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PONE-D-21-40739High-dose vitamin D versus placebo to prevent complications in COVID-19 patients: multicentre randomized controlled clinical trialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mariani, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 20 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please clearly report in the manuscript (or supplementary material) any change to methods after trial commencement, with reasons. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 3. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors report results of multicentre RCT, conducted in 17 hospitals and including 218 adult patients randomized to 500 000 IU of vitamin D3 or placebo. The primary endpoint was the change in the respiratory SOFA score (from SpO2) between baseline and the highest value recorded up to day 7. The authors show that among hospitalized patients with mild-to-moderate COVID-19 and risk factors, a single high oral dose of vitamin D3 versus placebo did not prevent respiratory worsening. An interesting a well-conducted study, with “negative” results explained by an over-optimistic hypothesis that vitamin D could be a cure to the respiratory manifestations of COVID-19 (this needs to be discussed). The authors, as many others seem convinced that Vit D3 would act as a anti-viral drug in patients who have been sick for about a week before receiving the high-dose vitamin supplement. This is forgetting that micronutrients are not drugs and need to be incorporated into metabolism which requires at least 4-5 days to then exert their antioxidant, metabolic, immune, and endocrine functions. It would be miraculous if VitD3 could be a respiratory cure. The Ref 29 Martineau-2017-meta-analyis [1] indeed indicates that Vit.D supplementation is safe and protects against acute respiratory tract infection overall, but especially in those who were vitamin D deficient. It was not about cure, but about prevention, and there are other meta showing not effect [2]. Study design – 2nd §: please rewrite – “first stage” and “2nd stage” are probably primary and secondary endpoints. Page 9: please complete: rSOFA … “since it was…” Although SpO2 has been validated as a surrogate for the Pa/FiO2 ratio in the SOFA, please provide the ranges of SpO2 used to attribute 0 to 4 points of r-score. Page 9-last §: Please be more specific about numbers when your write “a sample…”: how many? Statistics Page 10-2nd §: “normal assumption” is probably “normal distribution” – please replace Stat Page 10: “would give...” do you mean “would complete the primary endpoint” ? Page 13: please reorganize the first sentence Discussion. Page 15: please change “impairment” to “worsening”. Page 16: top “other trials” (add “s”) Very correctly the authors discuss the fact (2nd §) that the baseline VitD levels of their patients did not reveal real deficiencies (study conducted during summer-autumn). This should be emphasized in the discussion, and compared to similar results in critically ill. Non-ICU patients were enrolled but as large VitD3 trials have been conducted in critically ill patients showing negative results this needs to be discussed [3]. Of note in ICU patients only those with real deficiency might have had benefit on mortality (not the aim here of course) [4]. Limitations: suggestion to discuss the fact that although SpO2 has been validated as a surrogate …. It may not be as specific as the P/FO2 ratio. And of course the absence of vit.D deficit Table 1: are there results of C-reactive protein? – this CRP is important to determine as VitD, as most micronutrients decrease proportionally to the level of inflammation [5] likely to have been present in your patients, further complicating the interpretation of the results. Please replace the subtitle “current smoker” by “Smoking”, as current smoker appears below Please move the last line of table about “Time” to the top of the table under the numbers of patients Delete all “Median IQR” from the table itself and make it a footnote Please specific the number of patients with blood determination of VitD Reference 34: Please complete it Figure 2 A: the changes (or their absence) in rSOFA are not visible as presented – would be better to show individual values with initial and last. Does this figure indicate that overall, except for one patient none improved their scores over 7 days? Please comment Last figure 3 – please change “si” to « yes” on diabetes 1. Martineau A. R., Jolliffe D. A., Hooper R. L., Greenberg L., Aloia J. F., Bergman P. et al. Vitamin D supplementation to prevent acute respiratory tract infections: systematic review and meta-analysis of individual participant data. BMJ 2017; 356:i6583. 2. Pham H., Waterhouse M., Baxter C., Duarte Romero B., McLeod D. S. A., Armstrong B. K. et al. The effect of vitamin D supplementation on acute respiratory tract infection in older Australian adults: an analysis of data from the D-Health Trial. Lancet Diabetes Endocrinol 2021; 9:69-81. 3. Amrein K., Parekh D., Westphal S., Preiser J. C., Berghold A., Riedl R. et al. Effect of high-dose vitamin D3 on 28-day mortality in adult critically ill patients with severe vitamin D deficiency: a study protocol of a multicentre, placebo-controlled double-blind phase III RCT (the VITDALIZE study). BMJ Open 2019; 9:e031083. 4. Holick MF. The vitamin D deficiency pandemic: Approaches for diagnosis, treatment and prevention. Rev Endocr Metab Disord 2017; 18:153-65. 