Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 13, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-36119Comparison of delivery outcomes in low-dose and high-dose oxytocin regimens for induction of labor following cervical ripening with a balloon catheterPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kruit, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 12 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General: This study covers an interesting topic comparing the delivery outcomes of low-dose and high-dose oxytocin protocols for labour induction following cervical ripening by balloon catheter. Overall, the authors show that: - The new high-dose protocol increases the rate of vaginal delivery. - The new high-dose protocol reduces the rates of maternal and neonatal infection - There was no difference between the rates of post-partum hemorrhage, umbilical artery blood pH-value <7.05 or neonatal intensive care admissions. The study addresses how findings relate to previous research in the area. The introduction is supported by literature, it summarises the main controversies around oxytocin use (timing, dose infusion type, hyperstimulation, infection). Authors discuss limitations of the study. Weaknesses: A weakness of the study is the lack of uterine hyperstimulation data, which authors also recognise as being a limitation of the study. Suggested revisions Major issues: 1. Title: It would be recommended for authors to add the study design in the title. For example: “Comparison of delivery outcomes in low-dose and high-dose oxytocin regimens for induction of labor following cervical ripening with a balloon catheter: A retrospective observational cohort study.” 2. Abstract: a. Methods: Specify how many patients in each group i.e. low-dose oxytocin protocol (n= x) and high dose oxytocin protocol (n= y). b. Results: Authors should add induction to delivery interval in results section of abstract as results from other secondary outcomes are stated. 3. Tables and figures: a. Table 3: There are 206 patients in new protocol group in Table 3 as well as in Figure ,1 whereas the text states it is 207 patients. Adding a flow chart in the results section may be useful in clarifying this. b. Table 4: Table 3 has total number of patients in each group at top of the table but table 4 does not. c. Table 4: Authors should clarify the maternal infection value in old protocol (n=62) and subgroups intrapartum infection (n=46) and postpartum infection (n=18) as they do not add up. Furthermore, it might be useful to mention that the subgroups of maternal infection (intrapartum and postpartum infection) are not significantly different between the two protocols. d. Table 4: It would be useful to also present CTG changes/fetal distress regardless of mode of delivery if data is available. 4. Methods: a. If the authors have used the STROBE guidelines, please mention it in the methods. If it has not been used, please report this study in compliance with STROBE statement. b. It would be recommended to state if any efforts were made to address potential risk of bias. 5. Results: a. Could authors report numbers of individuals at each stage of study (examined for eligibility, confirmed eligible etc). b. Page 14 lines 197-199: “In the old protocol, maternal or neonatal infection occurred in 29.3 % (n=82) of the labors, while in the new protocol the corresponding rate was 14.6 % (n=21); p<0.001”. This does not match results presented in table 4. In table 4 maternal or neonatal infection in the old protocol is reported in 82 patients (29.3%), and in 30 patients (14.6%) in the new protocol with a p value <0.0001. c. Page 14 lines 201-203: The authors report that “The median birthweight, the rates of post-partum hemorrhage and umbilical artery blood pH-value <7.05 did not differ between the cohorts (Table 4).” However, in table 4 the mean SD birthweight is shown. 6. Discussion: a. Page 17 lines 236-239 “The rate of vaginal delivery was higher, and the rates of maternal and neonatal infections were lower during the new protocol. After the implementation of the new protocol, the rate of cesarean delivery in induced labor has decreased while the rate of labor induction is increasing.” It would be useful for the authors to add p values. 7. Conclusion: a. Page 20 lines 295-296: “No difference in complications, such as post-partum hemorrhage, or neonatal primary outcomes were seen.” It is not specified in the text what neonatal primary outcomes are, the primary outcome is defined as rate of vaginal delivery. Minor issues: 8. Results page 3 line 24 and page 14 line 193: “p=0.004” whereas in table 4 it is p<0.004. 9. Page 11 lines 145-146 “Neonatal infections were by a neonatologist categorized...”. This could be rephrased to “Neonatal infections were categorized by a neonatologist...”. 10. Page 17 lines 239-240: There is a word missing “A recent review by described” 11. Figure 2: please add labels to axes 12. Figure 3: label years axis. I would also suggest adding a dotted line under the arrow to show more precisely when the new oxytocin protocol was implemented. Reviewer #2: The manuscript compares delivery outcomes following an institutional change in practice from a low-dose oxytocin protocol to one with a higher dose. Overall the quality of the scientific work is very good and the outcomes discussed are important and add to the existing literature on this topic. The methods and results are explained very well and put into context quite clearly for the reader. I support acceptance of this manuscript with the following minor revisions: 1. I note that there were several changes made to the institutional protocol, in addition to the dose of oxytocin, which could potentially contribute to the differences between groups outlined in the results section. These included 1) removal of oxytocin breaks from the protocol 2) instituting a practice of stopping oxytocin once active labour is achieved and 3) instituting a maximum duration of induction before it was considered to have failed. It is possible that these policy changes could have also contributed to the improved outcomes the authors demonstrate in the new protocol, in addition to the differences in oxytocin dosing. While these protocol changes are outlined by the authors in the Discussion section, it should be acknowledged that these may be confounding the study findings. The conclusion currently reads that the improved outcomes seen with their protocol change were the result of higher dose alone. I think that the Discussion could be modified slightly to highlight the possible contribution of these confounding factors and that the conclusion should reflect the change in protocol which includes but is not limited to a change from low dose to higher dose oxytocin. I don't think this takes away from the overall important findings of the paper. 2. The other point that might bear acknowledging in the manuscript is that "low dose" and "high dose" are relative terms in these types of studies. The "high dose" used here is lower than that used in other published studies. Lack of standardized dosing is one of the difficulties with the literature in this area, including the Cochrane review and other systematic reviews and meta analyses previously published. The findings here are specific to an institutional change from one protocol to another, which is important, particularly as it showed a clear benefit in terms the primary and secondary outcomes, but this finding may not be generalizable. I appreciate that the authors shared their protocol in its entirety, which would make adaptation by other institutions feasible. The authors were not able to make all data publicly available due to restrictions from their Institutional Policy. They do provide contact information for those seeking access to the raw data, which I find acceptable. Overall this is a strong paper and makes an important contribution to the existing literature. I did notice a few minor English grammatical errors, though the paper is overall well written and very clear. I congratulate the authors on their work. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Harrison Banner [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Comparison of delivery outcomes in low-dose and high-dose oxytocin regimens for induction of labor following cervical ripening with a balloon catheter: a retrospective observational cohort study PONE-D-21-36119R1 Dear Dr. Kruit, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Nnabuike Chibuoke Ngene, Dip HIV Med; MMed(FamMed); FCOG; MMed(O&G); Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-36119R1 Comparison of delivery outcomes in low-dose and high-dose oxytocin regimens for induction of labor following cervical ripening with a balloon catheter: a retrospective observational cohort study Dear Dr. Kruit: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Nnabuike Chibuoke Ngene Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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