Dr. Pierre-julien Coulaud, PhD
Aix Marseille University, INSERM, IRD, SESSTIM, Sciences Economiques & Sociales de
la Santé & Traitement de l’Information Médicale
Faculté de Médecine Timone, 27 Boulevard Jean Moulin – 13005 Marseille, France
Emails: pierre-julien.coulaud@inserm.fr / pierre-julien.coulaud@bccsu.ubc.ca
Marseille, 10th December, 2021
Manuscript Number PONE-D-21-22603
Title: " Individual and healthcare supply-related HIV transmission factors in HIV-positive
patients enrolled in the Cameroonian antiretroviral treatment access program (ANRS-12288
EVOLCam survey)"
Dear Editor,
Thank you very much for the evaluation of our revised manuscript for publication in
PLOS ONE and for giving us the opportunity to submit a new revised version.
We carefully considered and replied to all the editor and reviewers’ comments (see
below). In addition, we made some minor corrections in the text (for English corrections
and editing). All revisions made in the new version of the manuscript are highlighted
in yellow.
More specifically, we addressed the following three major points raised by the editor
and reviewers. First, we revised our rational in the Introduction to better explain
how our manuscript advances on our previous work (Coulaud et al., 2021). While this
previous work was focused on understanding the role of healthcare supply-related factors
on ART initiation delay (which correspond to the second UNAIDS target), our present
manuscript investigates the association between these structural factors and HIV risk
transmission, corresponding to the third UNAIDS target. We did not mention this publication
in our first submission to your journal because this previous article was not published
when we finalized and first submitted this manuscript in December 2020 (it was, at
this time, reviewed by another journal). As some parts of our manuscript was overlapping
with this previous work, we carefully revised this new version to remove the duplicated
text and our references were updated accordingly.
Second, we provided additional information regarding the survey and the ethical statement.
Given that we used a similar approach for defining our HIV services profiles that
in our previous publication (i.e., cluster analysis), we reorganized our Methods and
Results sections to limit similar extracts from our previous work and summarize the
main findings. Regarding the access to the study questionnaire, we specified that
they have been previously published as supplement materials in Fiorentino et al.,
2021. We also revised our ethical statement to clarify that each participant was assigned
with a patient identification number that was used to anonymize all data collection
tools, including the datasets for conducting this analysis.
Third, as suggested by reviewers, the discussion and limits section of our manuscript
were modified to highlight the implications of the test-and-treat strategy on the
HIV treatment-related outcomes (especially on access to treatment, viral suppression
and sexual risk behaviours). In addition, as our data were collected in 2014, we better
discussed the recent evolutions of the Cameroonian ART Program as well as the relevance
of our findings and public health policy recommendations in the current context.
Finally, as suggested by the first reviewer, we also modified the title to specify
the study area as follows: “Individual and healthcare supply-related HIV transmission
factors in HIV-positive patients enrolled in the antiretroviral treatment access program
in the Centre and Littoral regions in Cameroon (ANRS-12288 EVOLCam survey)”.
We hope that this new version will be suitable for publication in PLOS ONE and remain
at your disposal for any request you may have.
Yours faithfully,
Pierre-julien Coulaud, on behalf of the co-authors
ANSWERS TO REVIEWERS' COMMENTS
Reviewer #1.
1. Since the regions of Littoral and Centre are not representative of the entire country,
please insert Littoral and Centre Regions in the title of the manuscript.
� As suggested, we modified the title by inserting “Littoral and Centre regions” as
follows:
“Individual and healthcare supply-related HIV transmission factors in HIV-positive
patients enrolled in the antiretroviral treatment access program in the Centre and
Littoral regions in Cameroon (ANRS-12288 EVOLCam survey)”
2. Line 6: These are objectives, not aims
� As suggested, we revised this sentence (line 71-76, page 4) as follows:
“In a previous study conducted in Cameroon, we showed that HIV service profiles, built
using a cluster analysis of a wide range of healthcare supply-related characteristics,
had different performances in terms of time to ART initiation [1]. In the present
study, we used a similar approach to provide a better understanding of the role of
supply-related factors, beside individual factors, on achieving the third UNAIDS target
in Cameroon.”
3. Please rewrite the introduction to update the situation in Cameroon (with HIV figures),
and show the link of this work with new HIV national strategic plan.
