Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 19, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-36805Controlled Assembly of Retinal Cells on Fractal and Euclidean ElectrodesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Moslehi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Overall, the external reviewers agree of the importance of your manuscript and were impressed with the extensive dataset you included. Reviewer #1 furthemore proposed potential additional analysis, namely detection of anchor points through a focal adhesion analysis and calcium imaging. You may want to consider to complement your dataset with this analysis. Alternatively please clarify your decision to not include such analysis in your response and in the manuscript. Some minor revisions were also proposed, e.g. statistical significance should be included in Fig 3 as suggested by Reviewer #2. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 06 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript entitled „Controlled Assembly of Retinal Cells on Fractal and Euclidean Electrodes” presents an extensive study on how the geometry of electrodes affects the behaviour of retinal cells and glial cells on the surface: their attachment, preferred anchorage places, surface density, process lengths and other parameters that are derived from fractal-like geometry of neurons. I am impressed with the extensity of research and the amount of valuable results that were derived from a straightforward experimental design. The rationale of this study has been carefully planned, and the results allowed to confirm the initial hypothesis about the effect of fractal geometry on a cell co-culture. I am sure that this study will be an important contribution to the development of biomedical electrodes, not only restricted to interfacing retinal cells, but also other cells and tissues that can be electrically stimulated. Before accepting the manuscript for publication, I would like Authors to consider the following aspects: - The introduction section will benefit if the Authors devote a paragraph to the analysis of a geometry of retinal cells. It would be great to cite the research showing that changes in fractal parameters of retinal cells could be associated with cellular processes, such as neurodegeneration (providing that such studies exist). - A large part of geometrical analysis is focused on retinal cells. I was wondering if glial cells could be also analysed with the use of additional morphometric descriptors. Maybe it would be worth to investigate whether astrocytes could become activated on the electrodes with different geometries? You may check this paper: https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1002/glia.22684 Further studies: - Detection of anchor points through a focal adhesion analysis. - Calcium imaging to verify how electrical pulses are transferred between neurons through different electrodes. Reviewer #2: The manuscript by Molehi et al. examines an engineered electrode interface with H-tree fractal vs. Euclidian patterned geometries on the behavior of dissociated retinal cell types. The vertical aligned carbon nanotube (VACNT) surfaces appeared to favor the attachment or localization of neurons, whilst the smooth SiO2 surfaces favored glial coverage. Here the authors are using the material properties and surface interactions to 'herd' cells based on their behavior. The fractal parameter of the patterning was therefore investigated to optimize cell-electrode interactions, which were largely quantified morphologically but not functionally verified (ie, by electrophysiology). The manuscript is fascinating and novel in both its aims and methods, thus worthy of publishing to reach the wide readership of PLoS. It is very well written, although a few minor improvements are suggested below, which should be made to make the results more clear to the reader. Minor points: - Figure 3 j1-4 labels are difficult to read as text is too bold. Perhaps this is only in the PDF render, but one might choose another font or not use bold titles. 'Desert' was particularly hard to make out but only after reading the text was it clear what it could be. -please mark statistical significance on Fig3 with asterices or similar to help the reader. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Controlled assembly of retinal cells on fractal and Euclidean electrodes PONE-D-21-36805R1 Dear Dr. Moslehi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Maria Asplund, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-36805R1 Controlled assembly of retinal cells on fractal and Euclidean electrodes Dear Dr. Moslehi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Maria Asplund Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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