Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 22, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-25691Long-term safety and efficacy of ferric citrate in phosphate-lowering and iron-repletion effects among patients with on hemodialysis: a multicenter, open-label, Phase IV trialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. TARNG Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 10 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Lee et al. examined the long-term safety and efficacy of ferric citrate in patients undergoing hemodialysis. They showed that ferric citrate efficaciously and safely decreased serum phosphate levels in a prospective, multi-center, open-label, one-year study. There are a lot of previous studies showing that ferric citrate efficaciously and safely decreased serum phosphate levels. However, many of them have not been cited in this manuscript. The novelty of the present study is questionable. As described in the Methods section, 5.9% of patients had taken ferric citrate prior to the study. These patients were very low risk of adverse events in the study period. The study has been biased on this point. In the Discussion section, the authors described that “the safety and efficacy analyses are limited to 12 months of treatment; therefore, the conclusions of this study can only be limited within this time frame” as a limitation of this study. Regarding this point, a 3-year retrospective study (Yoshida et al., Int Urol Nephrol, 2021) has been reported recently. Please correct the style of references. Multiple names of adverse events have been written using the capital letters. What do they mean? Reviewer #2: Phosphate binders and iron supplementation are a part of the basic treatment of HD patients. Phosphate binders bind phosphorus in the gut and prevent their absorption. Iron based phosphate binders are a new line of treatment. In HD patients iron deficiency is usually treated by intravenous route since oral route in HD patients is not efficacious and poorly tolerated. At the present time there are 2 classes of iron-based phosphate binders: sucroferric oxhydroxide and ferric citrate. Both are effective in the treatment of hyperphosphatemia. Sucroferric oxhydroxid is poorly absorbed in the gut functioning as a real binder, while ferric citrate is absorbed in the gut also improving iron parameters. Ferric citrate shows a dual functionality controlling serum phosphate and increasing ferritin levels and transferrin saturation. This effect on iron parameters is not observed with sucroferric oxhydroxide. This study is a 12-month phase IV, multicenter, open-label study that has enrolled 202 patients. It has verified that ferric citrate is effective as phosphate binder but also improved iron parameters (ferritin and TSAT). This effect was only found in patients with low Ferritin levels (≤500 ng/mL) an TSAT (<30%) at baseline. We have at present 2 iron-based phosphate binders with different properties regarding iron supplementation that may be taken in consideration based on the iron state of the patient. Ferric citrate is an interesting option for treating both hyperphosphatemia and anemia. It improved hemoglobin levels, TSAT and ferritin with a reduced need for erythropoiesis stimulating agents and intravenous iron. Diarrhea was the most common adverse reaction. Phosphate binding is a chronic treatment. Is there a need for surveillance of iron overload in patients treated with Ferric Citrate? What are the mechanisms that avoid iron absorption with sucoferric oxhydroxide? What are the mechanisms that explain the amelioration of iron parameters only in the patients with low ferritin levels and low transferrin saturation? Reviewer #3: The primary objective of this 12-month, Phase IV, multicenter, open-label study is to explore the long-term safety and efficacy of ferric citrate in hemodialysis patients in Taiwan, and further evaluate the iron repletion effect and change of iron parameters by different baseline groups. Although this is an interesting study, there are several major trial design and statistical concerns. Critiques 1. The Abstract should only report the primary and secondary pre-determined endpoints in the protocol or https://clinicaltrials.gov/ct2/show/NCT03256838, i.e., number of subjects with treatment-emergent adverse events (TEAEs), percentage of subjects with treatment-emergent adverse events (TEAEs), and serum phosphorus. Please clearly state which of these are the primary and secondary endpoints. The rest of the analyses should be exploratory, and the results from these analyses should not be included in the Abstract. 2. Please provide either the power analysis or precision analysis in the revised manuscript. In the power analysis, please clearly specify the hypothesis, type I error (one or two-sided), study power, clinical significance level with justification, and the statistical method for determining the study sample size. 3. The authors used the paired t-test to examine the trend effect. Please use the mixed effects model to examine the trend effect because each subject has multiple measurements. The mixed effects model should also adjust for confounding variables. Please provide a detailed multivariable data analysis plan in the revised manuscript that includes (1) model assumptions checking, (2) model performance evaluation, (3) the strategy of handling non-linear terms, (4) the methods of analyzing the missing data, and (5) the method of analyzing interaction terms. 4. All the conclusions, e.g., “the iron-repletion by ferric citrate is effective and gradual, and the increase is limited in patients with a higher baseline,” should be supported by statistical tests with 95% confidence intervals. 5. The authors should conduct a sensitivity analysis for 117 subjects (57.9%) who had completed all the scheduled ferric citrate treatment for 12 months. 6. The authors should discuss the similarities or differences in the results and baseline distributions between this Phase IV trial and previously published Phase III trials. 7. All the tables should include the sample size. 8. Please add the original trial protocol to the Supplemental Information section. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Teresa Adragao Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Long-term safety and efficacy of ferric citrate in phosphate-lowering and iron-repletion effects among patients with on hemodialysis: a multicenter, open-label, Phase IV trial PONE-D-21-25691R1 Dear Dr. Der-Cherng Tarng We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have answered to my questions in a satisfactory way. Ferric citrate is an interesting option for treating both hyperphosphatemia and anemia. Reviewer #3: The authors have responded well to the statistical issues raised in the previous review. There is no further statistical concern about this revised manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Teresa Adragao Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-21-25691R1 Long-term safety and efficacy of ferric citrate in phosphate-lowering and iron-repletion effects among patients with on hemodialysis: a multicenter, open-label, Phase IV trial Dear Dr. Tarng: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Pasqual Barretti Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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