Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-25124Health professional and patient views of a novel prognostic test for melanoma: a theoretically informed qualitative studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lecouturier, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In accordance with the expert reviewers, I have some minor concerns. Rather than repeat those points here, I refer you to the specific remarks (below) for details. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 26 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for submitting this important exploration of clinician and patient perspectives on new prognostic technology for melanoma. Please see the suggestions below, organised by section: - ABSTRACT - The "test" needs to be described, at least briefly. At the moment, all the reader gleans is that it is a "prognostic test" - INTRODUCTION - "The AJCC staging criteria are unable to distinguish between truly high and low risk Stage I/II melanomas and currently there are no other consistent ways to accurately determine an individual’s risk of disease progression." - Current prognostic practices ought to be acknowledged and the marginal, rather than absolute, benefit of this test needs to be measure of interest. - FINDINGS - "Very few interviewees had prior knowledge of the novel test other than what was shared as part of the interview." - Wouldn't it have been better to interview the doctors who had actually been part of the study that used the tests? - "In contrast, one interviewee did not consider a change to the follow-up pathway a positive outcome of the test. The one-year period of follow-up provided reassurance to the health professional that patients could carry out self-surveillance competently." - Difficult to understand this sentence - "One other suggestion was to use the test only where malignancy is detected rather than all suspected melanoma samples" - Again, even a brief description of the test in this article would be helpful. I assumed that only testing diagnosed melanomas would definitely be the case. - "Histopathologists in particular wanted more details about the test and some struggled to fully comment on its implementation with the information provided ... During recruitment there were histopathologists who declined to participate as they felt there was too little information about the 25 test for them to give an opinion" - Related to the point above - The potential for selection bias here should be acknowledged - it would be reasonable to expect that those who felt they had insufficient information about the test to participate may have given comparatively less enthusiastic answers were they included - MISCELLANEOUS - It would be good to know some of the test parameters - the predictive values, particularly - The hierarchy of headings in the article isn't quite clear - to my understanding, "Implementation" belongs under "Health professional views of the novel prognostic test", however, according to the text styling, appears to be at the same level of the hierarchy. Further, this seems to be at the same level as Findings, which they would belong under. Also note the discrepancy in phrasing of "Health professional views of the novel prognostic test" and "Patients views of the novel test" - REFERENCES - Needs formatting - FIGURES AND TABLES - Table 1 - Is reference 13 the citation for this? Perhaps that should be acknowledged in the table caption (as well as the main text) - Figure 3 - "Management plan at time prognostic information provided" - Unclear meaning - Suggest it be redesigned somewhat. Perhaps all arrows point to the right, and consider removing "Patient responsibility for self-surveillance" - As, for example, the "Fast track mechanisms" are not explained in the figure (and it might be assumed that it would be more appropriate for the high risk, rather than low risk patients), reconsider whether this figure is important to include. It portrays changes to management that might result from the implementation of the test, but is not really portraying a clinical pathway, and therefore the flowchart format isn't especially illuminating. Reviewer #2: I congratulate the authors on their work. The article reports a very interesting study that addresses a delicate and extremely important issue in the current context. The advent of predictive prognostic algorithms is also affecting other tumor sites or other pathologies, such as amyotrophic lateral scllorosis and knowing the opinion of clinicians and patients is essential before proceeding with the adoption of the tool within the care pathways. In my opinion, the article is well written and structured, the methodology seems adequate and well described (I admit that I do not have a thorough knowledge of qualitative techniques and do not use them habitually), the results are clearly presented and also the discussion of it seems well done. I have no substantial criticism to make, if not a few comments that do not affect my positive opinion on the article. The health professionals were contacted by email; it is possible that many have refused. The authors do not provide any data in this regard. It would be interesting to report the numbers and reasons for the refusal. It may be possible that those who have accepted, even if they do not know the test previously, are still professionals generally in favor of the new, with a flexible and accommodating attitude towards changes and well disposed towards confronting patients and communicating with them. In that sense, we would have a sampling bias. Some clinicians may be frankly opposed, others in favor of the test itself, but they may fear that they do not have personal or team resources to manage any negative psychological reactions of patients. Authors should at least argue more about this aspect for discussion and at best provide more data on rejecting subjects. In addition to this I point out that tables are numbered incorrectly. Reviewer #3: This paper provides a qualitative analysis of likely implementation issues regarding a prognostic test for metastatic spread of cutaneous melanoma. The analysis is informed by the Theoretical Domains Framework. Findings suggest that 20 practitioners, 19 patients and a carer were broadly supportive (sometimes enthusiastic) of the test; pending demonstration of specificity and sensitivity and the influence of the test