Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 26, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-26520Assessment of mitochondrial respiratory capacity using minimally invasive and noninvasive techniques in persons with spinal cord injuryPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gorgey, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by November 23, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: "AG: Ashraf Gorgey This study was supported by the DoD-CDRMP (W81XWH-14-SCIRP-CTA). The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript" Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf Additional Editor Comments (if provided): I appreciated reading your submission and feel that the Reviewers have provided a substantive and fair assessment of your work; that said, I have additional concerns that I would like you all to address in your rebuttal. 1. As muscle samples were acquired from these patients, is there a reason why citrate synthase activity, a well known surrogate of mitochondrial content, was not determined? Or cytochrome oxidase as a surrogate of ETC function? You know that these are widely assayed in metabolic studies performed in people without SCI. I know that these tell the scientist something different than respiratory capacity, but they would likely be associated with some of the outcomes (PBMCs, etc.) presented in this paper. 2. The methods section would benefit from inclusion of a brief Experimental Design section, specifically including text concerning fed state of participants, if they abstained from physical activity for some time before testing, voided their bladder, time of day of testing, etc. 3. Do you have any reliability data for your measures? If so, these would be useful to include in the Methods text. 4. Table 2 seems to suggest that PBMC underestimates many of these outcomes vs. muscle fibers; do you have any explanation for this finding? And is there a reason why paired t-tests were not used to compare these mean values statistically rather than only using Pearson r? 5. Lines 436-439 seem to need a sentence or 2 specifically referring to mitochondrial dysfunction-abnormality in persons with SCI. 6. Were these people with SCI physically active, and if so, it may be worthwhile to report this as improved mitochondrial function would be expected irrespective of their disability status. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors analyzed 22 individuals to evaluate whether mitochondrial respiration of PBMCs and NIRS are predictive of respiration of permeabilized muscle fibers after SCI. The results showed positive correlation between PBMC and permeabilized muscles fibers. However, no association was found between NIRS mitochrondrial capacity and respiration. 1. Line 289. Outliers were excluded based on studentized residuals of 2.5. the threshold of 2.5 seems quite liberal. How many data points were removed? Didn’t these data points provide information or the model was not a good one? 2. Only parametric test (T-test, linear regression and correlation) were implemented. What distribution were the data? Whether they satisfy the model assumptions? 3. Line 323. No significant difference for age,….. Please provide the information about statistical approach implemented for these participant demographics comparison in statistical analysis section. Reviewer #2: Overview Mitochondrial dysfunction likely contributes to the etiology of T2DM, obesity, and cardiovascular disease in those with SCI. Mitochondrial function is typically measured from permeabilized muscle fibers attained via muscle biopsy, a technique that is difficult to perform in those with SCI. Therefore, the purpose of this study was to examine the validity of two other potential methods of assessing mitochondrial function, mitochondrial respiration of peripheral blood mononuclear cells (PBMCs) and near-infrared spectroscopy (NIRS). Mitochondrial respiration was measured from permeabilized muscle fibers and PBMCs and mitochondrial capacity was measured by NIRS in 21 individuals with complete or incomplete SCI. A positive, significant correlation was found between PBMC and permeabilized muscle fibers for mitochondrial complex IV, but no relationship was found for NIRS. This study provides some evidence that PBMCs can be used to assess mitochondrial function using a minimally invasive procedure in those with SCI. Specific comments Lines 68-70 How does SCI result in mitochondrial dysfunction? Line 71 It is easy to see why the measurement of mitochondrial function is important to measure to assess patient prognosis, but it would be good to know more about its relevance during initial diagnosis shortly following injury. How would the assessment of mitochondrial function in those with SCI be used by clinicians to treat their patients more effectively? Lines 76-83 It is difficult to follow the relevance of the previous research results mentioned here. It is easy to understand that mitochondrial function decreases with age, but this occurs in those without SCI as well. The effects of mitochondrial function on substrate use are certainly applicable here, but there is a plethora of evidence that heavy reliance on carbohydrate occurs in those with SCI during voluntary exercise, a finding with that is more generalizable than acute electrical stimulation. In this section, it would be good to know more precisely how mitochondrial dysfunction in those with SCI leads to an increased risk for T2DM, obesity and cardiovascular disease. Line 244 When were the NIRS measurements taken relative to the other measures and were subjects tested in an overnight fasted state? Line 406 “Data” is plural. Thus, follow it with “were” rather than “was” here and throughout. Line 419 While the authors adequately explain the likely mechanisms for their primary findings, they do little to address the applicability of the data. Under what context might a clinician use a measurement of mitochondrial respiration of PBMCs to alter the treatment of their patients? It is interesting that a minimally invasive technique may adequately estimate mitochondrial function in those with SCI, but these results have little meaning if the reader cannot see how they would actually be applied to improve the lives of those with SCI. ********** 6. 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Assessment of mitochondrial respiratory capacity using minimally invasive and noninvasive techniques in persons with spinal cord injury PONE-D-21-26520R1 Dear Dr. Gorgey, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Todd A. Astorino, Ph.D FACSM Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): I thank you Dr. Gorgey for an effective and substantive rebuttal to my comments as well as those of the Reviewers. The paper was improved and in its current form, is of sufficient quality to merit publication in this Journal. Best of luck in your future work and take care. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-26520R1 Assessment of mitochondrial respiratory capacity using minimally invasive and noninvasive techniques in persons with spinal cord injury Dear Dr. Gorgey: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Todd A. Astorino Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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