Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 23, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-27273Pan-genome and resistome analysis of extended-spectrum ß-lactamase-producing Escherichia coli: a multi-setting epidemiological surveillance study from MalaysiaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Dwiyanto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please address all comments and questions raised by the reviewers. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 22 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Pan-genome and resistome analysis of extended-spectrum ß-lactamase-producing Escherichia coli: a multi-setting epidemiological surveillance study from Malaysia In this study, ESBL-producing Escherichia coli (ESBL-EC) were isolated from faecal samples, tested for antibiotic susceptibilities, and selected ESBL-EC were whole genome sequenced. Based on WGS analysis, plasmid replicon groups, resistance genes and virulence genogroups were identified. Genome comparison of community isolates with the clinical , isolates from the same region did not reveal clonal relatedness. However, the community and clinical isolates could be clustered into 4 groups based on the similarity with respect to antibiotic susceptibility and plasmid profiles, and the resistance genes carried. Comments: 1. Although the study suggests no clonal relationship between the clinical and community isolates, this is based on a proportion of isolates subjected to WGS from diverse sources. The major drawback of this study is the comparison of isolates from unrelated sources; faecal isolates from community and extraintestinal isolates from the hospitals. This might explain the lack of clonality among the isolates used in this study. 2. The community isolates were from faecal samples, while the clinical isolates were from different sources It is obvious that the E. coli associated with GI tract and those found in extraintestinal niches could be clonally different, and phenotypically, these could belong to different pathogroups. Ideally, the comparisons should have been between faecal isolates from the community and the clinical sources 3. In lines 347-350, the authors state that their observation on the lack of clonality among clinical and community isolates was inconclusive due to one year gap in sampling between the two. However, they have emphasized on the absence of clonal relationship as one of the major findings of the study throughout the manuscript. 4. It is surprising to note that only blaCTX variants could be detected among the sequenced isolates. However, the distribution of ESBL genes in other isolates of this study is not known. The authors should have PCR screened all the isolates for major ESBL genes. 5. Nothing has been said about fluoroquinolone and carbapenem resistance among the isolates. 6. The study does not make attempt to compare the antibiotic resistance phenotypes with the genotypes. With the WGS available for a sizeable number of isolates, it is worth making this comparison. 7. The resistance genes against classes of antibiotics identified in the plasmids from WGS should be listed. The WGS analysis should have included QRDRs and the PMQRs 8. Line 252: Was there any association between the ESBL phenotype, and the virulence characteristics of clinical and community isolates? Can these isolates be groped into specific E. coli pathogroups based on these? (Like EPEC, EHEC etc). 9. How many isolates were recovered from each faecal sample? 10. What were the criteria used for selecting community and clinical isolates for whole genome sequencing? This should be clearly explained in the methods section. Importantly, the authors did not explain why they chose all or did they have any criteria for selecting isolates for phylogenetic analysis. 11. Table 1 uses demographic factors such as the ethnicity, occupation and education, while similar data is available for clinical samples. I could not determine from the manuscript how these factors, particularly occupation and education, have influence on faecal carriage of ESBL E. coli. Even if they have, the number of individuals sampled is too small to arrive at a definite conclusion. 12. L204: How many colonies were selected for analysis from each of these samples? Since no enrichment has been done here, it is presumed that the colonies that come up on cefotaxime plates could be, by far, non-clonal. 13. The study screened 233 fecal samples from 110 households, and the growth of cefotaxime-resistant E. coli was observed from 103 participants. However, ESBL-EC were detected in isolates from 44 participants. Nearly 60% of those isolates that grew on cefotaxime plate did not produce ESBL or the ESBL phenotype was not detectable by combination disc method. While inducible AmpC could be responsible for this, the absence of ESBLs in these should have been confirmed by PCR. 14. Line 364: Were these isolates colistin resistant? What was the MIC? 15. Abstract says 32 isolates were whole genome sequences. Please correct it as 40. Reviewer #2: This paper explores the extent and pattern of the penetrance of ESBL-producing E.coli in a community versus clinical setting in Segamat, Malaysia. The paper is based on the hypothesis that communities could unknowingly