Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 3, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-28658PEGDA microencapsulated allogeneic islets reverse canine diabetes without immunosuppression PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Stehno-Bittel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We recommend that you provide quantitative data, insulin secretion function of islets and statistical analysis concerning the overall output of the in vivo study (cell viability pre-and after transplantation, presence of insulin-positive islets after explant, ability of islets to respond to glucose stimulation after explant, average and error of glucose concentration on transplanted individuals vs controls overtime, etc). Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 28, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript presents an interesting approach in which an oil-free method is used to produce PEGDA microgels (UV-crosslinked), and these biomaterials are used as immuneprotective carriers for the transplantation of pancreatic islets in dogs. This is a thourough study that showcases the developed materials as promising platforms for islet transplantation. The manuscript, however, lacks the presentation of data in bulk (in plots, for example), showcasing quantitative data and statistical analysis concerning the overall output of the in vivo study (cell viability pre-and after transplantation, presence of insulin-positive islets after explant, ability of islets to respond to glucose stimulation after explant, average and error of glucose concentration on transplanted individuals vs controls overtime, etc). Overall, the lack of bulk data and statistical analysis severely weakens the manuscript. Additionally, histological analysis of the tissues after transplantation is needed to exclude the formation of a fibrotic capsule (although not visible) or pro-inflammatory environment surrounding the capsules. Therefore, I believe that after data treatment and bulk statistical treament of data (and further discussion), the manuscript may be suitable for publication. Reviewer #2: Harrington and colleagues studied microencapsulated canine islet allotransplantation and provided interesting results as pilot study. However, there are major issues needed to be addressed in this study. 1) In section of “Cytotoxicity of CSS Crosslinking Procedure”, authors performed analysis on the effect of CaCl2 concentration and presence of initiator, showed the changes on viability. For these cells, investigation of viability and functionality are crucial to see the performance of the proposed system. Because it will be a system functioning as a pancreatic endocrine tissue, changes in insulin secretion should also be reported. Viability alone will not be sufficient. 2) For different concentrations of CaCl2 and initiator, how is the size of the spheres affected? 3) How is the islet size and cell number related to the insulin secretion response? How will the stimulation index change? 4) Although explanations about histological analysis is given, figures of such study will be useful. 5) In Table 1, viabilities are around 60%-75%. Is this level acceptable for the transplant? Can authors comment on whether the possibility of factors released from that much of dead cells can contribute the immune response observed? 6) In healthy animals, as controls, microsphere only group is mentioned, but as in Table 1, healthy animals also received islet transplantation. These animals have already functional islets so there is no use of transplantation for them. But the lack of control group is problematic. If there is any data, it should be provided for a comparison. 7) Figure 3 shows post-encapsulation viability above 97.5% whereas in Table 1, it is around 60%-75%. Can authors explain the reason for such difference? 8) After which level of glucose (mg/dl) authors accepted dogs diabetic? 9) In the manuscript, authors mostly compared diabetics dogs #5-7 with healthy #1. What about #2-4? Did they show similar results with #1? 10) Changes in the blood glucose levels in healthy animals should be provided throughout the study. 11) Healthy animal group is composed female dogs and diabetic ones are male. Is there a specific reason for this? 12) In section “Explanted Microspheres”, there are no Figure 7C and Figure 7D. Figure 7C should be Figure 8B. Figure 7D should be Figure 8C. 13) When comparing groups, animals having same period of treatment should be used. For example, comparisons are made between #1 and #5-7. But post encapsulation duration is referred as nearly 1 month for #1 and for #5-7, it is about 2 months. For example, for both groups, it should be 1 month or 2 months. 14) After optimization, which condition is used to encapsulate islets for transplantation? 15) Did authors count how many islets are there in each microspheres? 16) What is the porosity of PEG hydrogel? 17) Can authors comment on reason on why #5-7 show different profiles on insulin levels (Figure 6)? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PEGDA microencapsulated allogeneic islets reverse canine diabetes without immunosuppression PONE-D-21-28658R1 Dear Dr. Lisa Stehno-Bittel, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Seda Kizilel, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Authors addressed all my comments and I would to thank for their effort. All a final comment, on tables, plus sign should be plus minus sign. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-28658R1 PEGDA Microencapsulated Allogeneic Islets Reverse Canine Diabetes without Immunosuppression Dear Dr. Stehno-Bittel: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Seda Kizilel Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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