Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 3, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-35033Psychosomatic syndromes are associated with IL-6 pro-inflammatory cytokine in heart failure patients.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Altamura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The two reviewers addressed several major and minor concerns about your manuscript. Please revise your manuscript carefully. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 17 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: A cross-sectional study on patients with heart failure (HF) was conducted to investigate the association between proinflammatory cytokines and psychosomatic psychopathology in the Institute of Cardiology at Azienda Ospedaliera Universitaria Ospedali Riuniti. The main clinical findings of this study showed that IL-6 level is correlated with psychosomatic psychopathology but no depression by DCPR status and other measure indactors. The advantage of this article is a consecutive study and innovation idea in clinical study, although the COVID-19 pandemic. However, small sample size will weaken the proof of this paper. Meanwhile, two issues should be addressed. 1. As we know, many pro-inflammatory cytokines, such as IFNγ, IL-1β and IL-6, might communicate with the central nervous system to stimulate an immune response in the brain, which may cause or exacerbate psychological symptoms. Whether only IL-6 and TNF-alpha are the key cytokines in this study of patients? Measuring panels of cytokines may contribute to research in support of a psychoneuroimmune connection between psychosomatic psychopathology and HF in patients. However, in this manuscript, the author just measured IL-6 and TNF-alpha, please discuss the reason. 2. There is still a question that the authors stated the view that IL-6 is not related to the depression, assessed by depression scores from BDI-II. Measure indicator adopted by the researcher will influence the conclusion. BDI-II is better for this study, or other measure indicator like HAMD is better? After all, strict criteria contribute to the validity of the study. Reviewer #2: The authors provide an explorative cross-sectional study (n=41) that focuses on cytokines' influence on psychosomatic syndromes development in heart failure patients. Authors evaluated psychosomatic syndromes by different questioners and searched for an association between psychosomatic syndromes and IL-6 and TNF-alpha. My main remarks are: 1. The study focuses on HF patients. However, a clear description of this specific cohort is missing, while HF is a multi-etiologic syndrome with different phenotypes and disease stages. Based on the information given, it is hard to understand what kind of HF patients were enrolled in the study. I would recommend extending baseline characteristics by describing the HF group in more detail. It is important to know the etiology of HF (at least the main causes) and phenotypes (was it left or right HF? HFpEF or HFrEF?) for several reasons. a. It is known that HF is a proinflammatory state. However, levels of cytokines differ between different etiologies (e.g., ischemic vs. non-ischemic) (https://doi.org/10.2478/s11536-013-0233-y. As well, cytokines play a role in the pathogenesis and development of HF. Cytokines concentration is positively associated with parameters of HF severity (DOI: 10.1007/s11845-017-1680-2, DOI: 10.3390/life11101006, DOI: 10.1007/s11845-017-1680-2). b. To my knowledge, the profile of psychosocial disorders differs between distinct groups of cardiovascular diseases. In addition, the incidence of depression increases with HF severity. Knowing more about the cohort would also aid in interpreting the results of the prevalence of psychosomatic syndromes and even their relationship with cytokines. c. In the discussion section, the authors compare their findings with previous studies. Still, it remains unclear whether the study patients (with HF) are similar to previous ones or differ significantly. Therefore, I think a more detailed definition of the HF cohort would help get a full view and lead to more insights into the link between HF, cytokines, and psychosomatic syndromes. 2. I would recommend that the authors clearly state the aim of the study. 3. Statistics description states that cytokines were dependent variables and various psychosomatic scores – independent ones. That would lead to the hypothesis that the authors are searching how cytokines' levels (outcome variable) depend on psychosomatic syndromes. However, I presume that the aim was the opposite. Therefore, I would recommend revising the statistics description and statistical analysis (or clarifying the aim of the study). 4. In the statistics description section, it is written that IL-6 and TNF-alpha were checked for normality. I wonder whether the authors checked normality for other continuous variables, presented in table 2. Also, I wonder if there are just two groups (DCPR+ and DCPR-), why did the authors choose ANOVA for analysis instead of a t-test? An explanation of why patients were stratified by DCPR results would be helpful. 5. How are continuous variables expressed (mean ± SD, median (IQR), or else)? I could not find that neither in the statistics description. 6. There is no mention what were the levels of cytokines. The values of cytokines should be added in Table 1 (measured values, not logarithmic ones, so it would be easier to understand if it is normal or elevated). There is written in the discussion section that "increased inflammatory activity" (line 274), but the proof is missing in the results section. 7. It is unclear what the authors mean by "comorbidity" in table 1? I presume that the conditions mentioned in lines 187-190, even the case numbers do not match (n=29 in the table and n=27 in the text). It needs clarification in the table. In addition, what does it mean systemic disorders (line 102)? 8. Some of the results are presented as text (lines 219-225). It would be easier to follow them if they were at the table. 9. I think that it would be easier to read if the article would be divided into subsections (e.g., methods: inclusion/exclusion criteria; cytokines evaluation; evaluation of psychosomatic and psychological factors, etc.), at least in separate paragraphs. In addition, I would recommend extending the psychosomatic evaluation part and describing in more detail what was evaluated, how it was done, and the ranges of scores of each questionnaire. 10. I think that other statistical methods such as ROC analysis could also fit this study (just an idea for authors). ********** 6. 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Psychosomatic syndromes are associated with IL-6 pro-inflammatory cytokine in heart failure patients. PONE-D-21-35033R1 Dear Dr. Altamura, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kenji Hashimoto, PhD Section Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The Authors have made the requested changes and satisfactorly answered to the raised criticism. I have no further comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Yan Wei |
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PONE-D-21-35033R1 Psychosomatic syndromes are associated with IL-6 pro-inflammatory cytokine in heart failure patients. Dear Dr. Altamura: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Kenji Hashimoto Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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