Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 1, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-31609Lessons learned about willingness to adopt various protective measures during the early COVID-19 pandemic in three countriesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Souza Santana, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. It seems that the Reviewers indicated several important issues. Please try to repond to them and accordingly adjust your manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 06 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript presents a study conducted on representative samples from three countries (Germany, Hong Kong, US). A study aimed to verify three hypotheses about factors predicting intentions towards COVID-19 preventive behaviors. The study is methodologically correct, and the manuscript is well-written. I especially acknowledge that the authors followed Open Science recommendations such as preregistration, transparency of the description of methods and results (e.g., the distinction between preregistered and exploratory analyses). I have only minor comments that may help to improve the manuscript. 1. I recommend the authors share the exact wording of questions used in the study (in English) to help researchers in the future replicate the study on the OSF project. 2. Please highlight in the manuscript that the codes of hypotheses (e.g., H1, H2, H3) are not consistent with the preregistration (H4, H5, H6) 3. Please elaborate more on psychological mechanisms that may underlie the effectiveness and experience hypotheses. How may perceived effectiveness shape self-efficacy/controllability/motivation for a particular behavior? Whether the experience in performing specific action only helps shape habits or maybe you can find an alternative explanation, e.g., people may want to shape a consistent image of themselves? Moreover, perhaps it would be good to include risk perception as a concept explaining some of these relationships (even if you decided not to have it in the analyses reported in this manuscript)? 4. Please briefly discuss how not following the exclusion criterion (i.e., being infected with COVID-19) could influence results. 5. Please provide in the manuscript sample items of individualism and collectivism. Please briefly explain what horizontal and vertical individualism are. 6. Why did you ask participants about washing hands for 20 seconds while in the introduction you argue that it is recommended to wash hands for 30 seconds? 7. I recommend adding (e.g., in supplementary materials) the correlation matrix between the most important variables used in the study) 8. The results showed a very high willingness to adopt the measures used in the study (M 5.6.-6.10/7 point scale). Please stress this as a limitation of a study and discuss how the pattern of results may be found in other (less compliant) countries. 9. Please comment about the relative strength of predictive power for the most important variables Reviewer #2: Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review this interesting paper. In this research, the willingness to adopt specific protective measures against COVID-19 was assessed in three countries. There are many strengths to this research, including preregistration of the study and the provision of all data, materials, and code. Beside the strengths of this research, there are also some concerns that need to be addressed. The major concerns of this research are described in the following: 1. According to the preregistration, this paper describes the second (or additional) part of an experimental study. In the first part, participants received information about a hypothetical vaccine; the vaccine effectiveness was either 51% or 75% (between-subjects design). Even though the variables analysed for this paper were probably an addendum to the experiment, it is possible that the different experimental manipulations had an effect on the variables measured in the second part. The authors should be more open about the fact that the first part of the study was an experiment, which is not clear from the current description of the study (e.g., on page 8, the word ‘experiment’ is not mentioned). In addition, all analyses should include the experimental condition as an additional factor to determine whether the experimental manipulation had an (unintended) effect on the variables presented here. 2. The theoretical framework, which gives a basis for hypotheses and choice of research methods, could be described in more detail. It is not clear to me why effectiveness, previous experience, and intended self-and other-protection were chosen as the core predictors, whereas perceived risks, norms and trust were not included in the analyses. The authors could justify their selection a bit more and refer to models such as Theory of Planned Behavior or Protection Motivation Theory. 3. Please provide more details on participant screening and sampling. According to the preregistration, participants who did not fully completed the study or who reported to have an infection with COVID-19 were excluded. This is not mentioned in the manuscript. In the current version of the manuscript, there is also no information about the drop-out during the study, i.e. how many participants did not finish the study although they fulfilled the quota requirements. Please also provide more information about the panel provider and the compensation participants received for participation. 4. The authors state that the “aim of sampling participants from several countries was not to compare responses between countries, but rather to create sufficient variance in the predictors of interest, which have been shown to vary between countries and cultural contexts” (page 8). I assume that a sample from Hong Kong was included because Hong Kong is a collectivist culture. However, Table S2 indicates that compared to the other two countries, the sample form Hong Kong scored lowest on collectivism and highest on individualism. Presumably, therefore, a bias has arisen due to the type of recruitment/sampling. This should be emphasized more strongly and reasons for this should be discussed in more detail. It would also be helpful if Table S2 could be supplemented with information on significant differences between the countries. There were also some other (minor) concerns: • Abstract (last sentence). Because the results of the experiment are not presented in this manuscript, I wonder why the last sentence addresses communication of vaccine effectiveness. Perhaps a different conclusion can be chosen here. • Please keep verb tense consistent in sentences and paragraphs (e.g. page 10, line 221). • Please keep citation style consistent (e.g., page 11, line 242). • Figure 2 is a bit small. It is difficult to grasp which variable labels belong to which coefficients. Maybe you can change the figure so that the variable labels are only shown once and the coefficients from the three different samples are shown in different colours. This would also facilitate the comparison of the results of the different countries. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Agata Sobkow Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Lessons learned about willingness to adopt various protective measures during the early COVID-19 pandemic in three countries PONE-D-21-31609R1 Dear Dr. Souza Santana, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mariusz Duplaga, Ph.D., M.D., Ass. Prof. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have been responsive to my comments. I can now recommend the publication of this manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-31609R1 Lessons learned about willingness to adopt various protective measures during the early COVID-19 pandemic in three countries Dear Dr. Souza Santana: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Mariusz Duplaga Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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