� We revised the Introduction section to update the last estimations and references
available regarding the HIV epidemic and the 2025 UNAIDS testing and treatment targets.
A detailed study context is also presented in the sub-section “Study setting” at the
beginning of the Methods section (p. 5/6). This one has been revised to include the
most recent HIV prevalence rate (as required by Reviewer 2; see comment #18 below).
As suggested, we also clarified in the Introduction how our study objectives linked
to the national HIV strategic plan priorities in Cameroon and provided in the “Study
setting subsection” additional information on the priority strategies and interventions
promoted by the national health authorities within this plan.
Introduction (see p.4/5, lines 71-79):
“In a previous study conducted in Cameroon, we showed that HIV service profiles, built
using a cluster analysis of a wide range of healthcare supply-related characteristics,
had different performances in terms of time to ART initiation [1]. In the present
study, we used a similar approach to provide a better understanding of the role of
supply-related factors, beside individual factors, on achieving the third UNAIDS target
in Cameroon. This study also provided the opportunity to highlight challenges related
to the implementation of the 2018-2022 Cameroonian National Strategic Plan for HIV/AIDS
and STIs which aims to reduce the number of new HIV infections by 60% and achieve
VLS in 92% of PLHIV on ART in Cameroon by 2022 [2].”
Study setting section, Methods (see p.5/6, lines 95-104):
“The Cameroon national authorities decided to provide ART for free in 2007 and to
remove all user fees for HIV care in 2019 [3]. Thanks to this continuously developing
HIV strategy, the total number of PLHIV on ART increased from 17,940 in 2005 to 145,038
in 2014 and 367,871 in 2020 [4,5].
In its latest National Strategic Plan for HIV/AIDS and STIs for the period 2018-2022
[2], Cameroonian health authorities promote a set of priority strategies and interventions
including i) strengthening HIV prevention, ii) scaling-up HIV testing and ART access
through the decentralization of HIV care, task shifting, and the involvement of community-based
organizations, iii) ensuring the permanent availability of laboratory equipment, antiretroviral
drugs and medicines of opportunistic infections.”
4. The data were collected between April and December 2014, now 7 years back. Please
discuss the validity of the results in 2021, because some progresses have been made
so far by the Government of Cameroon.
� We acknowledge that our study is dated and that some progresses have been made so
far by the Government of Cameroon, including the adoption of the test-and-treat strategy
and the gratuity of all HIV care. However, our policy recommendations seems to be
still relevant in the current Cameroonian context for the following two main reasons:
first, the financial resources of the Cameroonian ART programme have not sufficiently
increased between 2014 and 2020 [6] to fill the structural gaps highlighted in our
manuscript. Second, the test-and-treat strategy and the gratuity of HIV care adopted
by the Government led to a large increase in the numbers of PLHIV initiating ART.
The consequence is a greater burden on the health system, especially on human resources
which have less time to devote to patients [7]. HIV services are thus expected to
initiate ART quickly in all newly diagnosed HIV-positive patients while continuing
to provide clinical follow-up and psychosocial support to a growing number of patients
already being treated.
These challenges have been recently documented in HIV services in Cameroon. In 2018,
a qualitative study on patients’ satisfaction with ART services indicated that healthcare
providers were facing a rapid increase in the volume of patients on ART, especially
an increased number of asymptomatic patients who were more hesitant toward the benefits
of ART [8]. During the interviews, PLHIV also expressed barriers to engage in HIV
services such as experiencing long waiting time, poor reception and attitudes
of some healthcare providers (e.g., inadequate counselling and rushing patients
to initiate ART due to initial misunderstanding of the test and treat principle),
poor coordination between HIV testing and treatment services, and lack of flexibility
of the drug delivery system to patients’ specific needs [8]. A retrospective
study also reported mixed results regarding the impact of the test and treat policy
on HIV care continuum outcomes. Although higher ART uptake, and earlier ART initiation
were found among patients who were enrolled after the implementation of the test and
treat policy, lower ART retention was reported in this group compared to those who
initiated before the implementation of this strategy [9].
While major progress have been made to improve access to ART among PLHIV in Cameroon
(i.e., ART coverage of 77% in 2020) [10], recent data [11,12] showed that approximately
70% of PLHIV were virally suppressed in 2020, suggesting that the risk of HIV transmission
is still high in Cameroon and that the challenges highlighted in our study are still
very much a reality.