harbor unregulated sources of ESBL-producing E. coli. Hypervirulent strains and horizontal plasmid transfer are potential mechanisms for the penetrance of this antimicrobial resistance from clinical settings into the community. Understanding the relationship between clinical antimicrobial resistance and community resistance through whole-genome sequencing could lead to better surveillance and spread of antimicrobial resistance outside of clinical settings. In this paper, the authors used phenotypic profiling of ESBL-producing E.coli followed by whole-genome sequencing to compare the phenotypic and genotypic profiles of the bacteria in the clinical versus community setting. They compared CTX-M variants and SNPs pan-genome between the settings, which seems to be a robust analysis for understanding the similarities between the bacteria found in each of these settings. Interestingly, the authors found that there were similar susceptibility profiles and plasmid groups between the ESBL-producing E.coli found in the clinical and community settings. This implies that there is a connection between the ESBL-producing E.coli colonization found in these two groups. The strengths of this paper include that it provides the first community profile of ESBL-producing E.coli in Malaysia, which is essential for understanding the scope of the problem, and for targeting interventions. Another strength is the conduction of phenotypic profiling alongside the pan-genome analysis, which increases the fidelity of the results rather than stand-alone genotypic profiling. A potential criticism is that, as mentioned in the paper, the limitation of temporal sampling of decreases the scope to which the penetrance of ESBL-producing E.coli in the community setting can be understood from this paper. However, that could be a topic of future research and does not take away from the important community profile this paper provides. Reviewer #3: The manuscript aimed describes the prevalence of extended-spectrum ß-lactamase-producing Escherichia coli (ESBL-EC) associated with faecal samples from the community dwellers of Segamat town in Malaysia and compared their resistome and genomic profiles with ESBL-EC isolated from hospital patients in the same district, although with a sample gap of one year. Pan genome comparison and cluster analysis revealed four distinct clusters with similar resistome profiles between that the community isolates and clinical isolates thus suggesting the horizontal exchange of genetic material between the isolates. The manuscript is well written and the authors have rightly described the few limitations of the study also highlighting the need to carry out similar studies in future. After thoroughly reading the article, I would like to make the following comments and suggestions. 1] Introduction – Briefly highlight the importance of sequence type -ST131 in the introduction section. Line 85-87- Objectives need to be more clearly defined. 2] Materials and Methods- a. Line 181- BioProject PRJNA752611 is not accessible on NCBI website. b. Line 183- github.com/jdwiyanto/esbl_segamat is not accessible on website 3] Results- a. Table 1- Education- PMR and SPM- Give full forms please b. Table 2- Date of isolation of samples and diagnosis need not be mentioned. What was the source of Sample ID 15 and 38? c. Table 2- Justify why isolates from faecal samples were not used for comparison with community isolates which were of faecal origin? d. Line 289-291- Names of genes should be written in lower case italics. Please follow the nomenclatures as per journal guidelines e. Supplementary Data- S4_figure, the nomenclature for isolates is different than that used through the rest of the manuscript. Please keep it uniform. 4] Discussion – Discussion is well written; however, it need not have subheadings. 5] References- Please correct the citation style as per journal requirements. Final Remark: Overall, in my opinion, the manuscript provides significant information about the prevalence and spread of ESBL-EC in Southeast Asian countries, the work is well organised, all ethical approvals have been taken and the data presented is clear to understand. I would therefore suggest that the manuscript needs minor corrections. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Pan-genome and resistome analysis of extended-spectrum ß-lactamase-producing Escherichia coli: a multi-setting epidemiological surveillance study from Malaysia PONE-D-21-27273R1 Dear Dr. Dwiyanto, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed my all queries from the first review and revised the manuscript quite extensively. Additional information on QRDR genes and E. coli pathogroups has been provided and discussed well. Overall, the manuscript has vastly improved compared to the previous version. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. 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PONE-D-21-27273R1 Pan-genome and resistome analysis of extended-spectrum ß-lactamase-producing Escherichia coli: a multi-setting epidemiological surveillance study from Malaysia Dear Dr. Dwiyanto: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Iddya Karunasagar Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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