Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 13, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-01299A cost analysis of implementing mobile-health facilitated tuberculosis contact investigation in a low income settingPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Davis, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers and editors comments are below. Please submit your revised manuscript by December 17, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Limakatso Lebina, MBChB Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): We apologies for delays in providing feedback. It was not easy to find appropriate reviewers and those agreed to review requested additional time. Please also address the following to improve clarity and flow of the manuscript 1. Provide a clear description of the program, and indicate which activities were done in the clinics, and which ones were part of the community initiative and why. 2. The cost calculations are said to be done from the health system perspective, yet waiting times and travel costs for patients have been included. Please separate the health system costs and the patient costs. 3. Capital costs for the overall TB treatment have also been included, however this was an add on program, TB services costs were already incurred, it would be more important to the policy makers to understand the additional costs that will be required to include the mHealth component. 4. There is no information on the messages that were sent and the associated costs of sending the messages. 5. It appears that the research related costs such as patient enrolment and program evaluation have been included in the costing, as indicated above, policy makers would be more interested in the additional costs of implementing the program Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We note that the grant information you provided in the ‘Funding Information’ and ‘Financial Disclosure’ sections do not match. When you resubmit, please ensure that you provide the correct grant numbers for the awards you received for your study in the ‘Funding Information’ section. 3. 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J Eval Clin Pract. 2009, 15: 451-459. 10.1111/j.1365-2753.2008.01033.x. Reviewer #2: Specific feedback to the Author: Abstract Introduction: Mobile health (mHealth) applications may improve timely access to health services and improve patient-provider communication but may be costly to implement, especially in resource-limited settings. This statement does not quite reflect the rationale for the study. Suggest changing to reflect that development/ upfront investment in m- interventions maybe resource intensive. - The authors need to provide a clear aim/ research question in their abstract that aligns with the title and accurately represents the intervention. In the abstract, the authors state: We assessed the cost of development and execution of an mHealth-based program for contact investigation of tuberculosis (TB) in Kampala, Uganda however, this program has a m-health component alongside face to face intervention (i.e., community Health Worker (CHW)-led home-based specimen collection) therefore the authors should continue to refer to this program as a mobile-health facilitated tuberculosis contact investigation as the m-health is only one component of the intervention. - Suggest changing reference to ‘ingredients based’ to ‘components based’ or ‘micro-costing’ approach. - The authors have not provided the time-horizon of the study in the abstract. The time horizon for the cost analysis will impact the results reported and therefore, should be reported here in the abstract also. - Conclusion- the statement ‘the cost of mHealth-facilitated contact investigation for TB was high ‘is not fully substantiated. High in what context? Over a one- year time horizon? Most technologies would not be developed for just one year of use. Suggest editing this sentence to align with the sentiment noted in the discussion i.e, that while they have high upfront development costs, they become more efficient with time, scale/coverage and the prevalence of TB in the community. Introduction (main body of paper) - With more than 10 million newly reported cases and 1.6 million deaths in 2018, tuberculosis (TB) is the leading global infectious disease cause of mortality (1). This refers to cases in 2018. Is TB still the leading global infectious disease cause of mortality in 2021? Edit wording to reflect that it is still the case in 2021. - CI should be in parenthesis. - However, barriers to acceptance and completion, operational complexities and resource constraints have limited wide adoption of CI in resource-limited setting – back this up with references please. - It is unclear whether the authors have sufficiently summarised all relevant background literature. What were the results of the efficacy trial? The reference Davis et al, 2019 concluded that Home-based, SMS-facilitated evaluation did not improve completion or yield of household TB contact investigation, likely due to challenges delivering the intervention components. This needs to be reported as it is relevant to this study. - Also, what is the breadth of the literature in this space too? Are there any other comparable costing /cost-effectiveness studies? As with many other interventions utilizing mobile health (mHealth) platforms, however, mHealth-facilitated CI for TB requires substantial up-front resource outlays to establish the necessary infrastructure (9,10) . Reference 10 - Htet KKK, Liabsuetrakul T, Thein S, evaluates an intervention appeared to not have an M-health component? so can this reference support this statement? - The authors state we conducted a comprehensive assessment of the costs of development, implementation, and operation of mHealthfacilitated, patient-centered CI for TB in Kampala, Uganda. The rationale for a partial cost analysis (and not a full cost-effectiveness analysis) is not quite clear at this point. Setting: - Suggest using the word implementation instead of execution. Implementation is more widely accepted terminology. Figure 1- information in Figure 1 is not readable. Please re- do this figure so that all content can be read. Estimates of program development costs and program execution costs: - These sections provide clear information of methods but do need to align closely with the headings in the supplementary tables and should at least explain the phases so that the reader understands this without needing to go to the supplementary tables. Perhaps set out in the phases? - Be clear how much of the overhead building costs are being apportioned to this intervention- I imagine those costs are being apportioned to many other interventions/ programs in reality? - As you are only costing this arm of the original trial, it is important that all costs are associated in some way to the m-health component, otherwise what is being described may be more reflective of the cost of a tuberculosis contact investigation program generally rather than the addition of m-health. Supplementary table 1: - Supplementary table 1 has many acronyms that are not described. Please add a key providing description of all acronyms. Figure 2 needs to explain somewhere what the contact positivity rate is (i.e., what makes up this rate?) Analysis: - This section is clear. Sensitivity analysis: - Inclusion of extended time horizon is appropriate as m-health technology usually would continue to be useful for a number of years not just 1 year as per the trial so this is good to see. - Testing coverage/scale is also important as m-health likely works on economies of scale to offset the initial investment or sunk costs. The prevalence of disease clearly impacts here as well. - These SA’s are important for interpreting results. Discussion section: The discussion section does summarise key study findings and describes how they support conclusions however a couple of things: - In relation to the statement ‘Specifically, we found that 76% of the total cost of the program was incurred during development, before the enrollment of a single participant’. This is often the case with investment in new technologies. It would be good to note this fact with reference to the broader literature. - All other sections of the discussion are good including the section on limitations of the study which is comprehensive. Conclusion marries up with the discussion. References Please check that all references are using the standard PLOS style. There seems to be some variation in style. Reference 1 for example has fully capitalised title and states world health organ. This needs editing. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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A cost analysis of implementing mobile-health facilitated tuberculosis contact investigation in a low-income setting PONE-D-21-01299R1 Dear Dr. J. Lucian Davis, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Limakatso Lebina, MBChB, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): You have been able to address all comments in the revised manauscript. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-01299R1 A cost analysis of implementing mobile health facilitated tuberculosis contact investigation in a low-income setting Dear Dr. Davis: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Limakatso Lebina Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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