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PONE-D-21-30854Organic Amendment plus inoculum drivers: who drives more P nutrition for wheat plant fitness in small duration soil experimentPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Irshad, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 12 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please ensure that you refer to Figures 4-8 in your text as, if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the figure. Additional Editor Comments: Use the ‘title case’ in title Or replace “A” with “a” in amendment… Figures’ overall quality is not good; they are not clear to be read; please follow the journal’s guidelines. There are too many figures and some will not affect the manuscript-quality if excluded e.g. the figure-1 and Figure-9 don’t provide much flesh to the ms, fig. 2, 3, 4, and 5 have some redundancy and can better be re-represented. Fig. 6 and 7 can also be presented as one figure with A and B panels. Figure 4: the legend says – ‘soil net pH-change’ while the data shows about pH values. pH-change means 1-fold, 2-fold, 3-fold etc. while the author seem to mean the actual soil pH and not the net-changes; better to modify accordingly to improve clarity. What is the purpose of Fig. 2 and 3 in the presence of Fig. 5? Figure 6/7 root/shoot P and not root/shoot P-uptake; I think the uptake means the mechanistic accomplishment of plant from one medium (soil) into the other (plant-body) via some transporter systems while the authors’ work indicates the values/concentrations present in root/shoot. Please clarify. Figure 8: Plant total dry weight per pot; how did you normalize this? Were there same number of plants in each pot for all treatments? What was the normalization/standardization of plant health before the treatment application? Figure 9: For molecular gene analysis: on the basis of PCR and gel electrophoresis bands, how can you claim the gene expression?? Manuscript’s sub-section “Successful identification of organic P mineralizing genes” looks inappropriate; the gel pictures simply mean the presence or absence of the potential genes and is not the gene expression. Neither were the amplified pcr-products sequenced, so cannot be said as identification either. Moreover, the authors used 20-30 years old primer systems; it would be surprising to know if there is not primer-improvement (for better specificity) during these years?? And, lastly, what is the role of Quinoprotein glucose dehydrogenase in organic P-mineralization? Figure 10 is quite complicated, and its legend is even more. As this diagram is the summary of their whole work, the authors should improve it to make it comprehensive as well as clear to understand. Table-2: replace bacteria name codes with ‘bacterial codes’. What does the column 3 and 5 mean? As per Table-3, total soil P and soil organic P are the same that means this soil does not have any inorganic P; what do the authors say in this regard?? As per ms data, Soil net available P and soil ALP is always less in manure-amended treatments than the control treatments (Fig 2,3,4,5) ; does it mean that the organic farm manure application are not good while the farmers are frequently using this strategy as fertilization?? On contrary, the authors found enhanced root/shoot P in manure-amended treatments than the control treatments (Fig 6, 7). I recommend the authors to validate these observations and to make the appropriate discussion accordingly. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The current study examined the potential effects of co-inoculation of phosphorus solubilizing bacteria and their grazer nematodes on soil P availability in presence of poultry manure. The subject of this article is coherent with the scope of Plos ONE. Given the depletion of the limited P-fertilizer resources, scientific understanding the interaction of soil microfauna to improve the soil P fertility is important. The manuscript is well written. However, the manuscript requires revisions before it could be accepted for publication. Specific comments: Need to define first PSB. L122: “A synthetic solid medium” is the starting sentence of L123. Material and method A huge amount of information is presented in the mat&met section. Some sections could be presented as a supplementary information to simplify the paper. L110-L121: The soil properties should be presented with emphasis on the soil type (P-deficient or not, alkaline or acidic soil). L136: PKO??? L168-L169: What criteria did you choose to select the 6 efficient strains of the 21 based on pH, ALP activity and P mineralization? Please report the results even as a supplementary information. L287-L289: Can you provide the characteristic/succinct history of the field where soil was sampled (e.g. previous crop). L302-L3016: Summarize the tested treatments of the experimental design in table to better help readers. Specify the duration of the experiment. How did you collected the soil samples for subsequent analyses (rhizosphere or bulk for each pot). In statistical analysis section: provide sufficient information for data handling: software, the tested treatment with the statistical approach used (here one and two-way anova). The test of normality of the data and the homogeneity of variance. Results: L376-L381: Give the Anova result either in the text or in a separate table. Describe the T1 treatment here. How did you calculate the soil net P availability in Fig 2? May be it’s better to add this information in mat&met section. I think it’s better to present the result for each tested parameters first before going in a specific description in your text: bacteria treatment, Nematode treatment, Poultry treatment, and interactions, and should be supported by Anova results. The same also with ALP results in L388-L395, and with pH and soil net available P (L402-L406). It is interesting to see the different response of soil net available P with soil net pH. Increasing soil pH from 5.75 to 7.5 (control to Control+wheat plant+ bacterial consortia +nematodes) increased soil P from 0.0.4 to 4 µg.g-1) in unamended treatment , while increasing soil pH from 6.5 to 7.5 increased soil P from 0.0.2 to 2.8 µg.g-1). Focusing in nematode treatment impact, how about the response of increasing soil P to soil pH between the two treatments C+P+B vs C+P+B+N with or without PM addition? The same remarks with the net P liberation vs ALP activity. The clear effect of Nematode under PM amendment or no organic amendment could be describe and general conclusion can be drawn from this. I suggest that authors presents the correlation between the measured parameters as ALP, pH, soil P, and plant biomass and P uptake. Discussion: I