We therefore revised the Limitation section of the Discussion (see p. 19/20, lines
372-389) to better discuss the recent evolutions in the Cameroonian ART programme
and the validity of our results in this context, as follows:
“Third, Cameroon’s national ART access program has seen several substantial changes
since 2014 (our study period), including the adoption of the test-and-treat strategy
in 2016 and the implementation of free HIV care in the public sector in 2019. These
two policies have brought about major progress in terms of ART access, with ART coverage
standing at 77% in 2020 [12]. However, this rapid and large increase in the number
of ART-treated patients constitutes a huge burden on Cameroon’s healthcare system,
especially in terms of human resources and drug supplies [13]. Recent studies in the
country documented important patient-reported barriers to accessing HIV services,
including long waiting times, poor patient reception in centers, poor coordination
between HIV testing and ART services, long delays before ART imitation [8], and a
higher risk of loss-to-follow-up among patients who initiated early ART [9]. In addition,
the country’s “free access” policy generates a loss of income for healthcare facilities
[6,14] which may negatively affect healthcare quality (e.g., through increased drug
stock-outs and reduced staff motivation) when not offset by government subsidizing
[7,15]. Finally, the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic may result in financial resources being
diverted, which may further exacerbate human resources shortages and inadequate ART
supplies [10]. Recent literature [11] and the latest estimation of the proportion
of PLHIV achieving VLS in Cameroon (approximately 70% in 2020), [12]) suggest that
the risk of HIV transmission is still high in Cameroon and that the challenges highlighted
in our study are still very much a reality.”
5. Briefly describe the EVOLCam survey.
� As suggested, we described in greater details how and which data were collected in
the EVOLCam survey in the sub-section “Study design and data collection” (see p. 6/7):
“We used data from the cross-sectional survey EVOLCam (ANRS 12288) which was conducted
in 19 HIV services in Cameroon’s Centre (n=11) and Littoral regions (n=8) between
April and December 2014 to study evolutions in the national ART program through a
comparison with the 2006-2007 ANRS-12116 EVAL survey [16,17]. The EVOLCam (ANRS 12288)
study protocol is described in detail elsewhere [18,19].
Briefly, eligible PLWH (≥21 years old and HIV diagnosed >3 months) attending an outpatient
consultation in one of the 19 participating HIV services were randomly selected and
informed about the study. Patients willing to participate provided written informed
consent before data collection. First, a standardized medical questionnaire was completed
during the consultation by healthcare providers. The following clinical data were
obtained from patient examinations and retrospective medical files: dates of HIV diagnosis
and ART initiation, WHO clinical stage of HIV infection at ART initiation and at the
time of the study, CD4 count at ART initiation, drug regimen at the time of the study,
body mass index and any history of tuberculosis and hepatitis B co-infection and related
diagnosis date. Second, patients answered a face-to-face questionnaire administered
in a private room by trained independent interviewers which collected data on demographic,
socioeconomic, behavioral, psychosocial and domestic information. More specifically,
a series of questions were asked on adherence to ART, perceived health and HIV-related
stigma as well as alcohol consumption and sexual behaviors during the 12 months prior
to the study (number of sexual partners, experience of transactional sex, frequency
of sexual relationships, HIV status and condom use with the two most recent partners).
The questionnaire is available as supplementary material in Fiorentino et al., 2021
[20]. Third, a blood sample was taken to measure HIV viral load (only for patients
ART treated >6 months) and CD4 cell count. All blood samples were analyzed by a reference
HIV laboratory in Yaoundé.
Finally, detailed data on the characteristics of the participating 19 HIV services
were collected through interviews with hospital staff, in situ observations, and cross-validation
with data recorded in HIV service activity reports. Specifically, the information
obtained included: i) hospital’s general characteristics (location, opening date,
legal status, number of beds), ii) human resources working in the HIV service (number
and qualifications), iii) activity (number of ART-treated patients and available services
including educational, nutritional and financial support, HIV community-based organization
involvement), iv) HIV service organization (separate ARV storage, stock management
and task-shifting for clinical consultations of ART-treated patients and/or ARV prescription
renewals), v) technical resources (functional medical imaging equipment, CD4 count
machine, ARV stock-outs for at least one of the three most prescribed ART regimens
[1].”