5. Duncan A, Talwar D, McMillan DC, Stefanowicz F, O'Reilly DS. Quantitative data on the magnitude of the systemic inflammatory response and its effect on micronutrient status based on plasma measurements. Am J Clin Nutr 2012; 95:64-71. Reviewer #2: I appreciate the opportunity to review the manuscript reporting the results of a randomised clinical trial investigating the effect of high-dose vitamin D in patients with COVID-19. The investigators should be commended for completing the trial in the difficult circumstances of the COVID-19 pandemic. I have reviewed the manuscript with the trial protocol, which was published in Trials and registered in ClinicalTrials.gov. Please find my comments below. 1. Please provide how the random allocation sequence was generated and embedded in the web system. 2. Age > 45 was a part of inclusion criteria, and randomisation was stratified by age > 60. Were there any rationales for these cut-offs, particularly for age > 45 in the inclusion criteria? 3. Some of the reported secondary outcomes were different from those supposed to be reported in the trial registration. “The combined end-point of FiO2 > 40%, NIV or invasive MV” was neither registered nor in the published protocol (Trials). This should not be reported as secondary outcomes. If the authors think this needs to be informed, it should be reported as post-hoc analysis. 4. The trial registration listed the following outcomes as secondary outcomes. The results should be reported as defined. Myocardial infarction, stroke, acute kidney injury, pulmonary embolism, the combined outcome, and ICU length of stay. 5. It was unclear how rSOFA was scored using SpO2. Also, Figure 2 indicated that some patients scored as “-1”. This should be explained. 6. Subgroup analyses were not defined in trial registration or pre-published protocol. Furthermore, the reported subgroup analyses differed from what was defined in the investigator’s protocol attached as a supplement. The results of subgroup analysis described in the investigator’s protocol should be reported as such, and the other subgroup analyses should be moved out or reported as post-hoc. Also, conducting such many subgroup analyses in only 200 patients would not be appropriate. 7. The criteria to stop the trial at the first stage were not clearly reported. Please provide the details. 8. The distribution of patients with asthma or COPD appeared to be imbalanced between the groups. The authors may want to add comments and additional analysis incorporating the adjustment for the imbalance. 9. Please provide the rationale for the dosing regimen. Why did the trial give only a bolus dose without daily doses, as the authors might be aware? Reviewer #3: The authors describe the results of a multi-center, double-blinded RCT of Vitamin D3 supplementation as a potential treatment to prevent respiratory complications among hospitalized COVID-19 patients with mild to moderate infection. They find no evidence that a single high oral dose of vitamin D3 prevented respiratory impairment relative to placebo. While the study design largely appears to be sound, and while this study provides useful additional information on the potential role of vitamin D3 supplementation in the treatment of COVID-19 (a topic on which no clear consensus has, as of yet, emerged), I have some concerns about the statistics used, particularly for the primary outcome and for the subgroup analyses: Major Comments: * The 95% confidence intervals for the primary outcome (change in rSOFA score) and several other secondary outcomes (such as change in SpO2) are just single points (95% CI: (0,0)) and so are not useful/nonsensical. Although it is not explicitly stated how the bootstrap was conducted and how these bootstrapped 95% CIs were formed, the bootstrap seems to have been a nonparametric bootstrap (sampling with replacement from the observed data, conditional perhaps on randomization arm or other factors) and the CIs appear to be percentile confidence intervals. Based on the distribution of change scores in Figure 3a, from which we can see that almost 75% of the change scores in both arms are exactly zero, the median change score in each arm is almost guaranteed to be exactly zero in every single one of the bootstrap resamples, leading to a difference in median change score of exactly zero as well. To me, this suggests that the bootstrap distribution is not, in this case, a good approximation to the sampling distribution. To address this issue, it might be worth considering a smoothed bootstrap instead. Alternatively, switching the primary analysis to the Hodges-Lehman estimator and corresponding 95% CI might also be appropriate. * What was the outcome for the subgroup analysis? The "Subgroups" section of the "Results" section suggests that the subgroup analysis looked at the primary outcome (which was change in rSOFA score from baseline), but the analysis itself was carried out using Poisson regression, which is most appropriate for count data and which does not accommodate negative dependent variables (at least one individual in the dataset had a negative change in rSOFA score from baseline). It is also unclear how one would interpret an IRR for a non-count outcome. As such, if the outcome of interest for the subgroup analysis is in fact change in rSOFA from baseline, I would recommend choosing a different analysis model (e.g., a repeated measures ANCOVA using the baseline and follow-up rSOFA scores, a quantile regression approach using the change score, or an ordinal regression model to capture the odds of observing a score change greater than or equal to some value y). * Were there any issues with missing data or loss to follow-up? If so, how were they addressed? * The decision to exclude all women of child-bearing age strikes me as a potential limitation/threat to generalizability. Given that other vitamin d3 trials have