Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-33168Survey potentially inappropriate prescriptions for common cold symptoms in Japan: A prospective observational studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Watari, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The manuscript does not reach to an enough level for the acceptance in PlosOne in the present form. See the Reviewers' comments carefully and respond them appropriately. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 20 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I find the manuscript to be well written, informative and concise. The paper presents novel findings based on analysis of patient interviews and prescriptions, which will be of interest to the readers. Reviewer #2: The authors report an evaluation of the appropriateness of prescriptions for the common cold. The authors interviewed 136 patients presented to a pharmacy in Japan and evaluated the appropriateness and costs associated with the prescriptions provided. Comments 1. Line 37 – remove word “Even” 2. Line 42 – Remove “on the contrary” as the statement implies similarity (60% vs 50%) and not “contrary” 3. Line 56 – suggest rephrase objectives statement. What is meant by “to determine the actual status of prescriptions” is unclear. Suggest state that the objective was to assess the appropriateness of prescriptions 4. S1 Appendix: The appendix provides a summary of the evidence used for the authors to adjudicate the prescriptions. However, the way the authors used this evidence summary to adjudicate the prescriptions is a bit opaque. It is not clear to me how each prescription was classified. Can the authors add another column clarifying which medications were appropriate or inappropriate based on the criteria used? For example; amoxicillin described as first line for GAS pharyngitis. How did the authors adjudicate amoxicillin or penicillin prescriptions for patients with pharyngitis without swab confirmation of GAS? I did not see a section for swab results on the interview form. 5. Please clarify what Cephem is? I am not familiar with this from North America. In the appendix listed as a nasal spray but in the manuscript it is treated as a systemic antibiotic. If a topical spray I suggest separating out from the systemic antimicrobials 6. Can the authors clarify what proportion of “inappropriate prescriptions” were for incorrect dose and which were unnecessary? 7. Line 126: I am not familiar with “Kampo medicine”, can the authors briefly explain this exclusion? 8. Line 142: I am not sure why the primary outcome was only presented descriptively and the secondary outcome was analyzed with a statistical test. With 136 participants it is a missed opportunity to not evaluate for predictors of inappropriate prescribing from the data collected. I recommend the authors perform bivariate and multivariable analysis evaluating predictors for inappropriate prescriptions. 9. I was surprised the authors did not capture whether a throat swab (rapid antigen or culture) was done for GAS. Is this common practice in primary care in Japan? Given how common sore throat as a complaint was I am not clear how antibiotic prescriptions were adjudicated without this information. Were all antibiotics assumed to be inappropriate? This relates back to point 4. 10. Line 200: Are these percentages of antibacterial agents the percent of all prescriptions? Percent of antimicrobials? Or percent of patients? 11. As above comment if Cephem is not a systemic antibiotic consider separating this out from the other antibiotics 12. Table 3 lists the percent of prescriptions. Can you add the percent inappropriate to this table? For example 41.9% of prescriptions were H1 blockers (or is it 41.9% of patients received H1 blocker?)…what percent of those 57 H1 blockers were inappropriate? 13. Can you convert Yen to US dollars in brackets? 14. Table 4: Suggest combine with table 3 and include numbers (not just percentages). How many prescriptions, what percent of total, and what number and percent were inappropriate 15. As per point 8 suggest include a statistical evaluation of predictors of inappropriateness 16. Line 260: clarify if Cephem is topical or systemic 17. Line 261: “Penicillin is recommended as the first choice…” how was this factored into the study? It is not clear how penicillin was adjudicated in this study (appropriate or inappropriate?) 18. Line 273: The provided reason for classifying quinolones as inappropriate is not accurate. Quinolones are inappropriate because they have no effect on viruses which cause the common cold. You have listed 1 rare but important side effect of that medication class. 19. Line 280: I don’t understand the separation of sections titled “Factors leading…” and “Factors responsible…” The authors discuss one potential aspect leading to inappropriate prescribing (medical education). I agree this may be a factor but there is a whole behavioral science literature of the many complex reasons for inappropriate prescribing – perceived patient expectations, fear, habit, etc. Many reasons beyond education and knowledge base. While this may be beyond the scope of this manuscript to discuss in detail these are important to briefly discuss as the solutions to this complex problem will involve much more than modifying medical education or continuing medical education as we know these interventions, while important, have overall limited impact on behavior change and quality improvement. 