6. In line 428, the authors stated the “Due to French law there are restrictions on
publicly sharing the data of this study. French law requires that everyone who wishes
to access cohorts data or clinical study data on humans must ask the French data protection
authority”. However, the study was conducted in Cameroon and received ethical approval
from Ethical Board of Cameroon, not French one. How was the data sharing agreement
with Cameroon partners? Please clarify this issue.
� Thank you for your comment. The data sharing agreement specify that the EVOLCam survey
data was available for analysis to the whole research team (i.e. co-investigators,
researchers and trainees from all partners in both countries, Cameroon and France).
Furthermore, after having checked the issue of data access for people / institute(s)
who are not member of the research team, we confirmed that there is no need to receive
previous approval from the CNIL in France if data are fully anonymized. We therefore
modified the “Availability of data and materials statement” (see p. 23) as follows:
“Fully anonymized data are available on request made to the study investigators (Laurent
Vidal at Laurent.vidal@ird.fr and Christopher Kuaban at ckuaban@yahoo.fr).
7. Are there any standard definitions of “the risk of transmitting HIV” and “Unstable
aviremia”? if so give references otherwise justify.
� Thank you for your comment. As mentioned in the Introduction section (see lines 59-63),
various definitions were used in the existing literature to define HIV transmission
risk. It is also important to note that this definition is constantly evolving with
the progress in HIV care, the development of new prevention strategies (e.g., PrEP),
and the availability of individual HIV clinical characteristics (e.g., viral load).
Most of previous studies were focused on behavioural characteristics (e.g., having
condomless sex with a partner of unknown HIV status) [21–23] as information on viral
load was more difficult to collect. In order to take into account the fact that multiple
factors may influence the potential risk of transmission, our definition of HIV transmission
risk was based on both behavioural characteristics (i.e., number of partners, condom
use, knowledge of partner’s HIV status, adherence to ART) and biomedical factors (i.e.,
being on ART, viral load) [20,24–26]. This comprehensive approach of the risk of transmitting
HIV allowed us to provide a more accurate estimation of the prevalence of HIV transmission
risk in our study sample.
A similar approach was used to define unstable aviremia. Previous studies often used
the number of viral load copies (undetectable versus detectable) as the main indicator
to consider a participant with unstable aviremia [24,25]. However, it’s well known
in the HIV literature that the level of adherence to ART play a critical role to help
maintain a low viral load and be undetectable [27]. To capture this important aspect
that reflects the engagement of PLHIV in HIV care, we considered as “unstable aviremia”:
i) participants on treatment with a detectable viral load and ii) participants on
treatment with an undetectable viral load but non-adherent to ART.
For both definitions, we included references in this new version. We also specified
our comprehensive approach in great details to highlight the importance of combining
both behavioral and biomedical factors. Below are the changes made in the “Outcome”
subsection in the Methods section (p. 8):
“The study outcome was a binary variable describing the risk of transmitting HIV
(yes versus no). No standard method exists to define the risk of HIV transmission.
Accordingly, in order to define the outcome, we used the literature to develop a comprehensive
approach which included both biomedical (i.e., unstable aviremia) and behavioral factors
(i.e., inconsistent condom use with negative or unknown HIV status partner(s)) [20,24–26].
More specifically, we defined the risk of transmitting HIV as a combination of both
unstable aviremia and reporting inconsistent condom use either with the most recent
(i.e., in the previous 12 months) sexual partner (if only one partner declared), or
with at least one of the two most recent sexual partners (if more than one partner
declared) of negative or unknown HIV status.
Unstable aviremia was defined as not currently being treated or on treatment for less
than six months or on treatment for more than six months but with a detectable viral
and/or poor adherence to ART [20]. The latter was defined as taking <80% of the prescribed
drug doses or reporting treatment interruptions for at least two consecutive days
in the four weeks prior to the survey [28]. Participants on treatment for more than
six months with an undetectable viral load who were highly adherent to ART (defined
as taking >80% of the prescribed drug doses in the four weeks prior to the survey)
were considered to have stable aviremia.”