not made such exclusions (for example, the RCT of vitamin d3 supplementation in patients with moderate to severe COVID-19 only excluded individuals who were currently pregnant or lactating), why was this decision made? Minor Comments: * Please carefully review and revise for grammar. For example, the first line of the abstract reads "The role of oral vitamin D3 supplementation for hospitalized patients with COVID-19 patients remain..." The second "patients" is redundant, and "remain" should be "remains". Reviewer #4: The authors presented the results of the first stage of a multicentre randomized controlled clinical trial evaluating high-dose vitamin D versus placebo to prevent complications in COVID-19 patients. The manuscript is well structured and follows the pre-registered and published protocol. I have only some remarks. The authors stated in the manuscript, that “178 patients would give the first stage of the trial 80% power to detect a between study groups difference of one point in the change of rSOFA, assuming a standard deviation (SD) of 2, and a type I error of 5%.”. Whereas the protocol states that “168 patients would be needed, 84 per group”. I would suggest to clarify the difference in the estimated number of patients. Moreover. I would like to suggest that the assumptions of the sample size estimation be presented. Since a Mann-Whitney U test was planned and used for the analysis of the change in rSOFA score, there should be assumptions on provision probability between groups besides power and significance level. In addition, it should be noted, that a Mann-Whitney U test does not compare medians (see e.g. Divine et al. DOI: 10.1080/00031305.2017.1305291). Therefore, I would suggest to adjust the presentation of results (median (IQR) of change in rSOFA per group) accordingly. The assignment of patients to treatment was performed by means of block randomization stratified by site, age and diabetes. It is well known from the literature that stratified randomization leads to correlation between groups. If the analysis does not account for the stratification factors, a loss in power could occur so that the resulting p-values may be too large and confidence intervals to wide. The impact of the adjusted analysis depends on the association between outcome and stratification factor. It may be assumed that the factors are chosen because they are related to the outcome. Therefore, I would recommend to include all stratification factors (site, age and diabetes) in a sensitivity analysis, which accompanies the planned main analysis. Reviewer #5: This well-written manuscript reports findings of a multi-centre, double-blind, placebo-controlled trial investigating effects of high-dose vitamin D (single dose of 500,000 IU) on clinical outcomes in hospitalised patients with COVID-19 descrbed as ‘moderate to mild’ (though there were 7 deaths out of ~200 participants). The results extend those of Murai et al (JAMA 2020) who showed no effect of 200,000 in moderate to severe COVID-19. Strengths include multi-centre nature of the study, with utilisation of the SOFA score as primary outcome – the European Medicines Agency has accepted that a change in the SOFA score is an acceptable surrogate marker of efficacy in exploratory trials of novel therapeutic agents in sepsis. The study forms an important addition to the literature. There are some limitations, none of which I see as being major: 1. Dosing regimen: the investigators used a very large bolus dose of vitamin D. The advantage is that 25(OH)D levels were elevated quickly. The potential disadvantages are a) safety (25[OH]D levels attained in intervention arm may be associated with toxicity) and b) the unphysiologic rapid elevation then fall in 25(OH)D levels, which may not support immune function optimally. But this is covered in the discussion. 2. Baseline 25D levels were only measured in a subset of participants, which precludes sub-group analysis to see whether effects were seen in those with low baseline vitamin D status. Of note, baseline 25OHD levels were quite high: 32.5 ng/ml (IQR 27.2 to 44.2) and 30.5 ng/ml – so results cant be generalised to populations where deficiency is common. This limitation should be mentioned in the discussion. 3. Inclusion criteria: some are quite subjective, e.g. ‘an expected hospitalization for at least 24 hours’ ‘life expectancy <6 months’ ‘any condition at discretion of investigator impeding to understand the study’ A bit more detail is needed re how an objective call was made on these. 4. ‘Post-treatment 25-OH VitD levels were 102.0 ng/ml’ – please specify timepoint 5. Were statistical analyses adjusted for stratification factors? They should be. 6. The study had relatively short follow-up – was there any difference in incidence of chronic symptoms / ‘long covid’ between arms? Reviewer #6: The authors conducted a RCT to evaluate whether vitamin D3 supplementation could prevent respiratory failure in hospitalized patients with mild/moderate COVID-19. The therapy was not associated with any benefit on the respiratory function. The trial is well conducted, and the results well presented and well discussed. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-21-40739R1High-dose vitamin D versus placebo to prevent complications in COVID-19 patients: multicentre randomized controlled clinical trialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mariani, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 12 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Death is considered an adverse event? - Results, adverse events. You are reporting in the text 45 adverse events (or serious adverse events? unclear). However, Table 3 reported only 4 events. - Table 2. This table refer to serious adverse events, correct? Please correct the caption. Furthermore, I suggest to invert the order of the columns (VitD before placebo, as in Table 1 and 2) [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #6: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Globally the authors have addressed the comments and the study is of interest. but the rSOFA definition remains problematic: either authors have not understood the question … or they do not want to respond. The request was to please provide the ranges of SpO2 and FiO2 used to attribute 0 to 4 points of r-score. The answer is the classical P/FO2 ratios ? “Values of ratios SpO2/FiO2 for rSOFA calculations were as follows: >=400, rSOFA 0; <400 and >=300, rSOFA 1; <… » is an inappropriate answer - Please profile the SpO2 values that were used to attribute rSOFA scores of 0,… 4. In my ICU: an SpO2 of 98-100% under 2L/min O2 results would be graded as “1”, etc. (please provide the FiO2 from 2-3-4-5 l/mi O2) Reviewer #2: I would thank the authors for responding to my comments. The responses sound fair, however, leaving some minor concerns as follows. 1. The authors added, “Castor was used for randomization and data collection” to explain how the randomization and treatment allocation was done. However, this is not clear for readers at all. General (international) readers do not know what Castor was. 2. If any, please provide the rationale that the authors added a threshold of age >45 as a risk for disease progressing. If there is not, and the threshold was merely set arbitrarily, that would be fine but should be mentioned in the manuscript as such. 3. The authors replied that there were no stroke, myocardial infarction, and pulmonary embolism events. However, this was not reported in the manuscript. Please be noted that all outcomes planned to be measured in the protocol should be reported even if there were no events. “No events” itself is an important finding. 4. I would suggest the authors provide the result adjusting for an imbalanced variable (asthma or COPD) in the supplementary materials to support the main finding as additional exploratory analysis. Reviewer #3: The authors have taken strong efforts to address my initial concerns and comments. I still have two remaining questions about the statistical analysis, as well as a number of grammatical/typographical suggestions. Statistical Analysis: * For the main analysis of the primary and secondary endpoints (Table 2), please report the sample statistic for the between-group difference in medians, rather than the mean of the smoothed bootstrap distribution; the bootstrapping procedure is necessary only to quantify uncertainty in/estimate a confidence interval for the point estimate from the sample. * I still have some questions about missing data and the primary outcome definition. Was the rSOFA measured daily for all trial participants on all days from admission through discharge? Or were there some participants for whom one or more daily measurements were missing? I ask because--while the outcome definition (which focuses on the change from baseline to highest *recorded* post-baseline rSOFA score) does somewhat skirt the issue of missing data---if any individuals were missing rSOFA measurements for one or more post-baseline days, the recorded change potentially underestimates the true change. And if missing data patterns systematically differ between the two study arms, there could be bias as a result. If there are missed/missing measurements in the data, please comment on this missing data/the missing data patterns as well as any implications for your analysis. Grammatical/Typographical Suggestions: * Page 5 (revised version): the last sentence of the first paragraph ("Vitamin D reduce pro-inflammatory cytokines, increase those with anti-inflammatory actions...") should be split in two ("these actions could potentially improve clinical outcomes of patients with COVID-19 pneumonia" should be its own sentence) and "reduce"/"increase"/"upregulate" should all be singular ("reduces"/"increases", "upregulates"). * Page 5 (revised version): "the evidence supporting the role of vitamin D supplementation to treat patients with COVID-19 remain inconclusive..." should use "remains" * Page 8 (revised version): the clause "since was recognized as risk factor after the study begun" is missing an object and should likely read "since it was recognized as a risk factor after the study began" * Page 15 (revised version): "theses percentages for participants in the placebo group were" contains a typo * Page 20 (revised version): the sentence "Although results of vitamin D3 supplementation for treatment of patients with COVID-19 could be teoretically modified by the serum vitamin D status, with defficient populations" contains two typos * Page 21 (revised version): "the study was underpower to detect differences between groups on clinically important events" should read "the study was underpowered" * Page 21 (revised version): the sentence "the measured serum 25-OH VitD levels were sufficient wether different results" contains a typo and is also incomplete * Page 21 (revised version): the sentence "The SpO2/FiO2 ratio used as primary outcome have been validated as surrogate of PO2/FiO2, although validation studies did not included pacients with COVID-19, our results were consistent for several measures of respiratory worsening" contains a typo ("pacients"), should be broken into two or more sentences, and should be checked for verb tense and subject/verb agreement Reviewer #4: I thank the authors for considerung my comments. 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