20. Line 291: The authors summarize literature on drivers of inappropriate drugs but missed an opportunity in this study to contribute to that literature. As per point 8 and 15 above I suggest you add that evaluation. 21. Line 321: Suggest add to limitations that the findings are limited to adults without underlying medical comorbidities (as per study inclusion criteria) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-21-33168R1Survey potentially inappropriate prescriptions for common cold symptoms in Japan: A prospective observational studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Watari, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Minor comments are still necessary in the present form.See the Reviewer's suggestions carefully and respond them appropriately. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 02 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Reviewer 1. Method I would suggest adding more in the Statistical analyses section on the statistical methods used for deriving results described in the results section (including ones included in the Tables). For example, currently there is no mention on IQRs in the statistical analyses section – please add an explanation on this. Response: Changes (Method_Statistical Analyses) P7, L148 Dear author Your comment has been addressed. Reviewer 2. Results How many physicians have prescribed the drugs in this time? What are the specialties of the doctors who prescribed it? What percentage of prescribing physicians belong to a hospital or clinic? Please add their characteristics if possible. Response Addition (Discussion_ Limitation) P18, L347 to P19, L359 (marked_manuscript) Dear author Your comment has been addressed, but please make it more briefly and more compact. Reviewer 3.Discussion 1) Four issues on the part of physicians have been pointed out as factors in inappropriate prescribing (Cephem antibacterials, β2-stimulants, and new quinolone antibacterials). What about the role of pharmacists, such as their intervention against inappropriate prescriptions? For example, in Japan, as a countermeasure against polypharmacy, a pharmaceutical management fee has been newly established as a dispensing fee, and pharmacists are encouraged to propose drug reduction. Since there is no pharmacist's view for inappropriate prescribing in this document, please add their perspective. Response: Addition (Discussion_ Pharmacists' views on potentially inappropriate prescription) P17, L306 Dear author I understand it. However, I think the following point is one of the major problem faced by pharmacists. This is because pharmacists in Japan have not yet established the professional competence to review and suggest prescriptions for pharmacotherapy. Reviewer 3.Discussion 2) It has been shown that medication costs are higher in the inappropriate prescription group, but this point was not good enough explained, though there are some words about Japanese healthcare system in the “Discussion” Response n_ Considerations for drug costs) P17, L322 (marked_manuscript) Dear author I don't think the following explanation adequately describes the actual situation in Japan. "Japan's universal health insurance system covers all prescription drugs without restrictions.” For example, there is the Diagnosis Procedure Combination (DPC), and there is a system for polypharmacy, which provides reimbursement for the dispensing of drugs by reducing the number of drugs. Therefore, how about "Japan's universal health insurance system covers all prescription drugs generally.” ? Reviewer 3.Discussion 3)It was described the first factor is that patients may be seeking medications from doctors in this document. However, some authors interviewed the patients actually. Did they confirm this factor? What was the patients' view? From the perspective of “Choosing Wisely”, how do the authors think about the health literacy education for patients? Response Dear author How about the following references as citations of Choosing Wisely? � Consumer Reports https://www.consumerreports.org/doctors/questions-to-ask-your-doctor/ or � Muscat DM, et al. Evaluation of the Choosing Wisely Australia 5 Questions resource and a shared decision-making preparation video: protocol for an online experiment. BMJ Open 2019;9:e033126 https://bmjopen.bmj.com/content/9/11/e033126 Dear author Finally, after reading the submitted paper more precisely again, I would like to mention an additional point. The design of this study is a cross sectional study, and thus, it seems inappropriate to refer to this study as a prospective observational study. The reason is as follows; it is cross sectional because they looked at the prevalence of whether or not there had been an inappropriate prescription, where the survey lasted for 3 months – but in fact, the study participants were not followed for 3 months. It is recommended that the authors consult an epidemiologist. Reviewer #2: The authors have done an excellent job responding to all reviewer comments. Everything has been adequately addressed. I have no further feedback. Thank you. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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