8. Please note that the Ministry of Public Health gives the Admistrative Autorisation
while the ethical approval is given by the “Comité National d’Ethique de la Recherche
pour la Santé Humaine (CNERSH)”
� Thank you for this comment. We revised our ethical statement (see p. 23) accordingly:
“This study was conducted in compliance with international and national regulations
on ethics and research on people. It received administrative authorisation from the
Ministry of Public Health in Cameroon and was approved by the Cameroonian National
Ethics Committee (approval reference: 2013/08/349/L/CNERSH/SP). All participants were
informed about the study’s objectives and its modalities and all provided written
consent to participate. All individual data collected in the research were anonymized
using a patient identification number; only this number was reported in the data collection
tools and the databases used for analyses.”
9. The study was in 19 HIV services in Cameroon’s Center and Littoral, please give
the total number of HIV services in these two regions.
� As suggested, we clarified the number of HIV services in each region (see the “Study
design and data collection” subsection, p.6 lines 107-110) as follows:
“We used data from the cross-sectional survey EVOLCam (ANRS 12288) which was conducted
in 19 HIV services in Cameroon’s Center (n=11) and Littoral regions (n=8) between
April and December 2014 to study evolutions in the national ART program through a
comparison with the 2006-2007 ANRS-12116 EVAL survey [16,17].”
10. The justification of the choice of the two regions is not clear as the South Region
has the highest HIV prevalence rate.
� There are two main reasons of the choice of conducting the EVOLCam survey in the
Centre and Littoral regions of Cameroon. First, those two regions were among those
with the highest HIV prevalence rate at the time of the study (estimated at 6.6% in
the Centre and 4.9% in the Littoral in 2014 [29]) and include the country’s two main
cities (Yaoundé and Douala) which both also have a prevalence rate higher than the
mean prevalence rate of the country. Second, these two regions had a relatively high
number of HIV services (respectively 38 in the Centre region and 16 in the Littoral
region), following the largest PLHIV populations in Cameroon at the time of the survey
[30]. The justification of the choices of the two regions selected for the study is
now provided in the limitation subsection in the Discussion (see p.19, lines 355-364)
as follows:
“First, the EVOLCam survey was conducted in only two (Centre and Littoral) of Cameroon’s
10 regions and is therefore not representative of the whole population of PLHIV enrolled
in the Cameroonian ART access program. However, these two regions were among those
with the highest HIV prevalence rate at the time of the study (estimated at 6.6% in
the Centre and 4.9% in the Littoral in 2014 [29]) and include the country’s two main
cities (Yaoundé and Douala). Accordingly, they were the most populated regions with
the largest PLHIV populations [30]. Moreover, we selected a representative sample
of existing HIV services in both regions and used a random selection procedure for
participant inclusion. We therefore obtained quite a comprehensive picture of the
Cameroonian ART access program in two key regions of the country.”
11. 1372 should clearly appear in Figure 2, this is because, 10 the number missing
data on viral load and/or ART adherence is not included there.
� As suggested, we specified the total number of patients included in our study analysis
and we simplified the presentation of the number of patients with missing data on
viral load and/or ART adherence in the revised Figure 2.
12. Please insert the goodness of fit of the final selected multilevel model.
� The goodness of fit of our final multilevel was assessed using Akaike’s Information
Criterion (AIC). We provided this information in the sub-section “Statistical Analysis”
of the Methods (see p.11, line 231) as well as in the notes of the Table 1 (see p.15).
Sub-section “Statistical analysis”, Methods:
“Model fit was assessed using Akaike’s Information Criterion (AIC)”
Table 1:
“AIC of the final selected model: 1746.74”.
13. Interpret the random component summarized by inter-class variance.
� As suggested, we provided in the sub-section “Statistical Analysis” of the new version
of the manuscript further details regarding the interpretation of the inter-class
variance. We also computed and interpreted the intraclass correlation coefficient
(see p.11, lines 221-227), as follows:
“Initially, we estimated the empty model (without any explanatory variables) to provide
an estimation of the inter-class variance, which was small but significantly different
from 0 ( = 0.09; p=0.032), confirming the relevance of using a multilevel model. We
also computed the estimated intra-class correlation coefficient (ICC), which represents
the proportion of the inter-class variance compared to the total variance (i.e., inter-
and intra-class variance). It was estimated at 0.027 indicating that 2.7% of the outcome’s
variance was due to differences between HIV services.”
14. Are there clear reasons why the final multivariable model was adjusted for age
only, not for both age and sex as mentioned in line 275?
