Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 26, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-34299Comprehensive clinical assessment identifies specific neurocognitive deficits in working-age patients with long-COVID.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Holdsworth, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 05 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present results from a single-center observational study of 205 consecutive patients ca. 6 months after probable to secured SARS-CoV-2 infection, with the aim of identifying deficits compatible with a post-COVID syndrome. They used a comprehensive clinical assessment with focus on cognitive, cardiac and pulmonary function, using both objective measures and PROMs. Although the characteristics of the sample may somehow limit generalization, which is correctly discussed by the authors as a possible limitation, their homogenous setting assures a comprehensive assessment with few missing data. The results are nonetheless in line with previous evidence of frequent prolonged symptomatology even in less severe cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection and in absence of significant pre-morbid conditions. Introduction 1. The introduction would benefit from referencing more recent publications with similar aims originating from patients with confirmed infection. Methods 2. Although ethical review board approval is mentioned, it is not clear if/ how participants were informed about and consented study participation, particularly given that at least one participant was assumedly underage (age rage 17-61). 3. Were the symptoms reported based on a priori defined listing of possible symptoms or categorized after data was collected? Results 4. Was there an association between the different measures and time after infection? 5. Table 3: It would be interesting to check if frequency of psychiatric history significantly differs of pre- vs post-COVID (current)? 6. Table 3: Table legend should be revised and all abbreviations should be explained 7. Was there information regarding timing of symptoms? I.e., do they represent ongoing symptoms since infection or appeared after the acute phase? 8. Table 4: It is not stated what MH stands for and it could be clarified on which guidelines the associated cut-offs (GAD-7, PHQ-9, PCL-5, Fatigue) are based on. 9. It should be clarified that the value given for EQ5D is the visual analog scale (VAS) and no index values are presented, which would be preferable. 10. For the results presented in Figure 3, it is not clear how cognitive dysfunction was defined (e.g., based on a priori set of deficits or associated severity, by domain/test). 11. It would be interesting to check if performance status (WHO Performance status and/or FAA score) is associated with other available measures, namely cognitive dysfunction, fatigue, lung and cardiac function. Discussion 12. Similar to the introduction, the manuscript would benefit if authors relate their results with recently published data on similar groups. Reviewer #2: Thus, the manuscript under review is a very important since it shows chronic health disorders associated with COVID-19 in previously healthy young or middle-aged people. The cohort consists of 205 employees of military institution, mainly men. The subjects were thoroughly tested in terms of somatic functions. A standardized set of neuropsychological tests was used to study cognitive function (NIH-TB). The results show that in a significant proportion of participants, symptoms of fatigue, cognitive and emotional disturbances persist several months after COVID-19, even if the disease was not severe and there are no significant pathological changes in organs such as the lungs or the heart. Despite my initial enthusiasm, the manuscript raises many doubts, as below. • The title of the manuscript and the actual content By reading the title of manuscript, the reader is looking forward to results showing the relationship between medical findings and post-Covid-19 neurocognitive impairment. Certain medical indices are expected to be significantly related to the state of cognition. There is no such data presented. The data from the medical measurements and the results of the NIH-TB battery test are reported independently to characterize the number of participants with abnormalities. It is not known if and what medical data or other variables (fatigue, emotional disturbance) may indicate cognitive impairment after COVID-19 in this group. The key would be either to present these analyzes or to change the title. • Cognitive disorders and reference measures in conclusions There are no data and analyzes that would justify referring these cognitive disorders to the disorders detected in drunk drivers (according to the alcohol consumption limit for the UK) or the reduction of cognitive functions to the level typical for people 10 years older. Perhaps these comparisons are fully justified, but in order to draw such conclusions, the authors should refer to relevant publications or analyze the results of NIH-TB performance by drunk drivers or the standardized NIH-TB results for a group 10 years older. By the way, what is the UK drink driving limit? Why the readers are supposed to know it? • Measurement of cognitive functions and data analysis The authors reduce the results of the NIH-TB to two components: crystallized and fluid. They define the fluid component as "ability to ... deal with complex information", the crystallized component: as learning and knowledge acquired through life. The definitions are not clear since the tasks involving crystallized functions may also involve dealing with complex information. Moreover, the division into crystallized and fluid components is quite archaic and tells little about complex cognitive functions such as attention, executive functions, learning and memory, spatial orientation, information processing speed, and language. The need for a detailed analysis of the results of the cognitive function examination can be illustrated by the following example. A reduction in the efficiency of NIH-TB was found, mainly in the "fluid component" but not the "cristalised one". Language abilities depending on education, lifelong learning are usually included in the crystallized component of intelligence. However, neuropsychological studies on people after COVID-19 show that at least some aspects of language functions (naming, verbal fluency, semantic abilities) may be impaired in an effect on COVID-19. How, then, to understand the preserved vs. impaired abilities in the studied group? The results of available neuropsychological studies on COVID-19 should be presented in detail in the Introduction part and carefully discussed in the Discussion section. • Use of abbreviations Text and tables in many places are confusing by using abbreviations without explanation. Also, the use of abbreviation “HRCT” (high resolution CT) without specifying the organ (lungs, heart, brain) is completely incomprehensible (see Abstract). • Other comments Were neurological and neuroimaging examinations included in this comprehensive medical assessment, esp. in hospitalized patients? Is it possible to show these data? The authors provide information on smoking in this group, but what about alcohol consumption (before and after COVID-19)? This could be a potentially important variable related to cognitive and emotional functioning, esp. in participants with long-COVID-19 effects. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Ana Sofia Costa Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Comprehensive clinical assessment identifies specific neurocognitive deficits in working-age patients with long-COVID. PONE-D-21-34299R1 Dear Dr. Holdsworth, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Lucette A Cysique, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All comments have been address and the additional analyses do improve the manuscript by exploring possible association between the various outcomes. Reviewer #2: I carefully read the authors' answers and the revised article. All my comments have been taken into account. I accept this version of the paper. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Ana Sofia Costa Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-34299R1 Comprehensive clinical assessment identifies specific neurocognitive deficits in working-age patients with long-COVID. Dear Dr. Holdsworth: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Lucette A Cysique Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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