Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 12, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-39201Injection of prototypic celiac anti-transglutaminase 2 antibodies in mice does not cause enteropathyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lindstad, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit an extensively revised version of the manuscript that addresses all the points raised during the review process including the inclusion of additional experimental data (see issue #3 below).. In particular three major issues have been raised by one of the reviewers. 1- "There is no discussion on the cross-reactivity between human and mouse TG2. While figure 3a shows much stronger binding of the IgG antibodies to WT than to TG2-/- intestine, IgG binding in figure 3b seems very weak. How reproducible is the binding of anti-TG2 IgG to mouse TG2 and here to mouse intestinal tissues? Can it be quantified? What is the affinity of the anti-human TG2 antibody for mouse TG2? Why is there some weak IgG binding in TG2-/- mice (as indicated by the authors). Where is it localized? Does it colocalize with TG2? Is the localization of TG2 shown in figure 3b expected? The authors have previous reported that TG2 is largely present in epithelial cells. Here binding seems to be in the basement membrane. Can these discrepancies be discussed." 2- "Since TG2 is activated by tissue damage or inflammation, is it conceivable that the effect of the ant-TG2 antibody may be different in these pathological conditions (notably in the case of IgG, if complement becomes available locally). If so, should this be specifically addressed?" 3- "Only one anti-TG2 specificity was tested. The authors indicate that they use a prototypic anti-TG2 antibody. Yet they have produced a spectrum of antibodies and described their binding to different epitopes. It is conceivable that different antibodies may have different impact. The authors have shown that, in CeD most antibodies bind to the N-terminus and interfere minimally with TG2 activity. Yet is it sufficient to test only one specificity to draw such definitive conclusions. This question is also raised by the lack of indication on the reactivity of anti-human TG2 antibodies with mouse TG2. Of note it has been suggested that anti-TG2 antibodies may participate in extra-intestinal manifestations of CeD, notably in dermatitis herpetiformis as the skin lesions contain deposits of anti-TG antibodies but no T cells. The article showing a possible role of anti-TG2 antibody in dermatitis herpetiformis used human skin grafts in immunodeficient mice (Zone et al 2011 DOI 10.4049/jimmunol.1003273)." Please note that the revised version of the manuscript will be sent back to the original reviewers for perusal. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 07 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present very intersting and original data concerning the potential role of anti-transglutaminase 2 secreted antibodies (anti-TG2) in vivo, in an experimental murine model. Their findings are not in favour of a major role of anti-TG2 immunoglobulins in the form of secreted antibodies in the development of enteropathy in celiac disease. This manuscript is written in an intelligible fashion and in standard english. Please note two very little form orthography remarks : lignes 129 "follwed" and 278 "disdease". Most important, I couldn't visualise Figure 4 and Figure S1, this is why I recommend Minor Revision. Reviewer #2: In this article, Borgen et al further explore the role of the B cell response to TG2, the celiac disease autoantigen. This enzyme plays a key role in CD by deamidating gluten peptides, a post-translational modification indispensable for the activation of DQ2/8 restricted gluten specific CD4+ T cells that are instrumental in disease pathogenesis. Strikingly, active CeD is associated with a massive intestinal plasma cell response to TG2. The latter response has been extensively characterized by the authors. They have notably provided compelling evidence that the anti-TG2 antibody response can be assimilated to a hapten-carrier B cell response where TG2 becomes recognized when bound to gluten. Abadie et al have also recently shown in a CeD mouse model that B cell depletion prevents intestinal damage. Yet it is still unclear whether anti-TG2 antibodies have a pathogenic role in CeD and if so how. On the one hand, the authors have provided strong evidence that anti-TG2 B cells may participate in CeD pathogenesis by binding gluten peptides and thereby promoting their presentation to CD4+ T cells (after endocytosis and loading into HLA-DQ molecules). On the other hand, a limited number of ancient articles suggested that anti-TG2 antibodies may exert deleterious effects directly by interacting with TG2 in the intestinal tissues, a finding that contrasts with the fact that anti-TG2 antibodies can be detected in the intestine of patients with latent CeD who have no lesions. Here the authors investigate whether anti-TG2 antibodies can induce intestinal damage in B6 mice following intravenous injection of one the numerous anti-TG2 monoclonal antibodies that they have generated. They use the same antibody in diverse murine versions (IgG2 b , IgG2c and IgA), and