Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 25, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-34103Availability of results of interventional trials assessing colorectal cancer over the past seven years.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Pellat, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 20 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Pellat and colleagues investigated the availability of results of interventional studies using data from the ClinicalTrials.gov registry. The authors found that the results of over a third of clinical trials are not published. The findings of the study are interesting and may have public health relevance. However, there are a number of major methodological concerns (as outlined below), which may affect the validity of the reported findings. The authors could enhance the content of the manuscript by considering the suggestions below. Title Trials are interventional studies. I would thus suggest that the title be changed to “interventional studies” and the term be used consistently throughout the manuscript. Methods • Line 80: What was the definition of CRC management for the selection of studies? Do the authors mean secondary and/or tertiary prevention? This should be clarified. • Outcomes: Median time (rather than delay) between primary completion and earliest date of results availability. The term should be used throughout the manuscript. • Were statistical tests one- or two-sided? Results • Did the primary outcome differ by geographical region, year that trials commenced, and funder type? These are important and should be evaluated in the revision. • The 763 trials also include trials that were terminated. This is of major concern and affects the validity of the findings. Since the focus is on availability of results, trials that were terminated would certainly have no results (huge bias – like a cohort study aiming to assess incident cases but then included prevalent cases at the onset). The authors should consider this in the revision, redefine the eligibility criteria and conduct the analysis again by restricting the analyses to trials that were completed. • Table for the Cox analysis was not shown in the manuscript and which factors were adjusted for? Conclusions • The first sentence in the concluding paragraph is a bit “harsh” and should be restructured. Minor Line 19: …most frequent cancers… Line 35: What do the authors mean by “posted results”? Do they mean by published results? All CI95% should be changed to 95%CI throughout the manuscript. Line 45: …most frequent malignant neoplasms…. Lines 52-55: These sentences should be restricted for clarity. Line 169: Continuous data…. Line 170: Binary and categorical data were…. Titles of figures 2-5 should be “Time between” and not “Delay” Reviewer #2: The research article by Pellet A, Boutron I, and Ravaud P aims to characterize the availability of results for clinical trials of colorectal cancer management based on availability in ClinicalTrials.gov and in biomedical journals as identified through PubMed. This article reinforces information already understood in the literature about results reporting for clinical trials, but focuses on the specific domain of colorectal cancer. This research may be more appropriate for specialists in the field of colorectal cancer than a general medical audience and it is recommended that the authors clarify the need for the analysis and for whom it is intended. General Comments - Specify the specific years of the analysis as “past 7 years” is not a useful time reference because will change over time - Recommend clarifying throughout ‘posted’ is ‘posted on ClinicalTrials.gov’ - Recommend phrase ‘median time’ v. ‘median delay’ as it is neutral. Delay implies something ‘wrong’ when in fact all results availability will have a delay from completion to availability Background - Refers to an increased number of trials conducted over time, however, this may be an overstatement as generally the information on conducted trials has increased, but it is difficult to ascertain how the number of trials themselves have increased especially to long known problems of publication bias - Information on ‘lack of quality and standardization’ is outside the scope of this analysis and recommend authors limit background content to that which is relevant to this analysis or otherwise be clear why it is relevant background - The description of the FDAAA 801 results requirements are oversimplified. Important qualifiers should be included: limited to Phase 2 – 4 interventional studies of FDA-regulated products. In addition, there has been shifts over time in what is expected for results reporting of unapproved products (e.g., trials of unapproved products are expected no later than 3 years after PCD if unapproved or within 30 days of product approval) Methods - The definition of “CRC management” and how this is applied is unclear. Recommend the authors include more details in the supplemental appendix that would allow for replication of search strategy and application of exclusionary criteria (“e.g.,” on p.5 line 107 does not seem sufficient). I also question why the Primary Purpose data element was not used to exclude ‘screening, basic science, device feasibility, etc.’ type studies that might not be considered management. - The definition of ‘primary completion date’ was clarified in 2016 and the clarified definition implemented in 2017 (it was previous unclear how to apply if more than one primary outcome measure). This sample includes trials that cross this definitional time point and this may be helpful to note when providing the definition as may also partially explain why some results available before primary completion date. - Eligibility indicates inclusion was 16 years old and over, but search methods only included 18 years old and over per Table S1 (also confusing why exclude “performed in children” based on the search if the trials still included adults - Primary completion date max of 01/01/2020 means only 14 months since that date for some studies; recommend reporting in results what the median/range of time from primary completion at time of sample (impacts results available) - Define ‘results posted’ (excludes ‘submitted results with QC comments available’) - All trials without available results censored on April 15th, 2021 – mentioned in relation to publication but not posted, does it apply to that category as well? - Define ‘main