Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 25, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-32571 Thermal remote sensing over heterogeneous urban and suburban landscapes using sensor-driven super-resolution PLOS ONE Dear Hiroki, Thank you for submitting your manuscript titled, ‘Thermal remote sensing over heterogeneous urban and suburban landscapes using sensor-driven super-resolution (Ref. No.: PONE-D-21-32571) to PLOS ONE. The manuscript has been reviewed. After careful consideration, we find that the manuscript has some merit with some interesting results, but it needs a major revision to address reviewers’ comments and fully meet PLOS ONE publication criteria. You can find reviewers’ comments at the bottom of this letter. We invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript. The changes required in the manuscript are very significant and require you to respond fully. We will send your revised manuscript for further external review. Therefore, we strongly recommend addressing concerns raised in full. ============================== Be sure to address: 1. Restructure your introduction, particularly organizing the problem statement 2. Quality and extent of results. 3. Revise the Discussion section for clarity. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 25, 2022. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors: I have found your research article quite interesting. I have carefully read your proposal. I have some questions and explanations I would like you to clarify for me. Your research tries to recover and deepen a method to improve the resolution of thermal images from a sensor point of view (sensor-driven), as opposed to other approaches (data-driven). The preceding methodology and your proposals for improvement are well defined. Except in the figures shown: The order of the defined steps is not clear. In figure 1, there is a red arrow linking both steps of superresolution. Please clarify its meaning. In figure 2, MODIS B1,2(1Km) and (500 m) refer to one super-resolution step when they are images with different resolutions. The reader may be confused about the use of both images with different resolutions at the same super-resolution step. In line 103, (step 3) it is not clear what the meaning of "instant spectral library" is. I would thank the authors for clarifying this concept. In line 145, the authors refer to a super-resolution step using different bands simultaneously. The authors do not make clear how these many bands are handled. Clarification about how the bands fuse with the thermal image will be useful. My major concern in this work, in the Results section, is about the statistics the authors use to determine the quality of the super-resolution transformation. RMSE is not a good index of image quality. It has been proved that very different images can have the same RMSE value. The same is true for the correlation coefficient (CC). There are other more appropriate image quality indices such as the ERGAS or the spectral mapping angle (SAM) for spectral reconstruction. If you want to analyze the spatial reconstruction, Peak Signal to Noise Ratio (PSNR) will measure the quality of this process. Please refer to those indices or justify the use of RMSE and CC properly. I will be grateful if the authors could clarify these comments. I encourage them because I consider their work an important contribution to thermal image resolution enhancement literature. Reviewer #2: The article presents a review of a methodology to obtain surface temperature values based on spatially resampled MODIS sensor data. In its presentation, the main objective of the article is to demonstrate the application of the method for urban and suburban areas, however the results and discussions presented do not respond to this expectation, which is the main point of the improvements that the article needs. Below are some excerpts that indicate adjustments and additions to improve the understanding of the article. In line 44, I suggest improving the presentation of the characteristics of the thermal images, perhaps presenting a table or in the text, detailing the resolutions of each sensor In line 75, the authors seek to show the potential application of the algorithm, however the work does not show other results obtained with the use of the first algorithm that justify changes in it. I suggest that they present other works that analyzed the application of the 1 algorithm or made comparisons with other sensors In line 87, In the final paragraph of the Introduction, I suggest adding the objectives and results expected by the work. In line 103, in which he presents the routine for image treatment, I suggest improving the flowchart presented, using a number with stage indications, as this way the reader understands which steps the objective of the work changes and facilitates the replication of the work In line 135, I suggest rescuing the reason for the proposed algorithm modification In line 144, Here again rescue the routine flowchart of the algorithm indicating where changes occurred and to present a new proposal In line 327, I recommend that the authors seek to contextualize the discussion of the results obtained by showing the temperature results according to the land uses present in the analyzed section. It is important and necessary to confirm statistically whether there were differences or changes in temperatures by observing the behavior of surface temperature in vegetated environments and urban spaces ********** 6. 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PONE-D-21-32571R1Thermal remote sensing over heterogeneous urban and suburban landscapes using sensor-driven super-resolutionPLOS ONE Dear Hiroki, Thank you for submitting a revised manuscript titled, ‘Thermal remote sensing over heterogeneous urban and suburban landscapes using sensor-driven super-resolution’ to PLOS ONE. Reviewers’ have provided their feedback. The quality of manuscript has improved substantially, but it will require a minor revision to address reviewers’ comments and fully meet PLOS ONE publication criteria. You can find reviewers’ comments at the bottom of this letter. We invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript. Be sure to address: 1. Improve the statistical exploration of the results, including apply non-parametric Wilcox text 2. Emphasize gains from the modification of the algorithm. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 18 2022 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://pone.editorialmanager.com/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for their work in clarify my comments and suggestions about their original work. Now, in the new version, I have found this research paper clearer and the quality of the results are well established with the new statistical indices. I am glad to propose your work for publishing. Reviewer #2: The authors met the requests made, presenting more details about how the workflow occurs for the first algorithm and presenting clarifications regarding the modifications and improvements proposed by the work that occurred in it. It is still necessary to improve the statistical exploration of the results obtained, demonstrating the real improvement that the modification of the algorithm brings. I suggest application of the non-parametric Wilcox test was applied, with 95% confidence, to determine if there was a significant difference between the radiance and brightness temperature occurring in different land covers and land uses for Algorithm1, 2 and 3. This further analysis will enrich the results presented and effectively show the gains with the modification of the algorithm ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Javier Raimundo Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Thermal remote sensing over heterogeneous urban and suburban landscapes using sensor-driven super-resolution PONE-D-21-32571R2 Dear Hiroki, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kunwar K. Singh Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-32571R2 Thermal remote sensing over heterogeneous urban and suburban landscapes using sensor-driven super-resolution Dear Dr. Mizuochi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Kunwar K. Singh Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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