Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 9, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-29270From single decisions to long-term choice patterns: Extending the dynamics of value-based decision-makingPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Scherbaum, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers ask to be clearer about the presentation of the model, what it predicts, and how it compares to other models. Even though novelty is not per se a publishing criterion for the journal, it is relevant to state how your model compares to other models (e.g., the sequential sampling models mentioned by reviewer 2) in accounting for the current data. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 16 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Small comments: - line 131: “compared to stronger perseveration” —> remove? - p 7: I think the terms SN and LF are not yet explained here. - Indifference point; can this change due to learning? - Odd and even switches; can’t you just analyse the number of odd switches? The number of even switches seems redundant (even though it may not fully be so here, due to the variable number of trials. Similarly, in Figure 5, the number of stays and switches seem redundant to me (just one variable can be analyzed). - p 14, line 289: you mean than in Experiment 1? [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Scherbaum et al. propose a simple LCA model and investigate how the temporal dynamics of the model account for “long-term” effects of decision history on current decisions. In particular, their model explains: 1. switch patterns (as a function of attractiveness) during a sequence of decisions, 2. perseverance, i.e. increased probability to select the same choice if selected previously, and 3. temporal dependency, i.e. increase probability of switching/staying if ITI is long/short. Furthermore, they predict RT effects, such that choices with a strong preferred options should be made faster and that repeated trials also should be made faster versus switch trials. While I am fairly sympathetic to this study and I believe the analyses are well explained and nicely conducted, several issues need to be addressed before I can recommend publication. Major comments: **My main concern is with the lack of clarity when describing the theoretical novelty of this work. The authors should clearly delineate what their model predicts above and beyond previous models of trial history effects, being at the perceptual or value-based domain. The LCA was developed to account for perceptual choices. So if the novelty of this work resides in analyzing the effects of residual activation in the system on the next trial, it should be clarified and systematically compared to previous models (e.g., the Gao model). In sum, the authors should clearly state what is novel (or not) in their work and how the collected data sets allow to arbitrate between theirs and existing models. **Linked to the previous comment, it seems that all the proposed effects can be explained as a function of residual activity in the network at the moment of the next trial. This implies that specific parameters are crucial to account for the data, i.e. the leak, the noise, their tradeoff… If all the effects can be explained by the leak (which it seems), then this should be clarified. Exploration of the parameter space is completely lacking in the current version of the paper. Furthermore, the authors would want to investigate whether their conclusions hold with more biologically plausible activation functions like the ReLU, i.e. non-linearity at zero activation. As it is, the fact that the non-preferred unit dips below zero may convey a non-biological advantage to the model in order to account for the data. **The authors should clarify in the introduction what they mean by “long-term” effects. The dynamics of LCA models and their impact on choice sequences may be more defined as short-term effect rather than long term effects. While I see how associative attractor networks may display long-term effects, it is unclear how long is the “long-term” effects of LCA models. **Intuitively, it seems that if the choice sequences get longer, i.e. 100 trials, you would observe an increasing drift in the stay probability. Did the authors investigate the model’s behavior with longer sequences and maybe reveal emergent properties of their model in other settings (that can be tested later on)? **It is not clear how the predictions in Figure 3 are not already captured by those in Figure 2B? At the very least they could be combined. If the probability of stay is higher, it is because residual activation is already high for that choice, and hence the choice will be made faster (under the assumption of a fixed threshold). Also, I fail to see the novelty in these RT effects, couldn’t these effects be captured by the drift and the bias parameter, respectively – as shown in many previous studies? Minor comments: Line 68: “Since such decisions are about the weighing of an options value and other properties, such decisions are called value-based decisions.” It reads as if you compare the value of an option to other properties. Whereas as these properties (time, rewards, effort…) are usually integrated into a cost-benefit evaluation whose outcome is the value for that offer. Maybe the authors can rephrase or better explain what they mean here. Line 77: “found to be ubiquitous in perceptual decision making [e.g. 17–19]”. Another study which also focuses on the effect of previous trial on current decisions deserves to be cited here, Aben, Verguts, Van den Bussche JEP:HPP (2017). Line 81: “…which is why these models can be used to make predictions which long-term patterns one could expect in value-based decision tasks”. This sentence is confusing. Do the authors mean that LCA and associative attractor networks can be used to investigate long-term, contextual, effects in value-based decision making? As it is, the sentence is not clear and should be rephrased. Line 129: “The third pattern is a temporal dependency of perseveration: Separating two decision by a short delay compared to a longer delay should lead to weaker perseveration compared to stronger perserveration (see Figure 2b).” I believe the authors meant to inverse the contingencies, i.e. short delay leads to stronger perseveration. Typos: In general, I recommend the authors to have a careful look at their paper for typos and grammatical issues. Line 37: value-based Line 68: weighing of an option Line 129: The third pattern is a temporal dependency of perseveration: Separating two decision Reviewer #2: In this paper the authors report a set of “long-term” patterns in value-based choices and explain those using an attractor choice model. There are interesting aspects in these study, however several methodological details need to be better explained. Additionally, it is not clear whether the attractor model differs substantially relative to sequentially sampling models, that are typically used in order to explain choice history biases. 1) As the authors mention, the odd/ even number of switches prediction could also arise from sequential sampling models or any choice model in sequences where there is a preferred alternative. It is not clear though if this hypothesis/ prediction is worth discussing. 2) It is not clear whether the perseverance prediction could be made by a sequential sampling model. At the moment the details about the perseveration analysis are scarce and it is not straightforward to understand how the LF/SN ratio was taken into account, and whether the perseverance bias occurs naturally merely due the fact that in most blocks there was a preferred option. Is the bias present also in neutral sequences? 3) It is not mentioned how RT’s in this task are calculated. Are RT’s normalised for the distance travelled on each trial? 4) Details about the measurement block, in which the indifference points are calculated, are missing. 5) More generally, it would be useful to contrast the attractor model with a sequential sampling model in which choice history biases arise either due to changes in the starting point or the drift rate of evidence accumulation. Otherwise, it is not clear whether the theoretical contribution of this paper is novel. 6) It is not clear whether the biases reported here are “long-term” or simply arising between the current and the previous (n-1) trial. 7)About the questionnaire simulation, is the higher kappa found under short ITI specific to a certain order of questions? 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From single decisions to sequential choice patterns: Extending the dynamics of value-based decision-making PONE-D-21-29270R1 Dear Dr. Scherbaum, I think you have addressed the comments of the reviewers very well. We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tom Verguts Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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