results’ – are these results of the trial’s primary outcome measure? - Explain rationale for stratification choices - Define ‘open access’ – results in ClinicalTrials.gov OR open access publication? - The statistical methods that apply confidence intervals do not appear to be the best choice for this analysis as the data are descriptive of the results available for trials registered in ClinicalTrials.gov and are not an inference to a larger population. The sample is the population. For additional information on this topic, see “Use of appropriate statistical inference” and “How can I objectively identify important differences?” described here: https://aact.ctti-clinicaltrials.org/points_to_consider Results - Table 1 - Consider adding some key facts mentioned in ‘general characteristics of trials’ included ‘open-labeled’ and related categories - As noted in methods, unclear if/how ‘screening, other, NA’ qualifies as ‘CRC management’ - Need to define ‘type of funding’ and publication link posted in registry’ with Table or in Methods or supplemental - Suggest including extracted information related to location to characterize the study sample based on location Results - ‘prospectively registered’ – note U.S. law requires registration within 21 days of first patient enrollment, the definition used is acceptable just can’t infer anything per U.S. law - Page 11 (line 212) – results re: ‘another support’ appear to be out of scope from this analysis as the Methods only described full-text articles - As noted in methods, the use of confidence intervals does not seem to be appropriate for this analysis; please re-evaluate throughout - Page 11 (line 232) – unclear to what industry-funded trials is being compared - Table 2 would benefit from including a line for ‘all published or posted’ and ‘all posted’ to complement the information - Consider optimal use of Figures and Tables as they currently appear to included redundant information - Methods/Results – clarify what proportion of results were published as open access - Figures need additional labels for the numbers (of trials) provided with KM graph. Also consider if y-axis should include full scale of probability 0.0 – 1.0 for accurate context. Discussion - the discussion needs significant attention to better focus on and reflect the results from this analysis and their relevance to the colorectal cancer community - The discussion (page 13, line 268) discusses ‘compliance’ however the objectives and methods of this paper do not support any inference about compliance and this should be deleted (i.e., analysis was not limited to phase 2-4 trials of FDA-regulated drug products and did not assess other appropriate reasons for results being available later than 12 months after completion) - Page 14, line 274 specifies ‘enough time for publication’ however as noted earlier some studies had only 14 months; consider specifying as limitation - Page 14, line 275 mentions ‘the announcement’ – should specify who made this announcement; this discussion point is disjointed from the background that did not mention the ICMJE policy at all; recommend bringing the background and discussion into alignment - I expect there are additional references beyond reference 13 that could be sued to support the sentence ending on line 281 (page 14) - Page 14, line 286 – specify what the ethical issue is - Page 14, lines 291 -3. Unclear why IPD and ‘study documentations’ are being discussed as this was not a focus of this paper. - Reference 21 is not appropriate for supporting the statement on page 14, lines 293-295 as it shows more results in ClinicalTrials.gov but can’t characterize as an ‘improvement’ Minor editorial - Section headers of ‘search strategy for posted results’ and ‘search strategy for publication of results’ seem unnecessary, could be combined - ‘overtime’ should be ‘over time’ ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-21-34103R1Availability of results of interventional studies assessing colorectal cancer over the past seven years.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Pellat, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 03 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors adequately addressed most of my prior comments. A few new (based on revisions) and remaining issues are noted here: - Recommend revising the manuscript title to replace “over the past 7 years” to specify the actual years included in the analysis - Lines 99 – 101 – it could be clarified that these are response options for the ‘primary purpose’ data element and the ‘intervention type’ data elements. - Consider if the explanation of ‘open-access’ be instead included in the ‘eligibility of results’ section (i.e., did the reviewer as a third step note if the published results were open access?) - Lines 158 – 159 – recommend specifying which data elements determine funding (was it sponsor and collaborators?) - Table 2 – at a minimum denominator (# trials) needs to be added to the table column/row headers to provide appropriate context to the percentages, but could provide clarity by including numerator and denominator for each percentage - Line 291 – appears to describe the results from Table 3 re: randomized trials but the data are different. Please verify (HR=1.2 (95%CI 0.9 – 1.6)) v. (HR=1.0 (95% CI 0.8 -1.4)). - I don’t agree that the example of results before PCD demonstrates lack of currency or quality (Lines 358) but appreciate the authors qualification of a potential reason for this particular event - Line 349 – misquotes the law and should be revised from "applicable trials" to “applicable clinical trials" Note: I agree with the authors’ response (Response 6) to Reviewer #1's comment re: the inclusion of terminated studies in the analysis. Trials may be terminated for any number of reasons, including for interim findings of safety or efficacy, that make them important to include. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Availability of results of interventional studies assessing colorectal cancer from 2013 to 2020. PONE-D-21-34103R2 Dear Dr. Pellat, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tim Mathes Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-34103R2 Availability of results of interventional studies assessing colorectal cancer from 2013 to 2020. Dear Dr. Pellat: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Tim Mathes Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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