on care pathways for practitioners, and concerns about the influence of the test on care pathways and self-surveillance. My main comment about the work pertains to how it fits into the broader social science literature surrounding prognostication. Indeed, the authors do not seem to mention this at all. First, most work on prognostication is performed against the background of a test of known sensitivity and specificity. Here, these features are unknown, and thus the comments are based on a hypothetical rather than real scenario. This carries two problems; that participants may feel differently when they face implementation issues for a real test, and that responses may well differ according to how accurate the test is (this was prominently raised by practitioners in this study, and indeed some histopathologists declined to participate because they lacked information about the test). Second, the authors make an explicit choice to focus on implementation issues. However, most of the prognostication literature raises ethical issues around whether the test should be used at all and safeguards against potential harm if it is used. Highly accurate prognostic testing in Huntington’s disease and uveal melanoma has shown that a prognosis of reduced life expectancy is associated with potential psychological harm for patients or at least regret that they chose prognostic testing. The implications for this current test are unclear because its accuracy is not yet known, but despite ethical issues being prominent in the literature they are not acknowledged in this paper. I think that, before implementation issues are considered, there is a need to acknowledge ethical issues associated with prognostication, to argue that the test is ethically justifiable and to discuss safeguards in both making the offer of the test and helping patients to deal with the consequences. In sum, I find the paper to be lacking in important areas and cannot yet see its place in the prognostication literature. I imagine that these problems can be remediated with the data available to the researchers (although the analysis may need to move into areas not covered by the TDF) and by linking the paper more explicitly to the prognostication literature. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Health professional and patient views of a novel prognostic test for melanoma: a theoretically informed qualitative study PONE-D-21-25124R1 Dear Dr. Lecouturier, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. Please also discuss the first reviewer's suggestions with your team and edit the manuscript according to the outcome of your discussion. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. 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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the amendments. I have some comments: Suggest "prediction of prognosis" be replaced by either "prognosis" or "prognostication". Probably simply "prognosis". Line 112: "current" should be "currently" (or remove the following "the") I think the references to line numbers has gotten off kilter. "At the time of the present study the novel test described within our manuscript was undergoing further clinical validation. The test was not being used in any of the hospital trusts where the interviewees were based. If interviewees had prior knowledge of the novel test this was likely to be from a presentation given by one of the co-authors, about the development of the test at national/international meetings (including the British Society for Investigative Dermatology and Melanoma Focus) or from the paper published paper detailing results of the test in discovery cohorts of AJCC stage I melanoma (Ellis et al 2020) a reference included in the present manuscript. We have reinforced this within the manuscript (LINES 261-63)." - I recommend that it be stated in the text that "At the time of the present study the novel test described within our manuscript was undergoing further clinical validation" "underpinning the lack for any additional clinical procedures required for the patient." - Suggest "highlighting" or "emphasising" rather than "underpinning" here. "We have added a description of the test in the main body of the manuscript (LINES 130-40)." - I think perhaps this could be rephrased to avoid the implication that it was ever considered that non-melanomas. Perhaps "In accordance with the intended use, one other suggestion was to..." "We have expanded upon this [sampling bias] in the Limitations section (LINES 602-8). - I suggest it be specified that this phenomenon would likely have caused a bias of positive sentiment. "The ethics committee agreed this procedure." Missing a "to" Figure 3 still seems not totally clear to me. I believe a strong case could be made that it not be included, as the description in the text is adequate. Nevertheless, it would seem to me to be more intuitive that, as portrayed, the novel test and then its outcomes sit at the beginning of the flowchart, and then the implications that follow on from the results are represented downstream of those results in a stepwise, one-way manner. As I understand it, the "Changes to follow up pathway" are in fact the "Fast track mechanisms", and hence these should be represented within the same cell, such as "Changes to follow up pathway (fast track mechanisms") Similarly, "Patient responsibility for self-surveillance" and "Augmented self-surveillance guidance & consolidated contact information" refer to things that occur at the same step in the pathway and should be represented in the same cell. Perhaps "Augmented self-surveillance guidance and patient responsibility for self-surveillance, with consolidated contact information". It would also seem more intuitive to me that the arrows point towards the right. Reviewer #2: The authors have adequately addressed the comments I've raised up. I have not further comments or suggestions to provide them. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr. Marco Miniotti |
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PONE-D-21-25124R1 Health professional and patient views of a novel prognostic test for melanoma: a theoretically informed qualitative study Dear Dr. Lecouturier: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof Nikolas K. Haass Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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