� Our final multivariable model was adjusted for both age and gender. As described
in the sub-section “Statistical Analysis” (page p.11, line 228), only significant
individual variables with a p-value <0.05 were retained in our final model, which
was the case for gender (p<0.001) but not for age (p>0.05). Given that age is a key
demographic characteristic, we forced this variable in the model. We therefore specified
in the text (lines 266-267) that our final model was adjusted by age but gender is
also included in the final model as it is significantly associated with the HIV transmission
risk.
15. In the Abstract, add p-values to CI of Adjusted ORs, and IQR to the median of
age.
� The Results section of the Abstract (see p. 1/2) has been revised as suggested:
“Results: Of the 1372 patients (women 67%, median age [Interquartile]: 39 [33-44]
years) reporting sexual activity in the previous 12 months, 39% [min-max across HIV
services: 25%-63%] were at risk of transmitting HIV. The final model showed that being
a woman (adjusted Odd Ratio [95% Confidence Interval], p-value: 2.13 [1.60-2.82],
p<0.001), not having an economic activity (1.34 [1.05-1.72], p=0.019), having at least
two sexual partners (2.45 [1.83-3.29], p<0.001), reporting disease symptoms at HIV
diagnosis (1.38 [1.08-1.75], p=0.011), delayed ART initiation (1.32 [1.02-1.71], p=0.034)
and not being ART treated (2.28 [1.48-3.49], p<0.001) were all associated with HIV
transmission risk. Conversely, longer time since HIV diagnosis was associated with
a lower risk of transmitting HIV (0.96 [0.92-0.99] per one-year increase, p=0.024).
Patients followed in the third profile had a higher risk of transmitting HIV (1.71
[1.05-2.79], p=0.031) than those in the first profile.”
16. Affiliation 4 is « Faculté de Médecine et de sciences biomédicales, Université
de Yaoundé 1, Yaoundé, Cameroun »
� This error has been corrected in the revised version (see Title page):
“Faculté de Médecine et de sciences biomédicales, Université de Yaoundé 1, Yaoundé,
Cameroun”
17. Rewrite line 101
� As suggested, we rewrote this sentence (see p.5) as follows:
“The Cameroon national authorities decided to provide ART for free in 2007 and to
remove all user fees for HIV care in 2019 [3].”
Reviewer #2.
18. This paper is easy to read and relevant within the epidemiological context of
eradicating HIV pandemic in Cameroon. It should be good for the authors to update
some information in the study settings on the prevalence of HIV in Cameroon line 94,
in accordance with latest DHS 2018.
� As suggested, we updated the estimation of HIV prevalence rate according to the 2018
Demographic and Health Survey conducted in Cameroon and provided additional estimations
on the HIV prevalence according some key characteristics (i.e., region of residence,
gender, area of residence: urban vs. rural) (see the subsection “Study setting” in
the Methods, p.5, lines 87-91):
“Cameroon is an LMIC in Central Africa affected by a generalized HIV epidemic with
a mean estimated prevalence rate in 2018 of 2.7% in adults (aged 15-49 years), and
large disparities according to gender, region and urban area [31]. The highest prevalence
rates are observed in women (3.4%), in urban areas (3.9%), and in the South (5.8%),
East (5.6%), Adamaoua (4.1%), North-West (4.0%) and Centre (3.5%) [31] regions.”
19. In addition the context, regardless of TASP, should outline the notion of test
and treat, and the model of service for ART delivery can be described following line
102...for instance
� As suggested, we revised the Introduction (see p.3) to highlight the importance of
the test-and-treat strategy as a key component of the U=U movement to reduce HIV infections
and discussed the implications of such strategy on HIV risk transmission and quality
of HIV services in the Discussion section (see p. 18-21).
Introduction (see p.3, lines 40-46):
“One key biomedical intervention is early antiretroviral treatment (ART) initiation
which has been shown to dramatically reduce HIV-related mortality and morbidity as
well as HIV transmission risk [25,32–34]. The beneficial effect of early ART on viral
load suppression (VLS) led to the establishment of the U=U (“undetectable equals untransmittable”)
movement, which is widely recognized for its importance in controlling the HIV epidemic
[27]. This treatment as prevention approach evolved into the test-and-tread strategy,
that is to say ART initiation immediately after HIV diagnosis, irrespective of CD4
count [35].”
