Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 5, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-21940Mast cell granule motility and exocytosis is driven by dynamic microtubule formation and kinesin-1 motor functionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Eitzen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. 1. Both Reviewers expressed their concerns regarding specificity of the kinesore. The dose-dependent effect of this pharmacological agent should be established. Alternatively, the authors should demonstrate the role of kinesin-1 using additional approaches such as kinesin-1 knockdown. 2. The authors should demonstrate that the Lyso tracker colocalizes with CD63, a marker for the secretory granules. 3. The authors should develop and use the method for image analyses. It is absolutely required that all data including images are analyzed using statistical approaches in order to meet the PlosOne technical standards. 4. The authors should revise the method and discussion as recommended by the Reviewer 1. The authors should draw conclusions from data presented without extensive overinterpreting the data. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 24 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors use small molecule inhibitors of actin, microtubules, and a new kinesin inhibitor to study the role of microtubules and kinesin-1 in in mast cell motility and exocytosis. Fixed and live single cell imaging, cell fractionation, an exocytosis assay and PCR were used. Authors conclude that exocytosis of mast cell granules involves kinesin-1 on microtubules. Major points- Fig 1 A and other Figs- Most granules do not move persistently in one direction in manner that is consistent with microtubules. Do the mean granule velocities include the granules that do not move? If so, the mean velocity would be much lower. If non-moving granules are not included in the mean velocity calculations, then what is the exclusion criteria for granules? Selection/Exclusion criteria should be included in Methods section. As a broader point, the lack of persistent directional movement needs incorporated into the discussion and model of the proposed transport mechanism. Fig 2 – A, E- shows that Nocodazole decreases % exocytosis, but not granule speed, and paclitaxel has little effect on % exocytosis but decreased granule speed. Possible reasons for this observation should be included in the Discussion section. Fig 2 B, C- many granules appear outside of cell boundary, while in Fig2 D only inside of cell boundary. The authors should elaborate on the reason or cause. Fib 3 B, C, D- The author interpretations from the images is that kinesore effects granule distribution but not EB3 or F-actin. The images do not clearly support these conclusions without a quantitative image analysis approach. An image analysis approach is needed. Kinesore is a new inhibitor, not yet widely tested. The specificity of the inhibitory compound is questionable at concentrations used (100 uM). At these high concentrations, off-target effects are likely to occur. A more precise, and established approach is kinesin-1 knockdown. Additionally, live cell imaging of microtubules and granules would be valuable. Minor points- Line 84 “Mast cell granule...” needs corrected. Line 254- “Hence granules moved at velocities similar to the rate of microtubule growth suggesting that granules are driven on new microtubules” Similar velocities is not strong supporting evidence for the statement. Suggest revision. Lines 773 and 781- Movie 2 and 5 links not working Reviewer #2: The report by Ibanga et al. investigates the role of the microtubule motor protein kinesin-1 and microtubule remodeling in mast cell (MC) degranulation. The authors show using live-cell imaging that de novo microtubule formation coordinated granule transport. Functionally, they used the kinesore drug, described to activate kinesin-1 in absence of cargo, to show a defective granule translocation on microtubule and secretion. They conclude that granules are driven by kinesin-1 on microtubule to facilitate degranulation. The authors revisit published studies on already described molecular mechanisms that regulate MC degranulation. The manuscript is well written and easy to follow. However, I have some concerns that need to be addressed. 1) We can regret that the majority of the study is only done on RBL-2H3 cell line and not on primary MC (BMMC). 2) The authors used Lyso Tracker to follow secretory granules. The authors should show that in this condition the Lyso tracker colocalizes with CD63, a secretory granule marker. 3) It seems that kinesore may impact microtubule dynamic independently of its effect on kinesin-1. The authors observed that the effect of kinesore on microtubule remodeling into looping structure occurs after the loss of granule transport. However, it is not so clear whether kinesore may impact microtubule dynamic by influencing post-translational modifications of the microtubule tracks (acetylation, detyrosination, etc..) that can indirectly impact kinesin-1 functionality. In addition, do the authors know whether kinesore may impact functionality of other members of kinesin family? The lack of specificity of kinesore could be the major problem to precisely understand which molecular mechanism is impacted to explain the MC degranulation defect observed. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Mast cell granule motility and exocytosis is driven by dynamic microtubule formation and kinesin-1 motor function PONE-D-21-21940R1 Dear Dr. Eitzen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yulia Komarova Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All the comments have been adequately addressed and the manuscript is now acceptable for publication. Reviewer #2: The authors have answered most of my questions thus I recommend the paper for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Joseph M Schober Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-21940R1 Mast cell granule motility and exocytosis is driven by dynamic microtubule formation and kinesin-1 motor function Dear Dr. Eitzen: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Yulia Komarova Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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