Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-32075Design Thinking Teaching and Learning in Higher Education: Student and Faculty Experiences Across Four UniversitiesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. McLaughlin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 05 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a very important manuscript regarding DT-TL. As authors have stated, this is a subject that taught mainly in certain disciplines and not in other. The authors therefore have shared pioneering work in regard to DT in Humanities/ Social Sciences. The introduction is clearly written. There are a number of queries that I have noted that may improve the quality of the manuscript: 1. The authors could also include and infer about the impact of DT in various curricula in their introduction or discussion since they mention that DT is already taught in certain disciplines. The authors could also highlight the type of curricula for the four universities and/or courses of the participants. Certain curricula have some components of the DT such as Problem Based Learning curriculum. 2. They adapted a survey from Liedtka and Bahr who studied DT practices among the workforces. The authors were not clear how after adaptation they validated the tool before they started their research. 3. In their research questions, they could have grammatic review and edit the questions to make them more clearer and highlight the sub-questions. 4. There are sentences where a semi-colon is more appropriate than a comma or a hyphen (line 96) 5. With regard to ethical consideration, the authors obtained 3 IRB approvals, but 4 universities participated. They remain silent on the fourth university IRB approval. 6. Within the results section, the authors mention that the majority of participants majored in Humanities/ Social Sciences and that they were mainly white and undergraduates. Since the authors discusses these variables in the results/discussion, it remains succinctly prudent for them to mention all the disciplines, non-white population participating in the study and, the number of graduate students involved. Is discussing these variables in place in terms of population size of each? 7. Should the standard deviations be written without a zero (.68) or, in full starting with a zero (0.68)? If so, it should be consistently added to all the standard deviations. 8. In the discussion, they could briefly share their thoughts of some faculty who teach DT without the DT expertise. 9. In the discussion, the authors mention how their research complements conceptual frameworks of DT in education: they could mention two or three of them. 10. Write org in full (line 243) 11. Line 287: the authors could share their thoughts on the reason why undergraduate students reported Prototyping and Experimentation more frequently than graduate students as the reverse is expected as the norm with graduate. 12. The authors decided to publish the qualitative component of the research separately, some of the critical perspectives about DT-TL may be missing in this manuscript especially that it seems the authors have not fully answered some of the research questions such as the No.3 research question (Is DT a valid construct within teaching and learning?) 13. The section under Future Directions seems to be too long and at times reads more like the general discussion. 14. They should be consistent with their referencing Reviewer #2: Design Thinking Teaching and Learning in Higher Education: Student and Faculty Experiences Across Four Universities Summary observations Abstract is clear although the results component is in places inconsistent with what is indicated in the main results section of the manuscript. In the introduction, the authors indicate that ‘DT practices and outcomes across higher education is still new’. Therefore, they did not discuss or reference any available published literature in the ‘introduction’, to give a sense of the overall context. This creates the impression that nothing has been published in this area. The specific research questions are well-articulated. The researchers should have stated the main research question before listing the specific research questions. Appropriate references are quoted, institutional review boards’ approval were obtained and informed consent obtained. Tables are clear and readable but Table 1 needs to be revised to reflect ‘missing data’. The data were collected, analysed and interpreted by and large correctly. However, the results that reflect the ‘main findings’ of the study as stated in the abstract should have been presented in a table to enable the reviewers to interrogate the data analysis and the conclusion thereof. This was not possible. The results are adequately discussed but there are instances where the key findings are stated with little or no discussion. The authors discuss the limitation of the study. However, some of the limitations mentioned are not limitation per se. Language editing is strongly recommended. Specific Comments Abstract L15/16 contradicts/inconsistent with L287. ‘Differences found based on discipline and students’ level’. Pay attention to statement on ‘student level’ Introduction L26-29 Long sentence L48 – ‘wicked’ not sure it is appropriate for formal writing L66 – “outcomes across higher education is still new’. Though ‘new’ what does the limited/available published data show? and give references. L73-81. Are specific research questions but what is the main/overall research question? State it first before giving specific research questions? Data Collection L101-104 has to be reconciled with L152/153 (Results section). Purposive sampling was used and faculty who teach design thinking courses were recruited (L101-L104). If this is true, how come faculty with ‘none’ DT expertise (L152) were recruited? How does this help answer the research questions? Ethical considerations, consent L132-134. Study involved four (4) universities (L100) but only three (3) review boards are mentioned. Results L159/160. It is ‘shared meeting’ or ‘shared meaning’? L170-175. Reading the abstract it appears L170-175 represent the ‘main findings’ of the study. How come then the analysis is not presented in a table to enable the reviewers to interrogate the data and the analysis. Suggest that the results be tabulated. Discussion L209. ‘First and foremost’ unnecessary words L213. ‘8 outcomes constructs’ shouldn’t it be ‘5 outcome constructs’ L236-242. It is simply reporting the results and there is no discussion; should be moved to either the results section or inserted after line 226 L243. ‘Org.’ should be written in full. L266-267. Please revise to connect the two sentences better L283. ‘centers around growth mindset and a willingness to learn and change’. Revise this sentence, not easy to understand. Should it be ‘centers around (on) growth mindset (growth of mindset) and a willingness to learn and change ‘ L290/291. Needs elaborating and clarifying. Can this conclusion be drawn?, given that the study was conducted in predominantly white institutions and the numbers for other races (individually) are low; much underrepresented. Future Directions L310. Is it ‘institution who…’? L316-328. Not sure about the relevance of these lines to the manuscript. Looks like it is referring to the ‘qualitative component of the overall study’ which is not the subject of this manuscript. Limitations L358. Reconcile this with L85-87. How can ‘lack of qualitative data’ be a limitation when this was a mixed methods study and the researchers ‘intentionally’ decided not to consider the qualitative and quantitative data together? Conclusion L368-370. Please revise. It is unclear and incomplete. For instance, what is “promote mindsets…’? Table 1 • The students’ numbers do not add up to 196 and percentages do not up to 100% for the participants’ characteristics. Please include in the table ‘missing/unknowns/no responses’ in your table. • Why is it that only one ethnicity is recorded? It is also not clear what its relevance is. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Enoch Sepako, PhD, MHPE [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Design Thinking Teaching and Learning in Higher Education: Experiences Across Four Universities PONE-D-21-32075R1 Dear Dr. McLaughlin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have sufficiently responded to reviewers comments. The authors mentioned publishing the qualitative component of the research separately. This part of work should be discussed only if it adds-value to this manuscript discussions. Reviewer #2: L103 -L106: 'In one single institution study, for example, researchers found that DT requires time and trust which can be constrained by the imposed deadlines of semester-based projects [21]. In a single course study, students indicated that their “whirlwind” course promoted almost “exponential” growth [22]' should be inserted after L108. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Enoch Sepako, PhD |
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