Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-38525Diagnostic accuracy of the Lumbar Spinal Stenosis-Diagnosis Support Tool and the Lumbar Spinal Stenosis-Self-administered, Self-reported History QuestionnairePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kurita, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please amend the manuscript according to the suggestion of the reviewers. Please discuss the reasons, where this might not be possible. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 14 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I congratulate the authors on a well conducted study and well-written manuscript. I have only minor suggestions for revisions and some areas for consideration. I am happy to review a revised version of the manuscript. Introduction Line 2. Suggest to include prevalence estimates from Jensen 2021 “Prevalence of lumbar spinal stenosis in general and clinical populations: a systematic review and meta-analysis” (10.1007/s00586-020-06339-1) as this is the most recent and comprehensive review of prevalence estimates for LSS. Lines 56-58. I question whether the diagnosis needs to be made by an orthopedic surgeon. There are many other medical specialties (and health professionals) that are primary contact for people with LSS. In fact, on line 76 you report that primary care physicians also diagnose LSS. At minimum, I would suggest a reference for the statement that LSS need be diagnosed by a well-trained orthopedic surgeon. Line 66. Suggest to define NASS for readers here and remove from line 75. Line 80. Suggest to add “diagnostic guidelines” after NASS. Materials and methods Line 90. I would appreciate more clarity on how this study data was collected. 1,657 hospitals is a large recruitment procedure. Was this data collected specifically for this study, or integrated into the standard data collection across these centers? Perhaps a national registry? Results Line 181. Were those not included different from those that were? Is the data available to check this? It is important to know how these individuals differed in clinical characteristics. A selection bias may have been introduced where people with more severe disease were included, therefore inflating the diagnostic accuracy of the tools. For example, it appears that the age, sex, and presence of LSS could be compared between those included and those with missing or inappropriate data (n=7,338). Figure 1. It is not clear how participants were excluded from the figure. I suggest that the “Excluded box” contain only those with missing data that were excluded. As written now, the numbers listed under exclusion sum to much greater than 7338. Please report missing data in a separate box. It would also be helpful to report how many patients were screened but declined to participate. Line 183. It would be helpful to have more baseline characteristic information on all participants, since the diagnostic accuracy of a tool is dependent on the study population. Perhaps there was no other data collected, but if so, I would highly recommend greater description of the study cohort. Discussion Lines 284-286. I am not convinced that real world diagnosis should be considered a strong gold-standard/criterion measure. I do agree with the authors in that specialist diagnosis is the best that is currently available, but I would like to see some discussion around the fact that a clinician-based reference standard test can be problematic. In fact, the authors do later discuss the limitations of having no consensus diagnostic definition for LSS, so I would suggest that the language around “our findings on diagnostic accuracy can be considered valid” be softened and some additional uncertainty be presented. It would also be prudent to comment on the potential variation in clinician diagnosis standards across the large number of participating clinicians. It is probable that different clinicians would arrive at conflicting results on the reference standard for LSS, at least in a proportion of patients. Line 299-301. It is a bold claim that the care setting is unlikely to alter the comparison of the three index tests. I do, however, respect the right of the authors to make this claim, but suggest that some reasoning be provided. Why would spectrum bias not be a concern here? Reviewer #2: This study was conducted to compare the sensitivity and specificity of lumbar spinal stenosis diagnosis utilizing the Lumbar Spinal Stenosis-Diagnosis Support Tool (LSS-DST), the Lumbar Spinal Stenosis - Self-administered, Self-reported History Questionnaire (LSS-SSHQ) and the clinical description of LSS from the NASS diagnostic guidelines in a secondary care hospital setting. The authors concluded that “the LSS-DST and LSS-SSHQ had significantly higher sensitivity for diagnosing LSS in patients with LBP than the clinical description of LSS from the NASS diagnostic guidelines.” This reviewer has some criticisms, which should be addressed by the authors. These tools have been used to “support” the diagnosis of LSS. This reviewer thinks that the most important thing in the management patients with LSS does prevent mis diagnosis when physicians, who are not spine specialists, use these tools in clinical setting. Considering the clinical relevancy, this reviewer thinks that it is important to precise if the score was not involved in the setting, the diagnosis of patients, who examined by the tools, must be “not” LSS. Therefore, the negative predictive value of these tools is more important than the sensitivity and specificity. Negative predictive values should be shown and compared among three tools. Utilizing the typical clinical description of LSS according to the North American Spine Society (NASS), this reviewer does think that the description in point 1 is important items to diagnose the LSS. If this description was excluded, the NASS description to diagnose the LSS should not be used in the present study. Reviewer #3: This paper is well written. This study is a large-scale cross-sectional study and is noteworthy. We agree that the two tools used in this study, LSS-DST and LSS-SSHQ can be used to improve the diagnostic accuracy of LSS. Reviewer #4: Q1. Why do authors hypothesize that LSS-DST and LSS-SSHQ would be more sensitive and more useful for screening than the clinical description of LSS from the NASS diagnostic guidelines? (Line 85-86) Q2. Did the author use the list or questionnaire to confirm the clinical description of LSS from the NASS diagnostic guidelines? Or did the authors confirm the clinical description of LSS from the NASS diagnostic guidelines from the items of LSS-DST and LSS-SSHQ? Because at least from the previous reports from your group, the reviewer could not find the description regarding “the clinical description of LSS from the NASS diagnostic guidelines”. Comment: 1. Authors emphasized sensitivity or screening for LSS. But authors also discuss the specificity, the reviewer thinks. 2. I clinical setting, how do primary care physician use LSS-DST, LSS-SSHQ and the clinical description of LSS from the NASS diagnostic guidelines. Authors should describe it. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: James J. Young Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-38525R1 Diagnostic accuracy of the Lumbar Spinal Stenosis-Diagnosis Support Tool and the Lumbar Spinal Stenosis-Self-administered, Self-reported History Questionnaire Dear Dr. Kurita: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Michael C Burger Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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