Discussion section:
See p.18/19, lines 324-332:
“This highlights the relevance of the test-and-treat strategy currently being rolled
out in LMIC, including in Cameroon. In particular, the positive impact of this strategy
on the third step of the HIV care cascade has recently been highlighted in four randomized
population-based trials [36]. Furthermore, several studies have shown that ART initiation,
including early initiation through the ‘test-and-treat’ strategy, leads to a significant
decrease in sexual risk behaviors [24,37–39] thanks to greater opportunities for counselling
and psychological support arising out of more frequent contact with HIV services [40].
Such a decrease may also contribute to lower the risk of HIV transmission.”
See p.20/21, lines 372-389:
“Third, Cameroon’s national ART access program has seen several substantial changes
since 2014 (our study period), including the adoption of the test-and-treat strategy
in 2016 and the implementation of free HIV care in the public sector in 2019. These
two policies have brought about major progress in terms of ART access, with ART coverage
standing at 77% in 2020 [12]. However, this rapid and large increase in the number
of ART-treated patients constitutes a huge burden on Cameroon’s healthcare system,
especially in terms of human resources and drug supplies [13]. Recent studies in the
country documented important patient-reported barriers to accessing HIV services,
including long waiting times, poor patient reception in centers, poor coordination
between HIV testing and ART services, long delays before ART imitation [8], and a
higher risk of loss-to-follow-up among patients who initiated early ART [9]. In addition,
the country’s “free access” policy generates a loss of income for healthcare facilities
[6,14] which may negatively affect healthcare quality (e.g., through increased drug
stock-outs and reduced staff motivation) when not offset by government subsidizing
[7,15]. Finally, the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic may result in financial resources being
diverted, which may further exacerbate human resources shortages and inadequate ART
supplies [10]. Recent literature [11] and the latest estimation of the proportion
of PLHIV achieving VLS in Cameroon (approximately 70% in 2020), [12]) suggest that
the risk of HIV transmission is still high in Cameroon and that the challenges highlighted
in our study are still very much a reality.”
20. The surprising fact in table 1 is the rate of patient not yet treated, assuming
Cameroon at this stage was yet in the test and treat approach. Can the authors have
a clear idea of why those patients were not under treatment as this can appear to
be a confounding risk.
� At the time of the EVOLCam survey (i.e., April-December 2014), the test-and-treat
strategy was not yet implemented in Cameroon (this strategy was adopted in June 16
[41]). Therefore, a subset of participants (n=124, 9% of our sample) were not treated
because they may not be eligible for ART initiation at the time of the survey. Those
patients were considered at risk of transmitting HIV if they reported inconsistent
condom use with at least one partner of negative or unknown HIV status. In addition,
specific sub-categories for patients not treated were created for the “time between
HIV diagnosis and ART initiation” and “CD4 count at ART initiation” variables in our
univariate and multivariable analysis (see Table 1, p.15). We specified in the Discussion
section that the “test-and-treat strategy” was adopted in 2016 and discuss its potential
impact on the study findings (see p.18-21). See also our responses to the comments
#4 and #19 of the reviewer #1.
21. Line 299-301 Explain the need of test and treat and not delaying ART
� As suggested, the importance of the test and treat strategy to improve the HIV care
cascade has been emphasized in the Discussion, as follows (see p.18/19, lines 324-332):
“This highlights the relevance of the test-and-treat strategy currently being rolled
out in LMIC, including in Cameroon. In particular, the positive impact of this strategy
on the third step of the HIV care cascade has recently been highlighted in four randomized
population-based trials [36]. Furthermore, several studies have shown that ART initiation,
including early initiation through the ‘test-and-treat’ strategy, leads to a significant
decrease in sexual risk behaviors [24,37–39] thanks to greater opportunities for counselling
and psychological support arising out of more frequent contact with HIV services [40].
Such a decrease may also contribute to lower the risk of HIV transmission.”
22. Line 324-326-emphazise and discuss supportive adherence counseling after ART initiation
� As suggested, we provided more details about the implications of our findings regarding
the low level of adherence to ART (see p.18, lines 314-318), as follows:
“These findings reveal the huge challenges still facing HIV services in Cameroon to
achieve the third ‘95’ UNAIDS target (i.e., VLS in 95% of PLHIV treated with ART by
2025) and to prevent new HIV infections. They also highlight the need to further develop
supportive adherence services (e.g., peer-to-peer support, adherence clubs, and short
message services) which have been shown to have a positive impact on adherence and
viral suppression among PLHIV in LMIC [42].”