they analyze the intestine after repeating the injections for 21 days. Based on the demonstration that the injected anti-TG2 IgG antibodies can be detected in the intestine of wild type B6 but only at a much lesser degree in TG2-/- mice and that the antibodies do not induce any obvious histological intestinal lesions in WT mice, the authors conclude that anti-TG2 antibody has no direct pathogenic role in intestinal lesions. Although this reviewer could be easily convinced that anti-TG2 antibodies do not induce directly tissue damage in the intestine, additional experiments and comments seem useful to support such a very strong and definitive conclusion 1- There is no discussion on the cross-reactivity between human and mouse TG2. While figure 3a shows much stronger binding of the IgG antibodies to WT than to TG2-/- intestine, IgG binding in figure 3b seems very weak. How reproducible is the binding of anti-TG2 IgG to mouse TG2 and here to mouse intestinal tissues? Can it be quantified? What is the affinity of the anti-human TG2 antibody for mouse TG2? Why is there some weak IgG binding in TG2-/- mice (as indicated by the authors). Where is it localized? Does it colocalize with TG2? Is the localization of TG2 shown in figure 3b expected? The authors have previous reported that TG2 is largely present in epithelial cells. Here binding seems to be in the basement membrane. Can these discrepancies be discussed. 2- Since TG2 is activated by tissue damage or inflammation, is it conceivable that the effect of the ant-TG2 antibody may be different in these pathological conditions (notably in the case of IgG, if complement becomes available locally). If so, should this be specifically addressed? 3- Only one anti-TG2 specificity was tested. The authors indicate that they use a prototypic anti-TG2 antibody. Yet they have produced a spectrum of antibodies and described their binding to different epitopes. It is conceivable that different antibodies may have different impact. The authors have shown that, in CeD most antibodies bind to the N-terminus and interfere minimally with TG2 activity. Yet is it sufficient to test only one specificity to draw such definitive conclusions. This question is also raised by the lack of indication on the reactivity of anti-human TG2 antibodies with mouse TG2. Of note it has been suggested that anti-TG2 antibodies may participate in extra-intestinal manifestations of CeD, notably in dermatitis herpetiformis as the skin lesions contain deposits of anti-TG antibodies but no T cells. The article showing a possible role of anti-TG2 antibody in dermatitis herpetiformis used human skin grafts in immunodeficient mice (Zone et al 2011 DOI 10.4049/jimmunol.1003273). 4- Are IgG relevant to the induction of lesions in the intestine of celiac patients As indicated by the authors, conclusion concerning the IgA version of the antibody is difficult as very little IgA is detectable in the serum. Based on the fact that IgA deficient patients can develop (are prone to) celiac disease, the authors conclude that it is not important to address the role of IgA. I nevertheless wonder whether this suggestion is fully valid as it is likely that patients with IgA deficiency have IgM against TG2 in their intestine, the role of which is not addressed here. Is it clear that CeD patients have prominent anti-TG2-IgG in the intestine? Since the authors only work during 3 weeks, would it be pertinent to use hybridomas as backpack to provide continuously IgA antibodies to the mice and circumvent their short half-life. 5- Recent work shows that inhibiting TG2 has positive effects both in an animal model quoted by the authors and in humans in a recent trial (Schuppan et al 2021 10.1056/NEJMoa2032441). Is this observation pertinent to discuss the lack of deleterious role of anti-TG2 antibodies? 6- The structure of the report seems strange to this reviewer as figure legends are directly inserted in the results section and are used directly to describe the results. Is it an acceptable format in Plosone? If not, the narrative in the result section needs to be thoroughly revised and implemented. 7- The authors use parametric tests (t-tests) for statistics. Although it is a minor point as comparison between treated animals and controls does not show any difference, it is somewhat surprising to this reviewer who would have chosen non parametric tests to compare normal versus disease conditions in the absence of demonstration that data follow a normal distribution. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Nadine Cerf-Bensussan [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Injection of prototypic celiac anti-transglutaminase 2 antibodies in mice does not cause enteropathy PONE-D-21-39201R1 Dear Dr. Lindstad, We’re pleased to inform you that the revised version of your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Yours Sincerely, Lucienne Chatenoud Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-39201R1 Injection of prototypic celiac anti-transglutaminase 2 antibodies in mice does not cause enteropathy Dear Dr. Lindstad: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Lucienne Chatenoud Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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