Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-36847Reliability and validity of the Hungarian Version of the Personality Inventory for DSM-5 (PID-5)PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Unoka, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 26 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper presents the results of the study testing psychometric properties of the Hungarian version of the Personality Inventory for DSM-5 (PID-5). I think we have thorough, high-quality work here in terms of applied procedures, methodological issues and statistical analyses. What is more, the study have a potential to essentially contribute to the literature, particularly due to CFA examination of three different models of the PID-5 internal structure (i.e., relationships between facets and domains) as well as test-retest examination of reliability. Also an overview of FA methods used in previous studies analyzing PID-5 structure in different languages is a strength of the paper (although I had very hard time trying to find the Table 1, which presents this “mini-review”). However, the manuscript in its current shape has many faults which definitely should be eliminated before publication. Below, I’m pointing out four such major concerns and several minor ones. 1. There is an another, published study on Hungarian adaptation of the PID-5 using another adaptation of the measure (Labancz et al., 2020). The Authors admitted that and referred to this publication, but just in the Discussion section. Meanwhile, it should be one of the main issues in the Introduction. The Authors should refer to the previous study pointing out its strengths and limitations, both psychometric and scientific ones. There are many advantages of the current research in relation to Labancz et al.’ study that should be mentioned (e.g., APA permission, test-retest reliability, validity criteria, CFA analyses) and convince the reader that the current study is an extension of the previous one (and propose adaptation of the PID-5 could be considered competitive to or even better than the previous one). 2. The considerably large clinical sample is one of the largest strength of the study. However, the reader has no chance to learn about its characteristics. There are some additional information but just in the Discussion section, which is a definitely too late. Moreover, the equivalence of the clinic and non-clinic samples in term of gender and age is impressive, but still more information concerning the procedure of achieving that is needed. I would also be grateful for some more information about how it was happened that n = 314 became n = 222 in the complete factor structure analysis (as it is an essential loss of the sample size). And what does it exactly mean, that “In all the other type of analysis, missing data were left out and the clinical sample size was 314”? I think this issue should be mentioned as a limitation of the study. Summing up, the Participants and procedure section should be enriched and improved. 3. As mentioned, I found the CFA test of the three different models of the PID-5 internal structure (i.e., by APA, early Krueger, and Watters and Bagby) is the strength of the study. However, these models should be definitely more precisely described (and maybe illustrated?), in particular with the explanation of differences between the first and the third one. 4. The last major remark is the most formal and least specific one. In my opinion the paper suffer from many editing errors and generally rather poor language. There are also many inconsistences, lacks of information or severe lacks of precision in some parts of the manuscript (please, see below), which make them “messy”. Therefore, I strongly recommend professional English proofreading and edition of the manuscript before resubmission. Moreover, in my opinion the Introduction section should be better structured, at least by division of the text into more paragraphs. The Authors should also check the numbers of Tables (e.g., Table 3 on p. 9 and 14) and screen the whole manuscript for typographical errors and inconsistent information. Some examples and another remarks are given below: - p.2: “PDNOS”, “APA”, “DSM” – the abbreviations should be explained while the first use; - p.2: “Since its publication, more than hundred publications investigated the validity of the AMDP in different languages” – some relevant reference should be added; - p.3 “APA (….) provided different kinds of measures (self-report, informant, rating scale) for assessing maladaptive personality traits. The self-report version is the Personality Inventory for the DSM–5 (PID–5)” – imprecise statement as PID-5 is also other-informant measure; - p.3: inconsistent expression. Firstly the Authors claim: “Internal consistencies of PID-5 domains and facets have been studied extensively, and strong internal consistency scores were demonstrated.”, a and in the next sentence: “Coefficient alphas (…) for facets ranged from .46-.77 to .94-.96, demonstrating some possible issues with scale reliability at the facet level”; - p.3: “In order to eliminate cross-loadings of facets, three facets with the highest facet to domain factor loadings (…)” – please, rephrase; - p.4 and others: the Authors use the term “healthy” in reference to the none-clinical sample. It seems that the term “non-clinical” is more appropriate as we know a little about the health level of the community sample; - p.6: “Twelve PDs were assessed; all cluster A, B, and C PDs and Passive-Aggressive and Depressive PD”. How is that possible since items referring to antisocial personality disorder were left out and only 104 items were used? How this information relates to the use of just a total score of SCID-2 in analyses? Wouldn’t be the SCID-2 specific disorders scores valuable as validity criteria for the PID-5 scales? - p.7: “A series of confirmatory factor analyses (CFA) was conducted to test the unidimensionality of the PID-5 scales”. It is a very frugal, unsatisfactory and imprecise description of the CFA procedure used in the study; - p.8: “In summary, most scales have appropriate reliability, except for the Suspiciousness facet, the reliability of which is low” – it should be added that this conclusion concerns only the non-clinical sample. The same problem appears on p. 12 (point 1); - p.9: “SCID-II total PD scores are significant in both the clinical and the non-clinical groups even after Bonferroni correction.” – please, rephrase; - p.10: “Associations between PID-5 domains and facets between clinical and non-clinical groups, gender, age and education are reported in Table 6” – please, rephrase; - p.11: the direction of significant gender differences should be given to enhance the readability. Reviewer #2: Beyond the Hungarian translation of the PID5, the authors propose interesting results on the relationship between AMPD and clinical disorders, using the SCL 90r. It would have been useful if elements could have been mentioned about the relations between the subscales of this questionnaire and the data of the PID 5. But this does not penalize the quality of the present work and could obviously be the subject of a later work allowing to deepen the relations between personality disorders and clinical disorders. It is regrettable that the authors do not mention the conditions of the translation of the PID 5 into Hungarian. Was a return translation made? Is this translation freely available so that Hungarian speakers can use it? Finally, an important result appears in this work that is not sufficiently discussed. This is the lack of stability at 1 month in Negative Affectivity and Disinhibition. Pathological personality traits, like personality disorders, are known to have stable and long-lasting modalities. How, could the authors explain their results regard to the literature. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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