Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 24, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-34017Perinatal care in Western Uganda: Prevalence and factors associated with appropriate care among women attending three District HospitalsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Muwema, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 18 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and Additional Editor Comments (if provided): As this study is focusing on the ” Perinatal care in Western Uganda: Prevalence and factors associated with appropriate care among women in three District Hospitals”, so it is essential to consider enriching your discussion of the best intervention practices to use for improving and providing the appropriate care from countries with similar context, e.g. Enhancing the value of women's reproductive rights through community based interventions and strengths of community and health facilities based interventions in improving women care seeking behaviors…. etc.. However, this should be considered in addition to the reviewers’ remarks [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall, this paper was well presented. However, I struggled with reviewing the paper since the survey was not provided and detailed information on the WHO criteria was not included. This information should be included as part of the material. There was also no discussion about what might be the reasons for differences between the hospitals. Also, did the authors consider personal factors? Might there be some personal factors that may have impacted the results? Was this considered in the survey? For example, mother's beliefs, values, experiences, ability to access services (transport), spouse etc.? Reviewer #2: Give greater attention to results in Table 3. They do provide some good news. For example, 49% of women got at least one preventive drug, 85% got tetanus toxoid, 88% got some health education, 71% had a partograph (although 59% were incomplete), 61% of those delivering had vital signs taken. By just citing aggregate scores in the summary, the article implies that women weren’t getting much of any services. You say that none of the mothers received appropriate antenatal or intrapartum care. True by your aggregate scores but some mother did receive some services. A professional health care provider might feel that you were saying that they weren’t doing anything! What are the implications of 53% of ANC records incomplete. Could this lead to somewhat of an undercount of services or otherwise cast questions on results? The article frequently uses the term quality of care. Actually it is more in Quantity of care (presence or absence of a task). For example, one indicator is whether a urine test is taken. But if it is, that is just the beginning. Was it tested? Correctly? Results communicated to the right people? Any relevant action taken? Same with partograph— maybe it was drawn but did anyone use it to make important decisions? Some health practices may be more like rituals than action items… No innovative strategies are mentioned although they are referred to several times… This article indirectly raises the question of whether the WHO items are totally appropriate for rural Uganda? Are 8 perinatal visits essential? Which of the items are the most important? It would also be interesting to see if any of the WHO maternal care staff or advisors could provide all these services themselves in a setting like rural Uganda…."? I also wondered if Ugandan staff were providing other services (such as comforting women, food, water) that don’t appear in the list of items which are all health technologies rather than tender loving care. You might guess that I am a social scientist/public health person rather than a clinician… We now refer to patients declining consent rather than refusing it.. it is their right to decline… Was the 2016 Dhs the most recent one? Misspelling in Footnote 20. A nice, well written paper and amazing collaboration… I suppose the article would be useful as a very rough baseline to for studying local improvements over the years. But if I were doing this work, I would seek feedback from local health staff about which items they thought were most practical and most likely to improve the health of mothers and babies and then drill down hard on these tasks. Cheers! Reviewer #3: Well-done on your submission. This is a much needed study on an important topic. Please see below my comments: Introduction 1) In the first paragraph of the introduction, there is no need to list out SDG 3, this is easily accessible. A reference would do. 2) In the second paragraph of the introduction, please provide a reference for this statement "Uganda is one of the countries that face challenges in provision of quality perinatal care". 3) In the second paragraph of the introduction, you wrote "According to the latest Uganda Demographic and Health Survey (DHS),......". Which is the latest Uganda DHS? 4) The introduction does not contain enough information to validate the rationale for the study. The introduction should provide a snapshot of the available knowledge on the topic and highlight the gap in the existing knowledge which this present study seeks to address. I would recommend a proper literature review of the prevalence and factors associated with perinatal care should be done. This will provide a better buildup to the study rationale. Discussion 5) The authors confirmed that appropriate perinatal care was limited in the study setting and that "the performance of the region regarding the set minimum standards for perinatal care are still below the national averages". Then what is the basis of the study results when the study setting does not meet the set minimum standards? It would have made more sense if the study was on factors associated with (in)appropriate care among women in three District Hospitals. I am of the opinion that the study findings is skewed by the fact that the study setting does not meet the set minimum standards for perinatal care. 6) What are the strengths of the study? 7) What are the policy implications of the study? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Perinatal care in Western Uganda: Prevalence and factors associated with appropriate care among women attending three District Hospitals PONE-D-21-34017R1 Dear Dr. Muwema, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I believe that this paper will be useful for future researchers looking at the same topic in Uganda or similar countries. It demonstrates the pitfalls of using uncritically WHO standards in a rural setting in Uganda and not delving into quality and appropriateness of care. It points out the need for Ugandan standards of care appropriate for more rural settings. Ultimately, one needs to know which elements of care are given, which ones are relevant and have impact on mortality and morbidity. As such, it is a very first step from which others can learn. Of course, women coming to hospitals may not be typical of the broader population. For example, there may be more emergency cases and possibly better off women who can afford care. It shows how challenging this kind of research is. The authors responded well to the suggestions of the reviewers. Dont get discouraged! It is important research. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: NANCY E WILLIAMSON |
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PONE-D-21-34017R1 Perinatal care in Western Uganda: Prevalence and factors associated with appropriate care among women attending three District Hospitals Dear Dr. Muwema: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Ammal Mokhtar Metwally Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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