23. Line 328-331-Discuss test and treat strategy to address HIV care and treatment
cascade
� As suggested, we outlined in the Discussion section the positive impact of the “test-and-treat”
strategy on the two last steps of the HIV care cascade (access to ART and viral suppression)
as follows (see p.18, lines 326-327):
“In particular, the positive impact of this strategy on the third step of the HIV
care cascade has recently been highlighted in four randomized population-based trials
[36].”
However, as the implementation of this public health strategy results in a rapid and
large increase in the number of ART-treated patients in HIV services, human resources
shortages and inadequate ART supplies may be exacerbated when funding is not sufficient
to face the increased demand. In our Limitations section (see p.20/21, lines 372-389),
we therefore discussed the negative indirect effects of implementing “test-and-treat”
on the delivery and quality of HIV care services. Two recent surveys in Cameroon indicated
that the test-and-treat strategy may increase the risk for PLHIV of experiencing structural
barriers to access HIV services (e.g., long waiting times, delay to initiate ART)
and being loss-to-follow-up after early ART initiation [8,9]. These findings provide
a more nuanced picture of the impact of the “test-and-treat” strategy on the HIV care
continuum which is important to surface in order to better understand the critical
role played by healthcare supply-related factors.
24. Final discussion and recommendations can be more focused on the importance of
test and treat, task shifting and ARV stocks management to prevent ARV stock outs
� We revised the Discussion section by providing additional information on the test
and treat strategy (see responses to comments #23). We also provided further details
on how to best adapt ARV stocks management in HIV services using previous findings
from Cameroon (see p.22, lines 403-405), as follows:
“A previous study in Cameroon recommended implementing a set of harmonization and
coordination procedures, as well as continuous quality control monitoring throughout
the whole ARV supply chain to ensure permanent availability of these drugs for PLHIV
[43].”
Reviewer #3.
25. In terms of content/form, the document seems to me to be well written. The subject
addresses an issue never before addressed in Cameroon to the best of my knowledge
and worthy of interest for improving the national response against HIV in Cameroon.
The ethical aspects are not well described, but all the required authorizations have
been obtained. The methodology is simple and clear and the conclusions are linked
to it.
� Thank you for your comment. Our Methods section has been revised with further details
regarding the study design and data collection as well as with some ethical issues
(see p.6/7, lines 112-129):
“Briefly, eligible PLWH (≥21 years old and HIV diagnosed >3 months) attending an outpatient
consultation in one of the 19 participating HIV services were randomly selected and
informed about the study. Patients willing to participate provided written informed
consent before data collection. First, a standardized medical questionnaire was completed
during the consultation by healthcare providers. The following clinical data were
obtained from patient examinations and retrospective medical files: dates of HIV diagnosis
and ART initiation, WHO clinical stage of HIV infection at ART initiation and at the
time of the study, CD4 count at ART initiation, drug regimen at the time of the study,
body mass index and any history of tuberculosis and hepatitis B co-infection and related
diagnosis date. Second, patients answered a face-to-face questionnaire administered
in a private room by trained independent interviewers which collected data on demographic,
socioeconomic, behavioral, psychosocial and domestic information. More specifically,
a series of questions were asked on adherence to ART, perceived health and HIV-related
stigma as well as alcohol consumption and sexual behaviors during the 12 months prior
to the study (number of sexual partners, experience of transactional sex, frequency
of sexual relationships, HIV status and condom use with the two most recent partners).
The questionnaire is available as supplementary material in Fiorentino et al., 2021
[20]. Third, a blood sample was taken to measure HIV viral load (only for patients
ART treated >6 months) and CD4 cell count. All blood samples were analyzed by a reference
HIV laboratory in Yaoundé.”
We also revised our ethical statement to provide additional details about the access
to the data (see p.24), as follows:
“This study was conducted in compliance with international and national regulations
on ethics and research on people. It received administrative authorisation from the
Ministry of Public Health in Cameroon and was approved by the Cameroonian National
Ethics Committee (approval reference: 2013/08/349/L/CNERSH/SP). All participants were
informed about the study’s objectives and its modalities and all provided written
consent to participate. All individual data collected in the research were anonymized
using a patient identification number; only this number was reported in the data collection
tools and the databases used for analyses.”
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