplemental Table S1. Mean age of patients in the study is stated to be 70 (Triple DMEK) and 72 (Pseudophakic-DMEK) in table 1. Supplemental Table S1 states "72 vs. 69". Same for the number of patients (55(43) vs. 40(34) in table 1 and 55(43) vs. 34(40) in supplemental table S1). Same for female sex (79% and 86% in table 1 versus 68% and 67% in supplemental table S1). Same for BSCVA (0.50 in table 1 and 0.63/0.59 in supplemental table S1). Actually, proofreading and noticing of such errors should be done by the authors themselves ! ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-32369R2 Comparison of triple-DMEK to pseudophakic-DMEK: a cohort study of 95 eyes Dear Dr. Perone: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Timo Eppig Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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