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PONE-D-21-28272 Evaluation of Sibel’s Advanced Neonatal Epidermal (ANNE) wireless continuous physiological monitor in Nairobi, Kenya PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Coleman, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Kindly address the points raised by both reviewers responding to each and providing references to the tracked changes in the revised manuscript. I am sorry it has taken as long as it did. It has been difficult to locate quickly the required number of reviewers during this difficult time. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 18 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper presents a comparative study to evaluate the accuracy of a non-invasive neonatal vital signal sensor (Sibel) with measurements available via standard (albeit expensive and inaccessible in many parts of the world) clinical devices. The paper is well-written, and the methods are explained clearly. One suggestion to improve the paper is to organize the limitations (some of which are now acknowledged by the authors within the text) under a specific heading and/or group them together to give the reader a better sense. In addition to the limitation on exclusion of the data, the rather small number of subjects in the open-label group is an important limitation, in my view. Reviewer #2: The manuscript reports the results of clinical study to validate the accuracy of the Sibel neonatal monitor against a reference device (Masimo) on a population of neonates in Kenya. The work is important for the adoption of new technology in sub-saharan, and relevant to the scientific community. The study design is sound. The analysis is good, but somehow incomplete as some important aspects are missing, as detailed below. [DATA PROCESSING & SELECTION] 1. The authors Reference, breath detection algo developed in MATLAB based on ref [10]. The authors should include the expected accuracy of this algorithm, as reported in [10]. Note that, according to [10], that algorithm was only validated on a very small dataset (2 pediatric recordings in the CSL benchmark dataset). I do not expect this to impact the results of this study, but it’s relevant to mention it here so the reader is aware. 2. The analysis is preformed on 60-seconds epochs with sufficient signal quality, randomly selected. The authors should provide more details on how signal quality is assessed, as this could be a possible source of bias in the analysis. Table 1 provides the thresholds applied for Sibel and Masimo to define “sufficient signal quality”. It’s unclear what these SQI mean however, and how the thresholds have been selected. 3. Why did the authors decide to sample epochs from the signals, rather than using all epochs of a pre-defined acceptable quality for the analysis? This would have provided more precision on the LoA estimates. The authors are encouraged to repeat their statistical analysis using the entire data, except maybe for the case of RR (since it requires manual annotations that can be cumbersome on the entire data). 4. It seems like the authors selected epochs independently for the different modalities in the open-label part of the study. Is that so, and if it is, why? [STATISTICAL ANALYSIS] 5. The acceptable a priori-defined 95% LOA should be specified for SpO2 and Temperature. 6. The acceptable a priori-defined RMSD thresholds for RR and HR should be specified. 7. How were RMSD thresholds set? 4.5C seems very high for temperature, since that could be a difference between a neonate having high fever vs. healthy temperature. 8. Similarly, for RR, the target of 30% LoA spread seems very wide. Reference [12] justifies it by looking at variability between manual and automated annotations of HR and RR. There could be many reasons behind that variability - human error, poor algorithm performance, that are not directly related to the accuracy of the monitoring device studied in this paper. This goes beyond the scope of this manuscript and therefore of this review. I've assumed for this review that the 30% are accepted by the community. But again, this sounds like a very loose performance criterion, and it may be worth adding a comment or remark about it in this paper so that the reader is aware of that assumption and why it's made. 9. The rationale behind the number of epochs and participants (in each branch of the study: open-label, closed-labels round 1-3) is missing. Was it based on LoA precision estimates done on previous data? What was the expected precision the authors were hoping to reach with that sample size? This should be added to the statistical analysis section. [RESULTS / DISCUSSION] 10. The authors should report the percentage of data that was considered of sufficient quality for both Sibel and the reference systems. It is included in Table S1, but it should be included in the results section as well, e.g. as the percentage of data that was discarded through that process of selecting good quality data. This is an important aspect of device performance as well, next to accuracy when the data is of good quality. 11. In the discussion section, it is stated that “The outlier values are more likely due to non-compliance with measurement procedures than with the accuracy of the technology.” If that’s indeed an issue with non-compliance to measurement procedure, these should be labelled as such, and removed from the analysis as part of the pre-processing and selection process. If it can’t be attributed to a non-compliance issue for sure, then they should be kept in the analysis indeed, and that comment should be rephrased. 12. Figure 1. How do you explain the large increase in LoA when going from open-label to closed-label round #1? The authors explain the reduction in spread between closed-label rounds by a modified calibration factor, but it’s clear why there is such a big jump between the open-label and the closed-label. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper is organized well. The revision adequately addresses my comments on the earlier version of the manuscript. Reviewer #2: All comments have satisfactorily been addressed by the authors. Regarding Point 3 of the initial review, the authors explained that it would be hard to redo the analysis with all data points, and provided a justification for their approach. This justification is ok, and the point is considered addressed. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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