Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 18, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-36596Large-scale design and refinement of stable proteins using sequence-only modelsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Singer, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As all three reviewers praised the quality of the work presented in this manuscript, they only suggested minor corrections, especially the interpretation of the R2 values obtained with the sequence-only model. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 11 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Some of the amino acid sequences (Corpus A, Libraries 1 and 2) and some of the stability scores (Corpus A, Library 1) have been previously published, as detailed in Figure S5.] Please clarify whether this publication was peer-reviewed and formally published. If this work was previously peer-reviewed and published, in the cover letter please provide the reason that this work does not constitute dual publication and should be included in the current manuscript. 5. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This reviewer very much enjoyed reading the manuscript by Jedediah, Singer, Baker, et al., which is an interesting work regarding the prediction of protein stability based only on its amino acid sequence. The authors used a home-made convolutional neural network model. Accordingly, they combined a previously constructed parallel oligo library synthesis, yeast surface display and next-generation sequencing to generate very large datasets. In order to evaluate the performance of this model, 5 out of the 8 monomeric/oligomeric designs were predicted to be thermostable, and 4 do not unfold even at a temperature of 99°C. The authors succeeded in their challenging endeavor, thereby providing a new methodology to predicting protein stability using only sequences as input. Apparently, the authors have made acceptable responses in an earlier submission. I suggest that this manuscript can be suitable for Plos One after addressing the following concerns: 1. I noticed that the regression R2 (goodness-of-fit) values are pretty low (e.g. 0.38, 0.48, etc) when predicting stability with a sequence-only model. Is it reasonable? Can the authors provide some references or experimental details to demonstrate that these R2 values are actually acceptable? 2. The authors employed trRosetta to predict the structure that they obtained from their designs, and found that it displays good accuracy with the solved X-ray structure (ca. RMSD of 3.7 A). However, it would be even more interesting if the authors were to use RoseTTAFold or Alphafold2 for the predictions and provide a comparison of the accuracy. I do not expect that this will take too much time. 3. Line 117, add “as” before the Evaluator Model. 4. Since this article can be viewed as another advance in merging rational design and directed enzyme evolution, the recent review of methodology development by G. Qu, et al could be added (Angew. Chem. Int. Ed. 2020, 59, 13204-13231). Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents a comprehensive study that combines interestingly in vitro and in silico experiments as an attempt to primarily develop a data-driven paradigm to assess the stability of small proteins. This article comprises two contributions the one related to the prediction of stability and the other one that is related to generating primary sequences of novel stable proteins from secondary sequences. In my turn, I would like to thank the three reviewers from PLoS CB for their thorough reviews; authors were able – to some extent - to address/answer their main concerns. In short, the manuscript does fulfill the requirements of this journal and I would recommend it. I still have some minor concerns authors may take into consideration: The abstract does not reflect the whole picture. In vitro experiments that constitute the inputs to the machine learning models are not mentioned at all. In the same context, once the information aforementioned is included, authors also may want to mention how stability is measured. I believe a couple of additional sentences – as long as it does not exceed the limit of words – would make the abstract – to some context - more comprehensive and more reflective to the extensive study readers are about to explore. The only piece of information that describes a ‘supposed short literature review’ on in vitro stability experiments is found in lines 54-55: “This presents a particular problem for modeling protein stability because, historically, experimental measurements of stability have been laborious” without even any reference. In lines 125-128 authors first used r2 (Person correlation coefficient) then introduced R2 (coefficient of determination) by relying on a fact “R2 is more stringent than r2 because it does not assume a linear regression of model predictions onto data and can be negative when the model performs worse than simply predicting the sample mean.”. I simply may not agree with that! the ‘default’ metric to be used when dealing with the question: “How well the predicted values match?” is definitely R2. Consequently, this is the first choice in this regard that should be mentioned without even explaining the reason behind using it. However, Pearson’s is ‘almost’ useless when quantifying a model performance. Accordingly, authors are asked to explain the added value of involving Pearson’s they are expecting. In the same context, I have same comments in Figure 2 (where r2 is mentioned and not R2). What about table I? can both values (experimentally measured melting temperatures And antilogs of stability scores) be compared value-to-value, i.e. the same range as in figure 2? If the answer is positive them R2 is used, otherwise the Pearson’s is correct, however, a short explanation is to be added in this regard. In the same context, authors described the results of Table I as “modest correlation”. With such values of p-value isn’t “modest” a bit an exaggerated description? In lines 300-301, authors explain why cysteine was excluded from the library by stating that “stability assay is incompatible with disulfide bonds”. I see that such a crucial point in the whole study deserves more elaboration. Reviewer #3: The manuscript presents a machine learning system supporting prediction of a protein stability, which could be used for evaluation of the stability upon introduced mutations or for designing a synthetic stable protein. Within the manuscript, the authors included comments from previously invited 3 referees and the rebuttal. This is a very unusual, though a very recommendable practice, which allows following the history of the manuscript and avoiding raising the same issues. The manuscript is well written, the study presented in detail. Not only did it present the computational model but also evaluated it with newly expressed proteins. Although I agree with some of the criticisms raised by previous reviewers, but I understand that the authors are not able to fix all the issues within this concept. In general, I think the manuscript is worth publishing in PLOS One. I would, however, raise a few other issues which bothered me while reading: 1) I have not found any information on availability of the software 2) References seem a bit outdated, especially I have not found any discussion with regard to more general methods for modeling proteins. Although I understand that they have a different goal but (see below) 3) With regard to the release of very accurate tool Alpha Fold 2, I am wondering if such general tools could not be very useful for predicting protein stability. For example, based on the deviation of modeled structure and general (secondary structure) assumptions for the modeled protein. Please discuss. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Large-scale design and refinement of stable proteins using sequence-only models PONE-D-21-36596R1 Dear Dr. Singer, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have responded very well regarding my questions and those of the other reviewers. Rapid publication is recommended. Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing my comments and suggestions. I have no further suggestions/comments/corrections. Reviewer #3: The authors responded to all issues raised in the review. I am satisfied with the current submission and recommend it for publication in PLOS One. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-21-36596R1 Large-scale design and refinement of stable proteins using sequence-only models Dear Dr. Singer: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Jean-Christophe Nebel Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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