suggest to clearly state the nematode predator effect in presence of PM and without PM on the measured parameters before discussing the underlying mechanism in L507. L580: Fig 9??? L584: Fig 8 instead of Fig 9. In the section “Microbial P dynamics changes in soil treatments”, L507-L555, authors stated that the predation treatment declined Net P and ALP activity with PM addition in contrast with those without PM amendment; this is related to the immobilization of available P in microbial biomass. Does it suggest that predator effect is OM-dependent in soil? Through which mechanism? Total P uptake (P root + P shoot) could be added to clearly show the contrasting effect of treatment. Could you try to calculate the P uptake efficiency (PUPE as the ability of crops to uptake P from the soil) = P uptake/soil P available (Moll et al. (1982)) to verify the predator , PM treatment effects. Do you have any results on soil available P & ALP activity measurement with time (incubation of microcosm study)? This could be interested to be related to the higher plant P uptake & biomass in PM amendment. Is it possible that after high P uptake, soil could be depleted in available P? Because here soil P & ALP seems to be negatively correlated with plant P uptake. I consider the data from different experiments including strains screening and microcosm experiment should be highly valuable and hopefully presented. I would like to encourage the authors to present clearly the data analysis in the result section and to resubmit the revised manuscript. I hope the specific comments may also help authors for the revision. Reviewer #2: # Review report: Ahmed et al., The submitted manuscript with the entitled "Organic Amendment plus inoculum drivers: who drives more P nutrition for wheat plant fitness in small duration soil experiment" is a very nice research article with up-to-date information submitted by Dr. Usman Irshad as a corresponding author. The research article describes the importance of biological drivers that significantly enhanced the soil ALP and available P and thus enhanced dry biomass and P uptake. However, reviewer has few suggestions to improve the impact of research article to the readers. Comments, and suggestion to the author are the following: Title: Organic Amendment plus inoculum drivers: who drives more P nutrition for wheat plant fitness in small duration soil experiment The title of this manuscript does not match the results. Kindly, check it and reframe it accordingly. Abstract: It is too lengthy, and sentences are repeated. Kindly make it short and put the main findings here. Line 30-What is WEP? Note-Key word are missing. Introduction: The introduction of this manuscript is up to date. However, the authors used much time etc. Instead of etc. put more information that is required to strengthen your manuscript. Kindly do not use etc words. Line 37- act as major sink and source (What does it mean?) of key abiotic components such as carbon Line 42- development and growth of plant (Reference?). Agriculture soils are strongly depleted in available P for plants (How??), despite being virtually sufficient in total P 50-65% [3] Line 53- Organic amendments of?? Line 55-Biomass of?? Line 56- other essential ecological functions such as? Line 61- large amount of P in their biomass (Kindly write the proper sentences. I did not get the point here) Line 64- Depending on the soil and fertilizer input the release of P from microbial biomass-How?? Question 1: Why did you choose only poultry manure? Question 2: What was the concentration of P in soil before adding PM? And what was the content of P in PM? Question 3: How did you decide the experiments duration for 3-months? Kindly, mention the specific reason. Line 90-91: These microbial growths sequester large amounts of available nutrients such as P, C and N, e.g., nematodes while grazing sequester 50–70% of the prey carbon for biomass production [19]. Kindly rewrite the whole sentence to make it clear for audience. Materials and methods: Comments-I would like to suggest to the authors kindly make it short and crisp with only required information. Materials and methods are too lengthy as compared to results sections. You can shift unnecessary part of this section to the supplementary sections. Note-Kindly make the italic all the scientific names. Line 113- The soil samples were collected from the upper soil layer (depth 113 0-15cm) in triplicates, A substantial P turnover occur in the surface layers of soil and microbial number reduce along soil depth [21]-Why did you write this statement in materials and methods section? Line 119- while the remaining portion of soil was mixed with? Line 118- Isolation of phosphorus solubilizing bacteria from? And how did you isolate? Line 120- soil initial pH, water available phosphorus and total phosphorus. All determinations and results were done in triplicate (Kindly make it clear). Line 122- Isolation, screening and identification of PSBs on A (Why this is capital?) synthetic solid medium Question 4-How did you control the growth of other microorganisms? Line 165- with each isolate sample by incubating 0.25 mL of water with 1 mL (Space) of pNPP and buffer and Line 166- immediately adding 4 mL (space) of 125 (Space) mM NaOH to stop the reaction. Line 169- 6 efficient strains out of 21 were selected for further analys (remove extra space)es. This statement is not supported by your table no-2. Line 177- Phosphorus mineralizing gene expression using q-PCR: In bacteria phoN, phnX gene (full form?) encoding enzymes are responsible for organic P mineralization and gcd (full form?) for inorganic P solubilization i.e., Note-Figure2-Kindly prepare a new diagram with proper formatting. You must have to keep the size of figures 300 dpi. Line 227- The synergistic activity by combination of 6, 4, 3 and 2 of 6 or 4?? selected isolates with high available Figure 1: This is not providing a clear message to the readers; therefore, I would like to ask to make a table for figure 1. Results: Note-Kindly, prepare all the figures with proper formation to keep at least 300 dpi size. Figure 9-You should replace this figure with other. As I can see clearly shadow instead of bands. I am not able to see the proper bands. Note-In each results heading, you should write outcome of the results (kind of 1 line result). For example, do not write Plant dry biomass. You can write treatment of X and Y enhanced dry biomass. Note-Conclusion of this manuscript is missing. Kindly write it. Once you address all the comments and queries, after that, I will recommend this manuscript for further process. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. 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