Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 1, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-38063Future prevalence of type 2 diabetes – a comparative analysis of chronic disease projection methodsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Voeltz, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 03 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Referee Report on the manuscript "Future prevalence of type 2 diabetes a comparative analysis of chronic disease projection methods" submitted by Dina Voeltz. The author studies 3 differents models in order to project the number of males with T2D in Germany in 2040. The first method is a model based on a simple formula to compute the age- and sex-specific prevalence p(t,a) and then to predict the futur number of cases I(t,a) including an age-,sex- and time-dependent population projections provided by the German FSO.I would like to ask the authors to rewrite this last reference by FSO in References section. The second method is a two-step multistate model and this method refines the above first method by incorporating a relation between prevalence p(t,a), incidence IR(t,a) and mortality given by a ratio. The third method is different and based on a two-dimensional simple PDE model builds upon a multistate model that allow individuals to move between states. In the simulation the authors perform a sensitivity analysis and i recommand the authors to bring together the sections Sensitivity analysis at page 11 and Sensitivity analyses at page 14 of the paper. I believe that the results stated in the paper are correct so that i can recommend the publication of this paper. Without having time to manipulate the R-codes, i believe that the results stated in the paper are correct so that i can recommend the publication of this paper. Reviewer #2: The aim of the paper is clearly motivated, as authors want to introduce and compare different methods for the estimation of the number of people with diagnosed type 2 diabetes (T2D) in Germany in 2040. Method 1 is a commonly and simply approach assuming a constant age-specific prevalence, whereas Methods 2 and 3 are taking into account the incidence of T2D and mortality rates by using partial differential equations. An important gap is clearly noticeable between method 1 and methods 2 and 3 for which the future number of T2D case is higher. It appears to be essential to include temporal trends in incidence rate and mortality rate ratio for a better projection. COMMENTS 1) In equation 6), please define what exactly is the notation p hat. 2) Line 257, I guess that number 28 refers to the citation [28]. Please use the correct notation for citing this reference. 3) On the description of “S1 Fig. Comparing T2D prevalence projections”, line 471, the projected age-specific prevalence is supposed to be in 2015, 2020, 2030 and 2040. However, on the specific figure, the year 2010 appears instead of 2015. Same remark for the figure and the text in the "supporting information 1" document. Make sure that the title and the figure are corrected related to the attached explanations. 4) On this same "S1 Fig. Comparing T2D prevalence projections", how can you explain the difference of method 2 with respect to Methods 1 and 3 for the 2010 results? Indeed, it seems that methods 1 and 3 fit pretty well together in 2010, unlike method 2. It should be discussed, in comparison to the other years where methods 2 and 3 better fit together unlike method 1. 5) On "S2 Fig. Projected prevalence across future population variants", there is no explanation on the choice of the different variants studied. Only B1L2M1 is described at the beginning of the article. A quick mention of the other variants studied (e.g. why have chosen these ones especially?) in the figure could be wise for the convenience of the reader non familiar with this kind of chronic disease. Reviewer #3: This manuscript deals with a comparative analysis of different methods of projection of the prevalence of chronic diseases. In this manuscript, it is a comparison of 3 already published methods so I will not go into the details of the methods but just propose some additional discussion points. The first approaches, even if it is used in a "natural" way by epidemiologists, is undoubtedly the least "reliable" if one does not have homogeneity of many factors in time (incidence, composition of the population,...) especially if one projects far from the observed data. It's still a good thing to have compared the two other to this one because it is often chosen. But may be it could have been made even clearer, in the discussion part, in which context the first method can be used. I would add to the advantages of not choosing it the fact of not being able to easily calculate other epidemiological indicators. A small criticism of this paper is that it does not mention the possibility, and the interest, of being able to calculate other indicators (life expectancy, healthy or sick, lifetime risk of a chronic disease, average age of onset of the disease, expectation of the age of onset of the disease, ...) and to focus only on prevalence. Indeed, we can see in other papers (see Wanneveich et al 2018 for example) that sometimes health actions may not decrease the prevalence (or even increase it) simply by increasing life expectancy but also by increasing the age of onset of the disease... Indeed, in addition, the possibility of modelling interventions or changes in the prevalence of risk factors is also a major point to take into account. Another point, possibly to be discussed or added as information, is that the approach presented here with an IDM is not the only one that has been proposed and published using an IDM (example Jacqmin-Gadda et al 2013). And therefore the results of the simulations presented are only relative to one particular approach using an IDM. It would have been interesting (but this is certainly beyond the scope of this article) to be able to compare different approach using IDM between them. Jacqmin-Gadda, H., Alperovitch, A., Montlahuc, C., Commenges, D., Leffondre, K., Dufouil, C., ... & Joly, P. (2013). 20-Year prevalence projections for dementia and impact of preventive policy about risk factors. European journal of epidemiology, 28(6), 493-502. Wanneveich, M., Jacqmin-Gadda, H., Dartigues, J. F., & Joly, P. (2018). Impact of intervention targeting risk factors on chronic disease burden. Statistical methods in medical research, 27(2), 414-427 ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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